After Transmigrating and Being Reborn, I Took on a Different Disciple

On the surface, Li is the protagonist, but actually Wu is, and Li is just Wu's background. I have been writing about Wu, and how good-looking Wu is. Li's friend just met Wu and was very fond of him, even moved by him, because Wu was dissatisfied with Li. Li was so miserable because of Wu's sister in his last life, can he still not be able to get rid of their brother and sister in this life?

The early part of the article goes by relatively quickly. The author has relatively few inner descriptions or other descriptions of the protagonist in the article, which is a bit like a plot. But the plot is very good and interesting. The author does not describe the protagonist's temperament too much. Instead, he unknowingly outlines the protagonist's image in the readers' minds based on the protagonist's attitude towards the incident and other people's opinions of the protagonist. This novel will not pay too much attention to some bloody plot. The plot is bland and not too exciting, but it is like a delicious home-cooked cabbage, plain yet exciting and delicious. You can try it. (Disclaimer: The author is probably a novice, so the writing style may be a bit lacking, and there is no very ups and downs or climaxes and cool descriptions)

After time travel and rebirth, I changed my apprentice Bai Sheng of Qingqiu Palace Book introduction Iv1, double cleansing, cultivating immortals, double strong, double male protagonists Gentle on the outside and cold on the inside v Cold on the outside and gentle on the inside On the way to report, Li Qiuchen died in order to save people. Once he traveled to the world of cultivation, he became the only disciple of a master swordsman. The boss has been a wild and unrestrained lover of Baishan all his life. As his only younger brother, Li Qiuchen also loves Baiyou very much. For the sake of freedom, he also decided to take on an apprentice. As a result, he was given a sword by his apprentice and was reborn directly. Okay, since you don't like practicing swordsmanship, then I'll accept the most beautiful woman. The number one beauty is a man, but that's not a big problem, he's good-looking! The beauty's apprentice is even more beautiful when practicing swordsmanship, every move is like dancing, it's simply a feast for the eyes. The beautiful apprentice is well-behaved and obedient, and is simply the best apprentice in the entire cultivation world. It would be better if I could stay further away from him. In addition to men and women not being intimate, men are also not being intimate! Ps: The author is not a blind person. If you have any questions, you can feel free to say anything. Just point it at the author directly. Don't talk about my writing. That's the level of it. If the writing is not good, it's not the writing's fault, it's the author's fault. If you don't like it, you can just cancel it. You just read the article to have fun. I hope everyone can find the article they like." Two male protagonists travel through Shuangjie ancient Ivl pure love

I give it 5 points because it is not 4 and a half points. The overall feeling is very good, but there is something missing. I see that the story is relatively bland now, and it feels like a long daily article. There are no outstanding points at the moment. The content is novel, but the plot line is slow and the writing style is okay. Please do the author to update [Note]

Occasionally read books in other styles, and when you are tired, you can read this home-cooked side dish ๑v๑ Daily life is ordinary, there are no slap-in-the-face plots or anything like that, which is pretty good! If you like the leisure and retirement style, I strongly recommend [send heart][send heart][send heart]

Tell me the year is up and down [cry][cry][cry][cry]

1.013 Million words, ten months, it feels like a year, it's really not easy. This seems to be the first million-word novel with two male protagonists that I have read. I can feel that the author's journey has not been easy. I am very grateful to the author for bringing such a wonderful work. The characters and background settings of this book are very interesting. When you think about it, it seems that the plot mainly revolves around Qiuchen, the developing relationship between Xiaobai and Xiaoya, interspersed with various other people's short plots. Seeing the appearance of this world of immortality, Jian Zong this How many of the people in this large sect who "lived their whole lives with a sword" will be so popular in the end [laughing], what will happen to the Hehuan sect leader Yang Xueshuang and the wife-chasing elf in the end [thinking], and where did Qiuchen's master go to play [angry], in the devil Ye Bufan of the clan must be extraordinary. Will he find out that he has been exposed? Will he be able to go home or "home" in the end? Although it makes me a little angry when I watch it, I still hope that Xiaoya can find what she really wants. And will Qiu Chen survive the catastrophe? I will go back to modern times. I think I will definitely bring a big family. What a good guy, I traveled back through time and came back with a wife and children. [I learned]. There are many people and many things to do. I still have to slowly reflect on it. Finally, Xiaobai, you are so versatile and capable that you can do it alone. Xiaobai: I am where the master is. Finally, I wish the author a happy life and all his wishes come true. Hehe, the author's writing skills have improved as can be seen from the back of this book. I'm destined to see you in the next book!

It's very interesting, but Wu Shengya has been online for too long. She killed the protagonist in her last life. If she doesn't kill her directly in this life, what else can she do? She has been online for more than a hundred chapters and has not yet been offline.

The foreshadowing is relatively long, but the description is very detailed. I look forward to the relationship between the master and the apprentice later. Hehe, I am no different from the senior sisters in Piaomiao Peak. I just like to see the master and apprentice get along. The author will not be able to satisfy even this small request [I'm about to cry]. Update faster and clear your inventory.

The plot is okay, but the writing needs to be improved. It is recommended to mark the main visual and sexual orientation. The author who listens to advice is also good in writing.