Sending Clones to Ye Luoli? I'm Just Here for the Laughs

Let me state in advance that this book review was written after I read Chapter 135 (there is no after because I couldn't read any more), so I only express my feelings up to Chapter 135 here (there will be a reversal after Chapter 135, which will be discussed separately) First, let's talk about some of the good things about this book so far: the heroine has her own ideas and is very resourceful. The pacing is well controlled, and there are some cool moments that are all in place. The original characters are well created, among which my favorites are the forging fairy Duan Lingyi and the moon master Yue Heng. I think Duan Lingyi's portrayal is really good. Different from most fairies in Wonderland, she has a bold style and although she has calculations about others, sincerity most of the time outweighs interests. The love triangle between her and the Fire Lord and the Golden Prince is the main reason why I watched it now, because every time you see an emotional scene between the three of them, you will think: "Oh my god!! This is so awesome!!!" Even if you know that this is a conspiracy, Duan Lingyi will even withdraw directly without even a trace of nostalgia, and you will feel: at least the years they were together existed, at least Duan Lingyi really rescued the golden prince. The tacit understanding and companionship between them is real, and that long confession is enough to make the calculations in this relationship and the upcoming separation less painful. Although Yue Heng, the Lord of the Moon, did not have much time to control the empire, he really took on the responsibility of the word "king" and performed the role quite well. He corrects mistakes when he finds them, has the courage to reform, is tolerant of his people, and is generous and courteous to others. He has most of the conditions that a wise king should have. He is a true king of fairies. After praise comes criticism (containing certain subjective opinions) Some characters are a bit OOC, and there are too many private settings that change the world view. Many times, it feels like they are forcibly smearing and maximizing malice to fit the title. It is really written purely for the dark protagonist. First of all, the most serious one, which is also an important thing that promoted the development of the early plot, is the exploitation among fairies (I, Ye Luoli, have watched all 10 seasons except those six episodes, and I plan to wait until the 11th season is finished before watching it) Maybe the time span is a bit long (I watched it five years inland, but I still remember the general plot), but I really didn't see the kind of exploitation among fairies (not counting Mandora in the early days). Could it be because my eyes have always been on the protagonists? Or was it reflected sideways in the plot when I wasn't paying attention? The fairyland described by the author really does not feel like a fairyland at all, but instead depicts human society. There are also some people who feel that OOC is too serious, and they specifically name Peacock and Luo Li (Jasmine also has them, but they don't hate them that much). Peacock did have a arrogant side when she first appeared, but based on Peacock's character background, she would never say that she borrowed things from ordinary fairies and refused to return them, and she also had a somewhat domineering temperament (The author please don't say that I didn't write it in time. The article was published in 2024. Peacock's inner inferiority complex was reflected before the ninth season in 2022, and it is no different from the direct explosion after that) Luo Li gives people the impression that it is completely inconsistent with her identity as a loving fairy, and more of what the public thinks a bad princess should have. Arrogant, not taking others seriously, living a arrogant life, having small thoughts but no great wisdom, really just being black for the sake of being black. I'm not the main character, on the contrary, I don't like the main character. Xin Ling's forgetfulness of origin and turning a blind eye to the plight of Wonderland, Luo Li's wanton behavior, and Bai Guangying's speechless operation. . . . You can criticize them and say that they have a holy heart, are unreasonable, a bad person, a love brain, etc., But you can't deny that they do have things that make people feel bright (of course, these things are instantly dim compared to how they make people feel their blood pressure rises). At least Luo Li does have an enviable friendship with ordinary fairies like Liangcai and Jasmine in the plot. Peacock doesn't think she is superior to other fairies when she starts to pretend (she only thinks she is better-looking than them) After writing this, some people may say: If you feel uncomfortable, don't read it! ! ! But this book really attracted me, so I still insisted on reading it until now. However, due to some reasons, it was like a thorn in the throat, and I couldn't swallow it or spit it out, so I stopped reading. Therefore, I gave it 3 points instead of 1 point, because there are really good things about it. Overall, the writing is very good, but it's not suitable for me. I still recommend everyone to read it.

What a novel article. I re-excavated the animation "Ye Luoli" from my childhood, thought and analyzed it to fill in the logic, and then connected it together. Is it considered an alternative fairy tale background battle article? Not sure, but for now, it's worth a look. I don't know if the author will read it, but I'll give you my opinion. At present, the author's control of the rhythm is perfect, and the various forces in the vest are gradually gaining control of the say. However, this also means that there will definitely be major deviations in the plot in the future, otherwise I would be sorry for so much effort. This comparison tests the author's writing skills. Then there is the issue of the villain, which currently looks to be the royal family, a pure capitalist slave owner villain. But in the original work, the royal family has already declined. If they were to be villains, they would have to be recast as characters, which would be very troublesome. If you want the protagonist to become a villainous protagonist, then for now, the protagonist himself has too little motivation. The only one with a sense of mission is the Moon Master Vest. It just collects destiny energy, and it is difficult to quickly advance the plot. After all, it takes a long time. So I have to think about laying some foreshadowing, paving the way for the protagonist, etc., So that the subsequent writing will have some twists and turns. It's not impossible to have smooth sailing, but you have to consider many emotional lines. If you don't handle it well, it will be like the original CP, but with a different group of people. That's all for now, to summarize: Determine the protagonist's tendency and place the corresponding villain; Choose the direction of the plot, whether it is about emotion or confrontation; Finally, I can be sure of one thing —— The number of words is too few, the author has added a lot [shy]

It's very interesting, unlike most Ye Luoli fanfics, which help humans/fairies, or humans who are contracted by fairies/fairies who contract humans, it's very novel and interesting. The only shortcoming is that there are too few, and it's not enough to read.

Don't give me a rating. Well, I support the author very much. This novel is very well written [Love][Love][Love]. The subject matter is very novel and full of details. The relationship and way of getting along between the avatar and the main body is very warm. It is like a rich and harmonious family. The relationship is extremely close, very protective of each other and able to completely hand over each other's backs. The trust value and happiness are full. The development of the empire is also very exciting, exciting and exciting. I am very, very curious about how the empire will develop in the future. The protagonist is like the mastermind behind the scenes. How can he improve? After using them all, the force value increased sharply! ! ! As the saying goes, all fear comes from insufficient firepower*╭︎(˙º˙)╯︎* The reasons why I like this book: ①The lifestyle between the main body and the avatar is simply like a family that can shelter from wind and rain, not too warm at all. ②The creativity of the empire, I seem to see the shadow of China in the empire. As a patriotic person, I have an unexpected favorable impression of the empire. Watching this development, from being weak at the beginning to being strong now, I feel very excited. ③Secondly, I particularly like the character Yue Heng. He is cold, powerful and a bit sinister. There is a hint of unseriousness in the seriousness? He treats the Empire with all his sincerity, of course not only him, but also others, but I still like him more. He is also very gentle with Mandola and guides her very well! ! ! ④The settings of some of the little characters in the article are also very good, such as Qiluo and Xingduo. Don't underestimate these two little characters. They can directly sublimate the entire novel, allowing readers to see a more real and realistic life of the oppressed people at the lower levels. They make people feel sad but helpless (it is impossible to steal a cannonball and bomb it). They also establish a more perfect image for the empire and are the hope of the people at the bottom. I can't find anything else I like about it (ᗒᗩᗕ)՞ I really can't remember it, but it's well written and there are a lot of side descriptions. Hey, after saying so much, I don't know if it's right ૧(●´৺`●)૭ I hope the author will continue to update, and by the way: I will always support and keep my eyes on you <(￣ ￣)> Update There are too few articles, which is not enough to read (இωஇ). However, the prerequisite for updating articles is good health. Only when you are in good health can you hold a pen, otherwise it will affect your inspiration. If the speed of updating leads to a decrease in the quality of articles, then you should not go so fast. In addition, I would like to say: Happy New Year to everyone! ! ! The inspiration for the updated article is endless ╭(ᵔ_>ᵔ)╮Be happy every day and have no shortage of worries (me too!) Hiss, when I look back, I accidentally wrote so many words. (╯°Д°)╯ ┻━┻Shocked!!! Originally I just wanted to write a few simple sentences, hehe ε٩(๑> ₃ <)۶з Look! ! ! I finished this book in 12 hours of reading, and of course I must have read it several times (´◔‸◔`) Hope it doesn't stop updating! ! ! Absolutely not ≥o≤, it's not easy to find a book that I really like to read. It's really not easy to find a good book, especially the one about Ye Luoli (◢д◣) Oh yes, I forgot to mention, reading this book is like learning history. I am always bad at history. ಠ╭╮ಠ Is not bad, not bad, and I can also learn knowledge ( ᵒ̴̶̷̤໐ᵒ̴̶̷̤ )

This is the first Ye Luoli fanfic I have read seriously. The world view of the original work was somewhat attractive to me, but I couldn't stand the plot collapse, the ridiculous amount of romance, and the overly distinct characters of the protagonist and supporting cast. I didn't follow the show at all, I just watched a few weird videos. In my impression, the original work is comparable to Douluo Continent in its world of love brain and ignorance, and is even worse than Douluo in terms of logic... This book clarifies the story line, the storyline is detailed and appropriate, and the characters are well established. Whether it is the main characters, secondary characters or NPC passers-by, they all have their own stories, which can be logically justified. It further expands the world view through the analysis of the original work and reasonable second settings. It is indeed very interesting, even I, a man, can read it. The protagonist's stance is also wonderful, and the clones' white and black characters are also very interesting. There are just a few updates, but with this momentum the author should be able to finish telling the story, so I'll push for updates every day.

I finished it after not sleeping all night. It's really good! I rarely come across novels that are completely in line with my preferences. Basically, I just abandon them when I encounter something I don't like about halfway through. In my heart, this book is the best among all Ye Luoli! Highly recommended! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Send heart][Love][Love][Love][Love][Love][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS][KISS]

It's very interesting. It's written in a real world without much involvement in the plot. It's about the time when the love princess was just born.

To be honest, I really like some of the vests created by the author, and the characters are all very interesting! Especially Fluffy, they are simply adorable. These new settings are also very interesting. As for why it is not five stars, it may be because I think some characters are a bit OOC, but I know it may be because a villain needs to be created and someone needs to take on this role. Therefore, the character behavior of some original anime characters will be a bit far-fetched. But the main body is very good, each vest is very three-dimensional, the plot has ups and downs, some are sweet and some are sad. By the way, I find that most people's evaluations are too general and make this novel too perfect. In fact, I think there are still shortcomings, so I will avoid some minefields for some readers. I know that many people may not be able to stand the OOC characters in the original book, because the author added many new settings in this book. In order to make these settings and plot more reasonable, some changes had to be made to the personalities of some of the original characters to let them play negative roles. If you can't accept the big background changes, the OOC of some characters, and the removal of CP, then my suggestion is not to read it. This is a very novel theme, and the main plot is also about career development. The vests will have ambiguous relationships with the fairies, but these are all for a purpose. Friends who can't accept it are not recommended to watch it.

It's really good to watch. Machiavellianism and interests are the norm in the world. Only struggle and unity will make the world develop better. Let's take a look at this kind of plot from Ye Luoli's screenwriter. What is he writing? What was passed on? Is the author's fandom more in line with the development of the world? I like it! The author's book is beautiful! Please keep writing in the future!

So far, this book has not received a five-star rating. Its current rating is not high, just because there are too few updates and too few people have read it. Those of you who have discovered this book are blessed, it is definitely a treasure. The most important thing is that this book is logical. No matter what you do or what kind of language you use, it has a certain purpose, not because of the so-called blind impulse of love or emotion. It is gratifying to have strong individual abilities, but it is more difficult for a group to move forward, and this book truly achieves reform. He himself has a very fair and aboveboard goal to pursue, just like our revolutionary ancestors. What we do is just to live a better life. This is human nature. As long as the writing doesn't collapse, more people will definitely read it in the future. Although the character creation is already good now, there is still room for improvement. Through the advancement of some small events, the personality of the self-created character can be more reflected. In this way, the various settings of Ye Luoli's plot can be used as the background. The theme of self-created character vests can attract people who don't read Ye Luoli to read this fanfic, and there won't be any logical problems after reading it. In this case, it will attract more audiences. Of course, the best thing about this book is that its logic and IQ are online. This must not be lost. Adding a little bit of emotional drama, I really want to be friends with you, but you are tempted, what? I don't know, I'm completely innocent. I just want to be friends with you, why do you think so? Although it was promoted by the mastermind behind the scenes, he was innocent on the surface. It is this contrast that is the best. (I like ambiguity, single arrow is fine, so no cp is the best) Although I like to read the MJA text, the most important thing in the entire MJA text should be the main body. Although the main body does not appear frequently, it must be the most important! ! ! Ma Jia Wen cannot put the cart before the horse. Normally, the sense of presence can be low, but in important moments, the highlight of the body must be reflected. Of course, this is just my idea, I like this. (My personal preferences do not represent others) I personally think that when it comes to the creation of villains, only villains who are strong enough and smart enough can reflect the importance and strength of the heroine, so the creation of villains is also very important. So far, it is a very good book, with online logic, three-dimensional characters, and a very strong villain. There are also many characters who have not appeared, which is enough to make people look forward to it.