The Narrator System for a Martial Arts Journey

A radius of thirty miles was reduced to rubble, and it was enough to be the emperor with a smile on his face. In the book Swordsman, the protagonist can turn a thirty-mile radius into rubble when he fights with Dongfang Bubai. How come the more he practices, the more he stretches his hips? Jin Yong's first magical skill in the Taixuan Jing is actually not as good as Jiuyin. A big project like traveling through world planes requires the protagonist's physical body as fuel, which is far beyond the ability of a nuclear explosion? The more I read, the more disappointed I became. All kinds of nonsensical nonsense was added in the back, and the dialogues of the supporting characters also had to be written that were meaningless. In the front, I wrote that the protagonist established a path of self-centeredness. He pretended to be cold and started laughing at the same time. He even accepted a servant and showed no emotion.

The author should be an old monster in the system. There is no problem with logic, and the plot is also good. There is no trace of pretense, no garbage emotional lines, only a heart that asks the heavens. It is very good. I have already recommended it to all the novelists around me [blowing kiss]

Okay, the first and middle stages are more interesting, the protagonist has his own thoughts and views on things, and the growth line is relatively clear, but later on it is a bit boring for me. How should I put it, too dissociated. Of course, I know what the author wants to express, but it doesn't feel well integrated. But I like articles that have my own (reasonable) thinking about the plot. Even if some places are not completely consistent with my views, it doesn't matter. I hope the author will continue to work hard and exercise plot control. It will be better in the future. I am looking forward to it.

Shen Nong's Storytelling: After a lifetime of practice, I have become a motor oil. I change my body in each world. I have practiced in my previous life and transformed myself into energy to travel through the world. This point is more difficult to stretch, and the classics suppress the combat power. At least I saw that I had changed my body after traveling through two worlds, and I had become a motor oil in my previous life.

Sigh... I am satisfied with reading it, but it is still too short and there are too few updates, author! It's cool to have no cp, to become stronger wholeheartedly, and not to be dragged down by the personal affairs of children [OK][OK][OK][OK]

I have finished reading the first volume [Swordsman]. It is very well written. It is the best among the Swordsman fans I have read. As an aside, looking at other fans and film and television dramas, it is obvious that the Jianghu people in the Song Dynasty have a very close relationship with the imperial court. There is Qiao Feng, who left the Song Dynasty and returned to the Liao Kingdom and became the king of the South Academy.

It's worth appreciating. When I first read the introduction, I thought it was going to be some kind of heroine who couldn't compete with a time-traveling girl, which was a bit frustrating, but I didn't expect that I felt really comfortable after reading it. 1. The heroine is a lady, has the talent to attract attention, is smart and clever, can afford to take things on, and doesn't give the scumbag a chance. They are very knowledgeable and have an online IQ, so they will never suffer. 2. Jiang Yan, not much revealed, you will sigh after reading it 3. The writing is solid, the descriptions are detailed and vivid, and the beauty of ancient literature makes people feel comfortable. Yes, I am short of words and cannot describe it, but it is a very comfortable feeling. I think it's not a loss to invest in shares.

Why is it that the strength of the dungeon has not increased even though it has always been low martial arts → low martial arts → low martial arts?

After listening to 57 chapters, overall it's good. It's concise and the end is not lost, the intermittent plot is promoted efficiently, and the whole process is silky smooth. The only pity is that no one showed up at the end, which makes people feel that something is missing, empty, neither up nor down. There is no explanation, no one comes forward to show the saint, and there is no legend. For the author, it is really cool to pretend to be 13, but for the readers, it is a bit uncomfortable. It's like, a very good dish, full of color and flavor. Just after finishing it, I found a 2 mm maggot on the bottom of the dish. Even if you are not a reader, you probably can't feel it. If it is very popular, it will easily get angry and irritate the readers.

As far as the three volumes are concerned, they are considered high-quality in martial arts. They feel like they were written by an experienced hand. They are very organized and logical in handling things and practicing martial arts, and they are very smart! This is not a mindless article! Although it is a harem-less version, it is a solid martial arts novel. In addition, I hope it won't be a prehistoric one in the end [laughing and crying] The original martial arts ended up being a prehistoric one, which was so boring. Really, I think it would be good if it turned into a mythical Da Luo or the inner universe.