
My Online Romance with My Rival Crashed and Burned, and His Kiss Left Me Dazed
和情敌网恋翻车后,被他亲懵了
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- 1y ago
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It looks great and the writing is good! Can you use it to attack? A little aggrieved... I hope Xiao Lin is happy. He was born with the expectation of his parents... He was named Lindu and Miaomiao because of lack of water in his name. His parents must be very gentle people. It's a pity that he had a bad fate. Xiaolin is very strong and a top student. He's awesome (Kiss kiss(.ω.)ノ♡) Nowadays, I am a little less fond of Da Geng, and I like Xiao Lin more for the time being. If Gong were there, his family would not be happy, but it is a pity that he was deceived out of his feelings. The method is a bit extreme, but it is quite in line with Gong's mentality. But a little proud... Xiao Lin has too low self-esteem. But it all has to do with the environment in which it grows. In a word, the character descriptions are detailed and vivid. Thank you to the author for writing!
It's worth reading. If you're interested in reading the introduction, you can read it. There are discussions about disapproval of Shou's character or behavior (for example, if Shou deceives her through online dating first, then she deserves whatever happens later), but in the novel, it's completely understandable from Shou's point of view, and it's reasonable to refuse to read it. After all, in reality, a good person would seduce the person he likes.
What the boss wrote is so right! ! ! I'm forced to just take this bite, okay? ? ! ! Some people in the comment area feel that they really can't eat the fine chaff, or they are too extreme and controlled. In fact, the boss doesn't need to care too much about their opinions. Judging from their tone, they don't seem to be very young. It seems rational to defend each character against injustice, but at the same time, he uses his own values to judge others. He has no empathy, no objective analysis, and can even type names wrongly. I got aroused after reading a novel, and started beating the cook regardless of black and white. I really can't stand this kind of thing, whether it's a pretentious introduction or even a lot of comments clearly stating that it's coercion, neither side is a good person, it has to be black and white, it has to be whitewashing someone or discrediting someone. Boss, to be honest, I feel tired when I read your reply. It's not easy to code words and coax children at the same time. I think the boss's portrayal of the character is quite delicious. It is this kind of contradictory gray character that makes it more flesh-and-blood. Shen Yi's ignorance of love is doomed from his life experience. The fact that he was captured by a netizen he met for the first time in two days is enough to show his innocence of love. Lin Du's character creation is even better. His gentleness and delicateness towards girls, his indecisive and vigorous attitude towards dealing with things, his slowness towards love, his attitude towards life, etc. All make him fulfilling. It was as if Lin Du and Shen Yi really existed in the world. Lin Du and Shen Yi's way of getting along is even more enjoyable. Damn it, I was forced to do it just for this one bite! ! The tenderness and love that one party thinks they have are really imprisoning their own thorny python in the eyes of the other party. . . Lin Du was so nervous when facing Shen Yi. . . (This is forced love.) Even if you have a different body shape, you still have a good taste. . Boss, you are so good at writing characters. Holy shit, you are like my goddess. I want to read your writing for the rest of my life. . I feel really happy watching the unilateral suppression! ! Those who retorted in the comment area are not the audience for forced love. Boss, you are unmatched on the track of forced love. . Boss, I will follow you forever. . By the way, boss, have you ever imagined what Lin Du and Shen Yi look like, what is their cp name (Yi Lin?), And you want to draw a fan, boss, it's really hard to cook rice for us, boss, I'll cook for you too. . It's been a while since I've had such a delicious meal, so I'm writing a review before I've finished reading it. Boss, this is my first time writing this. I just saw that you were in a hurry because of the malicious low score in your words. Boss, please don't be angry because of these people. If my cook gets angry at these unscrupulous people, I will really beat them to death. . . Boss, I'll give you a reward when I finish it.
Wow, this book is really good. I really like it. The baby looks soft and soft. I love eating this kind of food because of my poor body shape. I want to eat it for the rest of my life. It's great. I'm young and have poor body shape, but I'm saved. I've been following this setup all my life. I'm a pervert, and I just like to watch forced love. It's great, because of forced love, we can be saved. [Sending Hearts] I am very happy to have so many like-minded people
The discomfort and suffocation I felt was more real than in other novels. Because the author did not write with a slightly humorous tone, readers can truly understand the psychological feeling of a normal person being forced to bend and forced to love ಥ_ಥ (Malicious attack on me, two slaps ( ̄(エ) ̄)ノ)
It's really well written and worth reading! In particular, the main CP attacker "Shen Yi" and the deputy CP attacker "Bai Jingyao" are extremely possessive, clean and dedicated. Compared with the messy stand-in jokes in other books, where he hugs his little lover every now and then in a bar box, I prefer this kind of "aggressive character design" that is a bit crazy and infatuated (later, they each restrained their personalities for love and turned into little loyal dogs who act coquettishly and protect their husbands). The author vividly describes the almost perverted "possessiveness" in love. The main CP and deputy CP are very touching and full of sexual tension. (Ps: I like Scorpio♏️~)
Holy shit, I haven't seen such a satisfying book in a long time. It's so satisfying. I love reading books that are forced but not particularly forced (I can't describe it). Anyway, it's very, very, very, very satisfying. Please give me more updates from the author!
So far, it doesn't seem to have any surprises. It's a pretty good compulsory story that I've seen in Tomato. If the author keeps up the good work, he will definitely reach the finale. Just this forced taste, [you taste it carefully] [you taste it carefully]
The author's writing is very delicate and detailed. My favorite sub-CPs are Ye Wanwan and Han Jing. Although the plot between them is not much ꒦ິ^꒦ິ, the sweetness of the sub-CPs also slightly soothed my stupid heart_(´ཀ`" ∠)__ The author almost controlled the plot development very well! The emotional line is also the same. When I read a book, I only read a few chapters and then switch to another one. This one is the latest update (๑ت๑). I really recommend this book! ! I have been chasing for three or four days and I plan to catch up to the ending ୧꒰•̀ᴗ•́꒱୨. After reading the bag, I feel that I am not satisfied no matter what I look at. It is not a loss for me. This book is simply unique o('▽')o[laughing]
I feel that Shou Baobao is really going to be depressed. Although I like watching forced love, I cry every time I see Shou Baobao being forced. However, it is still very touching. The author's writing style is also very good. I will read some sweet stories to slow down and read it again. Author, come on five stars five stars