Naruto’s Sky Screen, but in a Fantasy Version

This is very well written. Most Naruto fanfiction I've read before simply followed the anime/TV series, but this novel is a radical departure from the original story, offering a completely different interpretation. I really like that it doesn't dwell too much on the main characters or characters from the original plot; this allows us to fully appreciate the author's imaginative and imaginative…

It's quite interesting. I hope the main character remains a mere plot device and doesn't appear at all.

I initially thought the author just wanted to write a fanfiction based on the original work to generate some traffic, but I never expected you to go to such lengths. I've been petty; from today onwards, I'm staying here.

Good, good. The initial use of the original plot as a starting point allows the ninja world to associate with and believe the content of the Heavenly Curtain. Then, variables are gradually added to gradually transform the ninja world. It is very interesting to write. I look forward to the subsequent changes in this world.

I recommend reading from chapter 26 onwards, as it's heavily modified. The earlier chapters are largely faithful to the original novel.

Author, don't focus solely on Naruto. Include other characters as well, such as the differences between the Konoha Cult and the Hidden Leaf Village's systems, how they control the Land of Fire, how the cult recruits, and why they are considered superior to the nation compared to ninjas. Also, mention other ninja villages. Author, what's your opinion on the issue of Naruto's chakra influencing his personality?

The premise is novel, but I feel the protagonist, Zhang Feng, is completely unnecessary. He could easily be replaced with someone from a parallel universe or a product of a system's deduction. So far, I think it's great, and I hope the protagonist won't have too much screen time later on. Thank you! 🙏 And lastly, to put it bluntly, even if we take a step back, can't the author really update ten chapters a day? 😳😳😳

1. The integration of the world-building is quite good. The fusion of the chakra system from the ninja world with cultivation realms, the localization of the geographical map of the five great nations from another world, and the fantastical packaging of bloodline limits. 2. The actions of the original characters under the impact of the Skyfall are also very reasonable. In fact, the characters from the Naruto world really fit into a fantasy or martial arts world.

It's well-written and not just jumping on the bandwagon; the author's writing style is genuinely good, especially in the descriptions of grand scenes.

If possible, could you add an option where each advancement in cultivation increases lifespan, leading to immortality above the Heavenly Rank? I'd love to see Orochimaru's crazed, infatuated expression.