Turning Martial Arts Novels into Masterpieces

This book is actually a very good book among similar books, including Shuangdian and the like. But it can also be seen that the things written by the author are all from the early 2000s. For example, "Dragon's Sky", "The Bandit Commander Chu Liuxiang", "Seven Weapons" and the like. Although I am also born in the 2000s, as a high school student, I am indeed a bit younger, and I have never read some of the articles. But like Long Kong and Pirate Commander Chu Liuxiang, including the later classic poems and songs, they are still worth reading. The emotional line is also handled very well, but I don't know if it will focus too much on career later and abandon the "text copy" itself. That wouldn't be good.

1. It is meaningful. Compared with other novels that wrote the preface to Tengwang Pavilion for the college entrance examination, it is much better. 2. There is no particularly annoying person in the novel who keeps biting the protagonist. 3. The quality before and after the plot is relatively consistent, the quality is guaranteed, and there is motivation to follow it. 4. Some places still feel relatively empty, and the flaws cannot be concealed [Blow a kiss]

It's well written and has no poisonous points. It has a single heroine, but few scenes can be ignored. The author knew that he could not write the emotional line well, so he deliberately shortened it. In total, it is only less than three chapters in length. It is well-measured and I like it. Chapter 89 finally reveals the main theme of this article, which is also the first climax. It can be regarded as the turning point of the whole article. This time after the college entrance examination, the protagonist should move from behind the scenes to the stage. The plot is quite compact, and the writing is above the passing line. Compared with other works, it is really not worth mentioning, but among works of the same type, it is indeed a first-class production and worth checking out. Finally, quick update! Quick update! Quick update!

This is a very typical entertainment novel. It follows a route similar to that of Zhou Hexuan, a writer who rose to prominence in the Republic of China. It is a lot more exciting, but the main line of the story is still a little too daily. The sense of the main line gradually disappears after a long time of reading. It is a bit tired. It would be better to add more plots, and the characters around you can be more three-dimensional, and the look and feel will be good. @

Let me talk about my personal speculation. In fact, it is not important. There is no problem in reading it without thinking. If China had taken the lead in starting the industrial revolution, that is to say, it had always been in a leading position in the world and had become a developed country a long time ago, then its technological and economic development would have been many years ahead of where it is now, and its thinking and culture would have been more advanced than it is now. The reason why the older generation is greedy for cheap is because they were afraid of being poor when they were young, so they care about everything. However, according to this setting, the previous generations will not be as miserable as in the original time and space. If they were not so miserable, they would not be very greedy for petty gains. I have repeatedly emphasized that this is actually inappropriate. China has always had a high degree of feudal centralized autocracy. If the industrial revolution started from the peak of feudalism, I feel that it would be the first country to become a constitutional monarchy, and it would probably become a dualist constitutional monarchy like Japan and Germany, and embark on the road of external expansion. Just like in the book, the territory expanded a lot, and then after two wars, the system transformed... Which makes sense. Everything is just my speculation. After all, it didn't really happen. Everything is just a possibility. However, many settings in the book definitely cannot withstand scrutiny. In fact, it is more appropriate to just say it is a parallel universe. Don't always talk about the Ming Dynasty starting the Industrial Revolution. It's a bit annoying to watch.

In my opinion, why the world of martial arts attracts so many people is not because of the lofty ideas or the unclear martial arts in it, but simply because of his unrestrained nature, his pleasure in grudges and, most importantly, his willingness to love and hate. That excessive freedom is the core that attracts me. But when I was young, I didn't understand that there was no absolute strength. These things were all dreams and bubbles, and I had to be careful even when I touched them. When I understood it, I no longer had the enthusiasm of the past, so I could only silently watch other people's wonderful things on the Internet.

I hope the author can read it carefully. I also wrote it very seriously. If you disagree with anything, please ignore it, thank you. This review contains spoilers, please read with caution I have read Chapter 118. I don't know what other books the protagonist borrowed from later, but there are some things I really want to communicate with the author. Around Chapter 100, the protagonist makes it clear that he wants to go in the direction of cultural commercialization. This is not to my liking, but it is not because of this that it loses one star. After setting such a goal, based on the experience and identity of the protagonist, it is destined that many truly far-reaching masterpieces cannot be written, because it is too unreasonable and unreasonable to the point of being fake at first glance. This is the reason why I lost one star. The protagonist's path has been tied up by commercialization, and because this business plan is bound to succeed, the protagonist can only continue on this road until it is dark. So my understanding of the protagonist is that he is not really a giant. Juqing, which refers to the Optimus Prime, must be able to achieve true cultural and ideological depth. The protagonist's literary path is limited to the commercial road. This is also a problem with the protagonist's character. He is indeed not as good as Li Liwen. Li Liwen gave me the feeling that even if he is a cheating novel character, I am willing to call him, sir. As for the protagonist Zhou Shuo, his business career has either gone to the dark side. If he wants to change his writing style, he will talk about the sufferings of the world as a group CEO. The better the article is, the more ironic I feel... This is the reason why it is missing one star. The writing style and plot setting of this book are both remarkable, but the humanistic care aspect is indeed a step behind Zhou Shuo's goal. However, I don't know if the author will write about the ideological growth process of a protagonist, so it's up to you. I personally don't like purely commercial-style copywriting, because in my opinion, the significance of culture is not business, but more about thought. Come on, author, I think the reason why many of the comments are uncomfortable is not because of the emotional drama you wrote, but because of what I said, it is a little too concerned about business. Although it is very realistic, people still have to pursue something, let alone in a novel. The mountains are high and the road is far. Dear fellow readers and respected authors, we will see you again in the world.

The writing is smooth and the story is coherent, and the author has put in a lot of effort. The excitement and rhythm are just right. Such a good book is worth recommending. Although it is also a work that caters to the market, it is also a rogue move by the author. After all, everyone has to live. I hope the author will keep working hard and write some good works again. Recommended by a regular fan.

Just jump to chapter 88 to start reading. Jumping chapters does not affect the viewing. The author of the previous poems has also written down what they are. In the whole book, there are not a few books that are more serious, and there are not many prose and poems. On the contrary, there are quite a lot of Internet articles and Jin Yong's books. It was the part of Bobi's thesis that made me feel very serious. I copied official documents, had a single female protagonist, and bought an online writing website and made TikTok videos. As you can see, there are not many such articles.

It's okay. There are a lot of novels written by Wenzhaogong on Tomato's recommendation list recently. If you are not interested in reading that kind of monotonous literary works, you can read more of them to broaden your horizons. This author's writing is quite good, and it's very good when viewed as a refreshing article. Of course there are some language problems...