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New Authors Reviewing One Another’s Work
Looking for books like Twin Stars in Ancient Times. It's good, I love it! New authors, let's review each other's books. Tell me when you've read mine, and I'll read yours too.
Extremely Angsty, the Kind That Breaks Your Heart and Brings You to Tears
Heartbreakingly angsty, like "A Love That Eats Away at Your Bones".
Stories Based on Real Life and Personal Experiences
Something based on the author's personal experiences, or a real-life autobiography.
Two Female Leads!!! I Want Two Female Leads!!!
Looking for books similar to After I Transmigrated into a Book, the Villainess Sister’s Kisses Made My Legs Go Weak.
Dual Female Leads
Hello, hello! I've read so many stories with two male leads. Are there any with two female leads? Please!
Are There Any Stories With Two Female Leads on Tomato? Please!
Two families unite through marriage, binding themselves in a covenant. May this fine match endure forever, worthy of its name.
Any Stories with Two Female Leads?
Show Me the Worst Novels You Can Find. Let's See How Amazing They Are
The worse, the better. I want to see what kind of amazing nonsense people can write 😏
Any Especially Good Novels with Two Female Leads?
Novels Where Every Word Reveals Despair and Pain
I have an extremely high tear threshold. In the novels I've read before, I only felt regret or thought things were unfair, but I have never actually cried for the characters.
Stories With Two Female Leads, Please!
Any genre is fine. I only ask that it have two female leads and a happy ending.
New Author, New Book. You Post It, I’ll Comment!
As the title says, send me your new books and let's support each other.
Please, Stories with Two Female Leads
Sweet Stories with Two Female Leads
Looking for Angsty Stories With Two Female Leads!!!
Looking for a Fast-Paced, Super-Sweet Story With Two Female Leads
Any Romance Stories with Two Female Leads?
Nothing with a naive, overly sweet heroine 🌝🌝
Why Did It Stop Updating?
Have you ever been engrossed in a book, only for it to suddenly go on hiatus? I was angry for ages, then found out why and suddenly felt so sorry for the author! 😭 "Record of the Six Paths’ Flying Birds" is still beautifully written. The author clearly put a lot of care into it, with no typos or awkward sentences. You can tell the author is in poor health, though...
New Books Under 100,000 Words. I Want to Comment and Become an OG Reader
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Zhihuo saw the so-called "paragraph review", so I followed the clues. The following are all personal opinions. If you have any objections, please explain. Although I did not distinguish it carefully, from the table of contents, a chapter of only 1,000 words seems to be considered a flaw. However, considering that this friend is writing for the first time, it is understandable that if he wants to try again, he might as well write more. One of the shortcomings of a small number of words is the content. For example, in the first chapter, most of them just explain the psychology of "I" rather than the actions. As well as the language filling, it was rushed by in just one sentence, which is a pity. However, Han Zhijiu established his lively and flamboyant character with just one sentence. This is not what you are good at. Therefore, I hope that when you try again, you can try to fill in the details of actions and language. Of course, I know that I am not as good at writing as a sparrow, so it is just my humble opinion. I apologize for any mistakes. This five-star review is an encouragement. I hope my friends can write less hesitantly and be more polished. If they write enough, maybe one day they can have a place in the literary world. As the saying goes, "If you don't accumulate small steps, you can't reach a thousand miles, and if you don't accumulate small streams, you can't reach a river." If a friend intends to become a great writer, Zhimou will be one of the witnesses.
So funny 6 people are reading... Well, get yourself a sofa 2025.4.29 Let me review for myself. Where is your main plot? I can't find it. 😢 😢 😢 I want to change the whole text... How can people be so stupid? I accidentally lost the main plot while writing super. When I reflect on my own plot development, I actually don't know which node or stage it has developed... The character prototype I thought of at the beginning and the subsequent characterization are actually not connected. It's not working. . . Let's start from the beginning from the next chapter [sad] [sad] [sad] That's how I am!!
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