Quick Transmigration: Playing a Legendary Heroine from the Start

The first world belongs to the category of pretending to be a god demining 1. The heroine has intimate behaviors with both Destiny Man and Destiny Girl. In the main text, she has a physical kiss with both of them, and the heroine has a scene of being raped by Destiny Girl (the rape scene is not the main body, but the body with the same senses such as touch) 2. The gods are not very powerful 3. The character description is a combination of ancient Xiaobaihua and male video styles The original text of the heroine's first description: "The girl was lying in front of the couch, holding her cheeks with her bare hands, her eyes were reddish, and there was a trace of mist in her eyes. Her little mouth was flat, and she didn't know what she was mumbling." Advantages 1. Ignoring the minor points, it actually looks pretty good [laughing] 2. Detailed and vivid descriptions of individual places 3. The first world is in the later stage and can arouse readers' emotions.

It's super good-looking, but it's a bit abusive to the female protagonist. I'd better be careful with the female protagonist. I can only say that the overall plot is very interesting and the writing is also very good.

Brothers and sisters, you must read this book! "King, play Chang'e on the battlefield of the national destiny at the beginning!" It's really wonderful! I followed the protagonist sister Chang Xi on adventures in different worlds. Every time I was nervous and excited, my heart beat faster! Every character she plays is so cool, especially the nine-tailed demon concubine Su Daji, who is so beautiful and powerful! Moreover, the stories in each world are so sad. I cried while watching it, and then laughed again. My emotions fluctuated with the plot, and I was really invested in it! The most important thing is that after Sister Chang Xi completes her mission, those destiny heroes and heroines will all turn black and destroy the world. This turn is so shocking! I lie awake every night waiting for updates, just wondering what will happen next. 🌙💤 Everyone, please come and read this book together. It's really super interesting. You'll regret it if you don't read it! 👀📖[Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates]

The writing is great and the story is exciting, but it's a bit heavy for me. I really don't like such sincere feelings to be ruined by Lily. But what should be said, the author wrote it very well. (I hate the part of Lily [angry][angry][angry])

Big cheers for the author! I just like this kind of forced plot, hehe, it's fun for heavy-tongued people, But I must let the tonic go! ! I tortured her to death. I hope the author will not be too influenced by romance lovers. Lily + romance are both physically and mentally exciting. And the introduction has already mentioned two directions. If you want to just watch the romance, it is only reasonable for the plot to develop like this. Isn't it true that yanderes always seek someone else first? It's better than the hero getting the heroine and then being killed by the out-of-control cloud. I've read a lot of yandere stories. It's best not to try to let someone take the body of the person the yandere likes first. Ahem, it's easy for there to be no male protagonist in this world (bs And if you want to torture, you can torture two people. If you want to torture a yandere like the heroine, you must taste the sweetness first. The heroine has obviously given the hero the heart. If you want to make Yun have a strong emotion of possessing the heroine, can't you just give her body? Let both people think that they have the heroine, and then they will lose forever or lose their chance forever. Jie Jie Jie,,, Anyway, after all, the pure love is broken, but the love is restored again. Author, I will follow you for the rest of my life! ! I hope I can still write to the review limit in the future, but don't get banned cough cough😌 The author must not be forced by romantic lovers to give up on Lily, ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh about two ways of development that I have drawn! How good it is to have both physical and mental health, Jie Jie Jie, including abuse (I am a lily person + a pure lover + a heavy lover, but I am not a huge fan of romance) I just hope that the physical and mental aspects can be distinguished a little more clearly, because I also like the dual cleansing, cough, and the other way around. 😌 Supplement: After briefly reading the negative reviews, I know where everyone is disappointed. ①Lovers can't stand Chongbai, and they have different tastes. ②The expectations for ordinary people playing gods are too high, and they are disappointed without permission. ③I like fast-paced and can't appreciate the slow flow of this article. ④ The requirements for the author's writing style are too high. But this appears to be only the author's first book. . . ⑤Dissatisfied with Yun's character design and story development. I can't stand it anymore and complain. My rating is: ① Ordinary people like us write articles because we love it, not because we are good at it. ②Everyone likes radish and green vegetables. I don't like being able to leave at any time. The introduction has made it very clear that it is not just a romance line. Don't vent your inexplicable frustration every day. Respect other people's preferences. In fact, the decline of romance is probably due to the fact that there were too many three-dimensional views in the early days, which gave too many people a bad impression. However, it also emerged due to the opening up of the times after the "rectification" of the literary world, and it has the advantages of writing and three-views. First impressions are always important. It's not a joke. In fact, once the romance is written, it can't be any worse than the same. ③Everyone has his own rhythm. There is really no need to use low scores to evaluate other people's writing speed. Just click the author in the comment area to give his opinion. It is not that the author cannot see our needs. ④Ordinary people can play gods well, just like illiterate people pretending to be Peking University. Acting is acting after all. Perhaps, in your eyes, God is compassionate, perfect, heartless and loveless, and requires extreme love to be moved. You don't allow "him" to be a little bit OOC. But, "He" is now "she". What you want is fan fiction. It's not a role-playing story. "She" just needs a leather cover to complete her tasks, not to become, replace or replace "Him". Become another "Him" that is 100% similar. And if "she" is not immersed in "His" influence, perhaps,,, no, Will definitely play worse. ⑤The story development is reasonable. The persona is fixed. You've already written about yandere, what kind of sweet love are you still expecting (? (The above is not in order, just my opinion. If you spray me, you will break your defense🤗

Sister, you write so well. Just a little bit. Sister, are you very busy? Your body is the most important thing, so go to bed early if it's late at night. Sister, are you still working? That's why I wrote it at night. Get some rest early, your body is the most important thing. Sister, you haven't updated for two days. Are you sick? Are you feeling well? Too busy?

I use my 4,000 hours of reading experience to guarantee that this book is really good. I like this kind of sadistic writing, and it is also a role, and the role is also a king. This is a special story, it is really good, the author, please give it a try, and I hope that the author can write Luna in the future, and the child of destiny. I have already thought about it, it must be the Great Sage, and I am looking forward to it (*^o^*)! Before I comment, let me put it on my head: This is just my personal opinion, don't feel like criticizing me! Looking at my comments after reading it for 11 hours, you can see that the author of this book is terrifyingly powerful! I never expected that I, a reader of Otwin, would actually become obsessed with this novel! Hahaha, after all, the world is crazy, 𠹳𠹳𠹳, no, no, it's not me who is crazy, hahaha Ahem, cough, cough, that was my snow leopard just now. It went crazy there. Don't worry about it. Snow Leopard: "Hey, what are you doing~" One more thing, in the future, the author will not play Xi Shi, the child of destiny is Yao; play Xiao Qiao, the child of destiny is Zhou Yu; play Angela, the child of destiny is Arthur; in the end, he will not be crazy enough to play Mo Xie, the child of destiny is a general, right? One more thing, the author, the hero you wrote is still too difficult to control. Are there any other heroes you recommend? Ahem, some brothers have some, but there is more than one hero who is not too difficult to operate, and there are 9 heroes who are as strong as this. They are collectively called the Nine Gates of Dual Road Prison. As long as you master one of them, it will be no problem to be in the top ten of Crazy. If you master all of them, it will be easy to get the top 10! Finally, there is one more thing to "open"! Everyone should be gone. One last thing, I wish everyone a happy start to school!

Really, this is the best one I've read about national fortunes. Basically, except for the heroine in this stage of the world, which makes me feel uncomfortable, the rest is simply great. The story description method is very good, which makes me feel that this book will be a sacred book with a rating of about 9.1 In the future. When will the author's extra chapter be released!

It's great. Author, your article is super cute! It makes me laugh out loud every time I read it~(≧▽≦)/~Hurry up and continue writing, I'm really looking forward to your new surprise stories! Come on, it will definitely get better and better! 💖

Overall, it's pretty good and I can give it four stars. Except for the insulted inner part, I felt a little uncomfortable and wanted to give it three stars. But outside of the extra chapter, I really, really, really like the author's job well! ! ! Must be five stars! ! ! ! !