A Book That Commands Fate

It's okay so far. I'll check the situation first, but there is entertainment in the label. If the subsequent plot is entertainment-oriented, I will just leave with one star.

So far, the writing is good and there are no pitfalls.

Well written, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on, come on.

Very well written, poem day: Xijiang Moon Smile and sigh that life is like a play, and the world of mortals passes by in a hurry. The horses and heroes in the rivers and lakes are all romantic in a thousand ways. The hot blood is now getting colder. Who was the same as Qianying at the beginning? The sworn alliance has betrayed the original intention, but it is just a dream in a fleeting time!

It's a heart-warming daily novel. The male and female protagonists are lovable, and the supporting characters have their own characteristics. They are very exciting. I love reading it!

So far, it looks good and there are no pitfalls

Very well written

Now that I have read the latest chapter, please leave a comment. I feel that the writing is quite good. It can be seen that the author has certain skills and it is worth reading. Personally, I think there are a few issues that can be improved: 1. I looked at the author's homepage and it seemed that it was open twice. Then I looked at the data and it was quite slow. Especially the other book (which I didn't read) seemed to have only more than 2,000 reads. I have heard many authors say that double opening will affect the recommended traffic, and the probability of failure is extremely high. Moreover, the themes of the author's two books seem to be similar, so as a reader, I am not very interested in the other after reading one. 2. The author only writes and does not interact. You don't comment on your own books much, or you communicate more with readers, or ask for comments and recommendations. Do you expect that there will be many people actively recommending and commenting on the data from the few readers? Most people should read it without saying a word and leave without saying a word. These people all need guidance. If you don't guide them to post more book reviews, where will the data for your book come from? Without data, how can the platform recommend it to traffic? 3. In fact, if it is for data, you can write multiple female protagonists, and this book also has conditions for writing multiple female protagonists, such as deskmates, such as Teacher Guo. If you want to write multiple female protagonists, then use the label of multiple female protagonists. Nowadays, the audience for male characters with multiple female protagonists is definitely higher than that of single female protagonists. If we don't write more female protagonists, we have to start downplaying the few female supporting characters we just mentioned. Otherwise, the back end will be too big and it will become a big poisonous point.

Looks pretty good

Vivid images and exciting content, keep it up ✊