Apocalypse: Starting with the Death Train, I Have a Pocket Dimension

The writing is pretty good. Although the front part is a little unsatisfactory, the advantages in the back outweigh the shortcomings in the front. Each of the heroines in the back has their own personality, and there is almost no show-off plot. The overall plot is written relatively smoothly. As for the shortcomings, it feels like there are too many coincidences. It feels like the character who just disappeared in the previous chapter reappears in the next chapter, so the ambush can be added to the daily routine (you know the author) [smile]

It's pretty good. I don't know why the score is so low. Has it been suppressed? Is it because it's too short? [Laughs and cries] But it's a little short. But it's short and sharp, so it's not like no one will watch it, right?

Apocalyptic Train is by far the best book I have read on Tomato, bar none. The protagonist is decisive in killing and the content is lively and interesting. There is still space, but it is a bit lacking. The author should work on more. This is not enough. It is not enough at all [laughter]

It's very interesting, especially the plot in the early stage while still on the death train is very well described. After leaving the train in the middle stage, the direction of the plot becomes a bit subtle. The main line is not very important and not very clear. The little girl in the middle who speaks freely does indeed expose a lot of poisonous points, and the character portrayal there is not very good. Generally speaking, the plot of the train is very novel, with clever ideas and reasonable logic. That part alone can get 5 stars.

A five-star book with appropriate length and moderate human nature.

I don't know why there are so few comments. To be honest, this is the best apocalyptic article I have ever read. Unlike other novels, there are all kinds of betrayals, all kinds of recklessness, and all kinds of selfishness. The protagonist here is humane. He will help those in need if he has the ability. He does not bully others deliberately and has normal views. It is indeed a good novel. It would be better if the third person "he, she" expression could be used more appropriately. It's humane, has its own nature, and has good writing skills. It's a good book. I don't know why the rating is so low. Do readers like reading dark novels where the protagonist is invincible, selfish and cold-blooded? Although they look cool, they are all the same and really not interesting. This book is really written in a way that is more in line with normal people's views, and it also has a touching feeling in the end of the world.

This book is very well written, especially at the end. I almost cried when I read it. It's great. This book is so well written.

The story structure is reasonable and logical, the narrative is smooth, and the emotional description is delicate and touching! Not sure why the score is so low?

Is this the end? Very good book

Fresh taste, different ideas, looking forward to the next chapter