The Icy Beauty Has Gone Berserk

The author's writing is very good, but the relationship between the male and female protagonists progresses too slowly. The chapter of a small world is too long. It is easy for people to be impatient to finish it because I am very impatient [crazy] [send heart] [send heart]

First of all, I think this novel is quite good-looking, and the character design is relatively good, but the story chapters are relatively few, and the relationship between the characters is explained from the beginning, as well as why the heroine wears fast clothes! There are also some secrets hidden. Then I think the first plane is better, but the second plane feels too fast. (Then I read the comments written by someone below and said it was because someone gave me an opinion, saying it was a bit slow and I wanted it to be faster! But I personally feel that the pace of the first plane is neither fast nor slow, and there are details.) Then if the second plane is too fast, it feels like there are no details at all, and it feels like the male protagonist likes the female protagonist is too abrupt. But because we already know that the male protagonist is the same person, and in the real world, the male protagonist may have already fallen in love with the female protagonist, and it is still a secret love, and may have been in love for many years, so according to this routine, the second plane of love is too fast, and it will not have too much impact I hope the author will update more, there are too few chapters

I particularly like the lustful feeling of this kind of writing. It has a plot that needs to be pulled and pulled. Except for the first small world, the pace between the male and female protagonists is a bit slow, but it's okay. It's because it's best not to write about fast travel. The progress of the subsequent world is very good. The only shortcoming is that it's not enough to read. Are there any subtitles? I still want to read it. Updates have been so slow lately, and there are so few updates that it's not enough to watch. There's not much content and I finished it in a few minutes.

It's good-looking and good-looking. The male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist at first sight. Except for the first world, the pacing is a bit slow in the rest of the world. The pacing is okay and the content is also good. There is pure love for each other and a bit of humbleness and sourness from the male protagonist. It's good-looking and good-looking.

It's good-looking. I like this kind of romance that starts when they don't agree with each other. The male protagonist's character is very suitable for my taste.

I really like Bai Yueguang's article. I read this novel just for that article. I really like Pei Yue and our heroine's baby. The breakup in the previous period really hurt me, but we reconciled and it was sweet. Is there anyone who likes this article as much as me? Yueyuan 99 Wrong typing, it's Yue Yuan 99

It's very beautiful. Why is the rating so low? Emm. I've read so many of them and it's hard to find one that suits my taste. This is the one I read recently and it's very satisfying. Don't tire yourself and don't be idle. Come on and write. I'll watch the ads to feed you [eating melon]

It's very interesting and sweet. I like this kind of sweet article. The author should update it quickly [][][] I originally wanted to read other articles by the author, but when I opened the homepage, there was only this one. What a pity [crying]

Tiantian is very good-looking, but no one feels that the first plane looks like Yu Chu's hybrid under the flashlight [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

Dad, can you please stop the female protagonist from liking the male protagonist too much (a little bit is enough, the most important thing is to see the male protagonist take the initiative. I really think that in the second world the heroine takes the initiative, this can be a more enjoyable one, making him crazy, making him bang against a big wall, it's best to train a dog), Dad, you are so literate, you can definitely lean on this [I'm about to cry]