Playing the Prodigy From the Start, I Became Supreme Across the Ages

The writing is quite good, but the leveling up is a bit too slow. The speed can be improved a little. With so many good treasures, you can only level up one level. I feel like it will be more difficult to level up later. It looks pretty good in the later stages. But what happened to 276 [crying] I always thought there was no heroine, but I don't know if there is a heroine. It seems...?

It looks good. I like the setting of the protagonist pretending to be a genius and the character of the protagonist. It is very well written. I just hope there is no heroine. After all, the situation of the protagonist is not suitable for a heroine. If there is hope, the author will tell me earlier, I will not bother.

I quite like the female master the author wrote. She has a kind of chivalrous attitude and makes people feel cool. Unlike what I have seen before, he is either drinking or sleeping, hugging the male protagonist at every turn, and feeling tight in the chest. The male protagonist is like a child, and there is a sense of frivolity.

It's okay, but there are a little too many exclamation points. In some places, the exclamation points are used very abruptly, giving the impression of forced excitement. The sentence that the protagonist said for the first time, "I have my wish, but I don't dare to ask you to listen" is completely separated from the character setting. This sentence mainly highlights humility, politeness or fear of rejection, but it is completely inappropriate for the protagonist at this time. Generally speaking, the protagonist wraps himself up with "proud" and "arrogance", so in the situation of apprenticeship in public places, even if the protagonist thinks "I have my wish, but I dare not ask you to listen", he cannot say this sentence out. A very good subject matter, I hope the author can polish the writing more carefully.

A very good subject. An ordinary ordinary person pretends to be a genius and enters the world of immortality. He uses causality to increase the speed of his cultivation. I first raise the level, and then use the gifts you gave me and my own adventures to make up for the time it took to cultivate to this level. Then I used items to shorten the cultivation time, which proved my genius. This also avoids the situation in other books where the hero starts off as a genius, and then others give him all kinds of good things, and the protagonist soars all the way, but after writing and writing, the plot cannot be written, and then the author can only give the protagonist a stuck state, and even complete, half-step, and these ridiculous states appear. I have reached the peak, but I can't write anymore and I have reached the perfect state, with half-step foundation building, half-step golden elixir, half-step Nascent Soul, etc... It made me laugh at the time. What I said before about physical fitness, there is no bottleneck in cultivation, and now I can't rise... This book can avoid these ridiculous poisonous points. The only bad thing is that there is no finished book. What I am most afraid of when I am chasing books is this shitty yellow button! ! !

The writing is okay, and the setting that can set the plug-in to advance consumption is pretty awesome. The current tone is to manifest the saint-cultivation (pay off debts). The plot is relatively weak, and the character creation is quite successful. I even feel that I can try group portraits. Overall, it is considered to be in the middle and upper reaches. [Thinking] It is a bit lacking at the moment.

Yes, although the cannon fodder who is looking for trouble is a bit brainless and a bit blunt, it is fast-paced and is fun to slap on the face! I will keep following up as I write this. (Ps. I hope to improve the IQ of the supporting characters)

A fairy tale that is more suitable for the physique of Chinese babies. The first grade is the most critical period, the second grade is the most critical period... The first grade of junior high school is the most critical period, and the second grade of junior high school is the most critical period... The first year of high school is the most critical period, and the second year of high school is the most critical period... The age of 20 to 30 is an important node in life. The age of 40 to 50 is an important node. Life 60 has just begun. If you haven't reached Chaochen by 70, you will be too late. It is too late to reach the Dharma image at the age of 500.

This book does not inexplicably write about women wearing breasts like other male videos. You have to describe the breasts before killing someone, and it does not insult the female characters. This is the most normal male channel article I have ever seen [crying]. Girls can also read it with confidence, and the writing has a classical charm. It is very comfortable to read, and the plot is also very novel! [Blowing kiss] Finally, the author will update soon! Not enough [crazy]

The plot of this novel is ups and downs, the writing is beautiful, and the characters are very rich. It is immersive to read and you can't extricate yourself. The structure of the novel is exquisite, the plot advances naturally and smoothly, and the author uses delicate brushwork to outline a gripping story world. The language is vivid and lively, and the emotions are sincere and moving. The novel is not only rich in content, but also brings profound ideological enlightenment to readers. The characters are distinct, the plot is compact, and the climax is repeated. This is a masterpiece worth reading again and again. The novel unfolds the narrative from a unique perspective, with clear logic and clever foreshadowing, which makes people constantly surprised during the reading process.