Cultivating Immortality Turned Me into a Magical Girl
修仙变成了魔法少女
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 183k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- European Fantasy
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
90Chapters
958Reads
128Shelves
16Listens
25.1kReads · all time
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Man Turns into a Girl, Magical Girl, Original, Secret Identity, Steps In from Time to Time
The protagonist is a man, but he's actually an original magical girl. For some reason, he keeps his identity hidden and lives an ordinary life, though he steps in from time to time when danger strikes.
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How to say it? The beginning is pretty good, the introduction is also pretty good, and the cover is also pretty good, which basically attracts people to read it. However, it stops working in Chapters 3 and 4, and it starts to feel like a running story. The main reason is that the author has not planned the most basic plot and positioning. If the content is about life, the ordinary plot should be written in detail to make it more beautiful. If the content is in the plot, a lot of foreshadowing must be made coherent. The author dug too many holes in the front and did not explain it, which made the later part look confusing and not relaxing. Readers read books for nothing more than a sense of satisfaction, plot, cp, and characters. If you don't do a few of these things, it will be difficult to read. The characters are not fleshed out and cute. There is no plot, it is just a blur. There is no sense of refreshment, and it cannot be that unexpected. If you want to use CP, the protagonist and the master have not met, so you can't use it. So the author keeps up the good work and hopes for the next book [sending heartfelt wishes]
The story is about a hundred changes, the writing is excellent, and there are almost no descriptions of women's clothing, women's bodies, and women's degeneration. A story about a master who rebelled against his apprentice and turned into a loli magical girl after his death, and then went to find his master to post. The daily life is very sweet, but the appearance of the characters is a little lacking. Other than that, there is nothing wrong with it, and the emotional lines are okay.
Although short, it is impeccable and has a quiet and peaceful atmosphere. It has washed away the anger and discomfort I felt from reading a few novels before. It is smooth, nothing obscure, and the posts are good.
Why is there no one?
It's very interesting, but a bit short. After the main plot ended, I still wanted to see some interactions, but it ended too quickly.
It seems like there are two heroines for a long time,
It's a really nice two-dimensional style. It would be better if it wasn't about cultivating immortals.