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It looks good, but the protagonist has the Sharingan, and there is not a single genjutsu on the panel. Madara is a hexagon player, and he can control the Raikage with his genjutsu.

It's actually a harem? I saw that the author's previous books had single female protagonists and I didn't read them. There were too many female characters I liked, so I only accepted one and I wasn't interested in reading it. So I ended up writing a new book called Harem? Please support [note]

Finally separated from the twin Kamui, now is the era of Uchiha Madara. [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Well, although the plot is relatively boring, the setting and characters are still relatively good. That's what I like. A relatively plain male protagonist, his character is neither cold, nor murderous, nor funny, nor sinister. He has a relatively bland and normal personality. I personally like this kind of protagonist. There is not much personality difference between other characters in the article, and the original plot looks very good, no There is a big conflict with the plot of the original work. I have also read several other books. Personally, I feel that each book is very good. It mainly depends on my own preferences. Of course, it is not all ordinary ordinary plots, just for transition. There are still many climax plots. I will always support the author! @Literary girl @literary girl Author, can you please publish a book about Titan? Because I re-read Titan recently, I feel that the most miserable person in this anime should be Mikasa. Mikasa also lost her parents when she was young, and then she said that the male protagonist Allen is for his whole world. For Allen, he can give up his life. Everything, including life, but the final outcome is worse than Eren. The end of Eren's final death is compared to Sanri cutting off his lover's head with his own hands, and then slowly dying of old age while missing his lover. Moreover, Eren gave up his life for what he wanted to do, but after Eren died, Mikasa The whole world is gone, so after watching Giant for the second time this time, I feel even more sorry for Mikasa, so I hope the author can write a book where Mikasa is the female protagonist, and then the male protagonist can bring happiness to Mikasa, protect Mikasa's family, protect Mikasa, and let their family live a happy and worry-free life. In life, it is best to get married before the ending. Such a happy ending. Of course, these are some of my personal thoughts. You have said before that you will write a book about One Punch Man. I am also looking forward to it because I like the female characters in One Punch Man very much. Tatsumaki and Fubuki will always support you.

The novel is quite good and worth reading, but the author's writing style needs to be improved. There are a lot of vernacular and nonsense words and some unnecessary words. The details and descriptions are basically very few. 80% Of the narrations have no environmental details and character descriptions, only simple narratives, mainly nonsense and vernacular comparisons. More, generally speaking, the author's writing is quite good. It's worth looking forward to. He will improve his description of the details of the environment and the inner description of the characters, and simplify the language of the narration. The author has great potential. He must keep in mind the taboos of fan fiction. I have probably read 10,000 hours of books on several platforms. I think the author has room for improvement.

It's okay so far. The author is good at writing ghouls [face covering]

The class of the three Magatama Hashirama cells, not to mention killing, at least is invincible in single combat. The three Magatama are all jounin level, let alone the template of the class, at least they can fight with the Kage level.

To be honest, the rating is a bit low. I feel like the author would be better off writing a single female protagonist, but having multiple female protagonists doesn't have much of an impact on me. I really like Kamishiro Rise [laughing], so the author should update it soon! Ten thousand words a day! Come on, author!

This is the best ghoul fanfic I have seen so far. Whether it is the character arc, the plot, or the protagonist's invincible harem, the ending is also super satisfying. Many things that I personally felt were a pity have been changed. There are also a lot of supplementary explanations that are very good, and are quite friendly to people like me who are new to Naruto.

That means Susana can melt Tokyo with one arrow, right?

I thought the author would reopen the story of Bai Ri Ting and the old Duo Er Deli, the childhood sweethearts [laughter]

Advantages: It is a very good Tokyo Ghoul fanfic. I was surprised that many characters I thought would die did not die. This sense of surprise is very good, and there are many female protagonists. I always like harem stories, and the changes in the emotional scenes are quite good. Disadvantages: ① The character design of the protagonist in the early stage was weird, and the relationship between Li Shi and Li Shi was too vague. In some cases, he felt like a bad good guy, but as the plot progressed, I changed my mind. ②The combat power aspect is too vague. When I first read the title "Uchiha Madara", I had the feeling of expecting to be invincible, but in fact it is not (the fusion point created by Goldfinger is also abstract enough, and it is not as good as the percentage of role-playing system in other novels)

It's really good to read. The books written by this author are all very good. It just depends on personal preference. Some people may not like the author's choice of materials, but the logic is still very clear. It doesn't seem like there is anything very toxic [eating melon]

It's good-looking. It can be said that it is based on the previous book (Double Divine Power). The previous book is the same, and this one is the same, but the previous book was a bit broken when it came to the giant part, so I just finished reading the ghoul part. It's just that the author is too easily disturbed by some readers' comments, which feels a bit weird. But it still looks great. [Understood]

Well, I've read a few previous books by this author and started following this one as soon as it opened. After about 150 chapters, I felt that the character of the protagonist is almost the same as the previous books. I feel that the author really likes to write about daily life. It is easy for people to lose enthusiasm after watching it, and then it takes a long time to read it again after a while. And because there are too many daily routines, it makes people feel uncomfortable. I hope that the author's new books will be less daily routines. Really please

I quite like reading fan fiction with multiple female protagonists, but this one has been sitting in the warehouse gathering dust. I didn't have much desire after reading the title of the novel. I thought the protagonist was wearing Madara's leather holster. It's hard to imagine someone wearing Madara's holster and starting a harem. But after reading it, I just realized that it's just the strength to imitate the protagonist and have his own personality, which is good. It's too easy for Madara's harem to collapse. The author is based on the original manga. If you haven't read the original work, the author will explain that it is quite friendly to anime. The author is also very attentive to details and it is very comfortable to read. The female protagonist is currently only in the ambiguous stage, as long as she does not give away the girl. I haven't seen the poisonous points yet. I haven't read any good novels and the requirements for poisonous points are quite low, so I personally think this novel is highly recommended.

I like it very much. Although it is labeled as a harem, the emotions written in it are very interesting [code mark] [code mark]

It's quite interesting. I also like slow-paced writing. No matter what others say, thousands of people have different faces. I prefer the character of Kamishiro Riyo. She is so miserable. I hope she can live well in this book and soothe my uneasy feelings. That's enough.

I feel like this ghoul novel is great. I've also read one before, written by a man named Fat Yu. It seems that the book suddenly died and the novel was discontinued. I also think the plot of this book is great. I found this book and it took me a good time to read it in one go. [Chigua] I couldn't stand it after reading about a hundred chapters. This book is actually a bit more daily, but I like it very much [Chigua]

There are three types of people who read this book, one is the ghoul, the other is the rural people, and the third is those who come to read about love.

Five stars. I picked it up from another book. The plot and the IQ of the characters are online. There is still a lot to watch. But as I said, there is a big problem with the character development of the protagonist. Since you set the character of the harem, then even if you make the protagonist a bit cheeky or shameless, don't make the protagonist feel like a hypocrite who wants and wants. Well, the protagonist's IQ is acceptable, but he is obviously not stupid. This makes the protagonist pretend to be stupid, don't understand, not take the initiative or refuse, and look forced when the female character expresses his feelings, which makes it even more poisonous. But after reading hundreds of chapters, you can see that the author is carefully improving the quality of the plot and the shaping of the characters. In short, go for it and strive to do better. (By the way, is the author really not afraid of being locked up in a dark room when writing fan fiction on Tomato? It's easy to get locked up when writing fan fiction. If possible, you can try your own creation.)

A very pure author [Blowing Kiss] The writing style is not spicy but calm and comfortable. I don't see any bad points so far. The author can expand his comfort zone and write based on what he is good at. After filling in the content, he will try to do something beyond the scope of his writing skills. Anyway, keep it up [laughs] [like]

Do you want to collect Rise? I don't know why there are almost no Ghoul fans who collect Rise. I hope you can collect Rise here [note][note][note]

To put it bluntly, it's really good. This is the fourth book. This is the first time I have followed the same author and followed 4 books. Come on, author.

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4 Stars. The author should change the genre and write some daily love stories or urban harem stories. I have read two ghoul books by the author, and the descriptions of the battle scenes are really brutal. Maybe the author really doesn't know how to fight scenes. Basically, they are like using cheats to kill in seconds. When writing fights, I don't have the desire to bring them in. Instead, I am reading a narrative, which is very bland. There is actually nothing wrong with this plug-in. The main thing is that you can write about the process of becoming stronger. It is not about "killing with one strike with the power of the Sharingan". You are not looking at it. I'm afraid you'd be more careful when writing Shan Magatama "Ghoul A saw a person approaching and was surprised: there was actually a small dried fish that had slipped through the net. As he said that, the core of the tail expanded rapidly and went straight towards the protagonist's face. Although the protagonist was a little panicked, he turned his head slightly to avoid the blow as the Sharingan activated naturally." Although I am just making an analogy, at least it looks more immersive. If all authors really want to create this type of fan fiction, I suggest that they learn more about fighting scenes. This ghoul novel of yours will really become a daily novel. I give 4 stars mainly because I like both anime better, so please give it a try, author.

The plot can be written as small as Wudi, but there are too many female protagonists! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Personally, I feel that it is well written. The low score is because of the author's title and introduction. Many people are attracted to Madara or the system, but these two points account for very little in the article. The system appears only a handful of times, and the protagonist rarely uses Madara's abilities. Most of them are fists. It makes sense, but the main plot is related to Tsukuyomi, so it looks weird. However, this book is quite to my liking. I prefer to read it as a love story between Kazuki and Rise [smile]. I hope the author can work harder.

It's pretty good-looking, some people think it's bland, but I think it's pretty good-looking for everyday use. I can only say that everyone has their own preferences for radish and greens. Mainly because there are so few ghoul fanfics, so this one really surprised me. I hope the author can work hard and don't give up.

4 Stars. One star off because Madara's combat power is a bit stretched. Others are pretty good. I guess the score won't be too high. I estimate that 1 million words will score about 7.8. After all, most people nowadays like fast pace. Hundreds of thousands of words are too much for them.