One-Punch Man: Starting with Dual Kamui

I have read through the book review section, and most of the negative reviews are about the weird character of the protagonist. I have also noticed this, so I am staying up late tonight to refine the previous article and try to improve the wrong details as much as possible. The reason is probably that I am now in a state of writing two books at the same time, 10,000 words a day. I have an outline but I don't have enough energy to conceive the specific content well when writing. Forcibly connecting certain plots makes the protagonist look weird... I am still more willing to accept criticism, but I may not have the energy to pay attention to the book review section later. The high-intensity double threading of more than 10,000 words (two books) every day is really insufficient energy [laughing]

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I'll wait until this book is finished and then start a new book called "One Piece: Obtaining Two Divine Powers at the Beginning" Protagonist: Byakuya 😏 [OK]

The author has also written several books, and hopes to have a long one. It is recommended not to write unpopular stories alone. You can combine the Kamui space ability to design a golden finger that travels to other worlds. The upper limit of the main world Dragon Ball is relatively high. Anyway, the feeling of energy and chakra is similar. Later, you can use the Kamui ability to strengthen it. After all, it is essentially the application of Kamui space. This way, you can at least write it longer, otherwise it will not be enough to read. Kamui is still too strong. In the general world, it feels like he is always invincible in every book. In addition, the system tasks are still a bit uncomfortable. It is still difficult to write about Kamui from the beginning. I hope the author can develop well.

Interesting! Got my Sharingan?!

It's okay to give it 4 stars. Now that I see it, I think the biggest poisonous point is that Lian Yin's too 78-curious mouth and teeth. I don't know how you managed to do it 🙂

Generally speaking, I think the plot is very good, but... I feel that no matter how big or small it is, the descriptions of passers-by (language, spirit, action, psychology) and other aspects... I think some things that are not very important can be abbreviated, which can promote the main line of the plot well. Except that the plot is a bit delayed, I personally think there are no problems with the others. I hope the author can change it after reading it with my suggestions. Thank you. Thank you to the author for your hard work, happy new year

It looks pretty good. Before Ipunch, I had only seen the anime version. I don't know what the subsequent plot will be like. Will it be based on the original manga or have its own adaptation? Also, the character of the male protagonist is a bit too indifferent compared to the characters in the previous books. People with this kind of personality are usually killers. If you add a premise that a killer or someone with an indifferent personality travels through time, it will be well brought in. How many will be included? What are their names!

I would never be able to trick people into killing them 🤦🤦🤦🤦🤦

It's very interesting, but compared to the previous books, it's a bit backwards. The development route is a bit cliche and lacks new ideas. It's hard to hide my tears because it's always been about dual powers. If it's a prequel, I can look forward to a sequel. I encourage the author 👍👍👍