The Pretty Mute Next Door Is Actually an Idol Singer!

Writing is the best weapon in the early stage, but the author does not show the good writing in the early stage, but lays the foundation, so fewer people read, as if people all over the world are targeting "me". Although the routine is old, the quality of the writing is also the author's state of mind. Just like the last few updated pictures are not like headless flies, but make people feel interested in how the subsequent chapters will develop. Keep up the good work, the better the writing, the more people will read it.

It feels okay. The plot is a bit similar to "My Landlord is an Idol Singer", and the characters are a little different, but it's okay. It's pretty much the same, so it feels okay.

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Can you see the eyes sweating to what extent?

Everyone wants to have someone as pure and kind as Xiang Yuebai, who is gentle to them. The content of this book is slightly sweet and has enough warmth. The emotional development between the male and female protagonists is more in line with realistic logic and has a sense of substitution. But this book also has a lot of bad points: 1. The relationship between Shu Yuanyuan and the male protagonist is not clear enough, which makes people feel that Shu Yuanyuan's efforts are a bit cheap. 2. The introduction is not consistent with the content of the book, making people dissatisfied and easily pushing readers away. 3. The end of the book is too hasty, not all the things that should be written are written, and the feelings that should be narrated are not finished. 4. There are poisonous points in this book. The plot such as a slap in the face is too brainless, and it is relatively long and uncomfortable. The emotional development between the male and female protagonists is too tortuous and a bit depressing. In general, the content of this book is clear, relaxed, slightly sweet in emotion, and the female characters are successfully created. It is a book that can be read at a glance.

It looks so good. The author should quickly turn into a code word girl.

It's very beautiful. It's hard for an old guy in his fifties to watch it. Come on!

The content is good, I hope to continue writing and don't give up [Thinking]

It's okay to write, but I hope you don't have a harem!

I wish everyone can find their own Xiang Yuebai