Master Shang, Your Wife Is Reborn

The introduction is quite engaging, and the first few chapters are very resonant. But later on, it was said that the protagonist had accumulated several cars, and that even if the studio was disbanded, he would not live on the street; and that he was attracted by the attack because he was so good. I suggested that there are some special reasons, and I don't know if there are any in the future. If there is a suggestion, there is a foreshadowing in front of it; and use some There are too many words in the comments, which affects the viewing experience. These comments will cause some readers to abandon the book; in the end, the book talks too fast, and there are too many boring plots, which particularly affects the viewing experience. If you want to find the main plot, there are not many chapters in more than 60 chapters; and many places describe how beautiful and attractive the protagonist is. I hope the author can improve it in the next chapter, with more twists and turns in the plot and more foreshadowing, because I think the author's beginning is quite interesting, although the later part is a bit unsatisfactory, so I wrote so much. In the end, I think this article can only be given two stars, but because after all, readers should not arbitrarily deny the author's potentially cherished work, so I gave it five stars. Finally, I hope that the author's writing style will become better and better, and his works will become more and more interesting, attracting more and more readers. I also hope that one day Da Da's works will appear on the top list [Sending Hearts] This is my evaluation after reading Chapter 66 [Love]

Everyone has their own preferences in reading books, and their opinions are also different. I am just talking about my personal opinions here. If you have different opinions, it's up to you [laughing][laughing][laughing] The writing of this book is very smooth, there are not many mistakes, and the viewing experience is great; the relationship between the two male protagonists is progressing very quickly, and the mutual pulling is very nice!!! Super sweet and fragrant The bad thing for me is the progress of the male protagonist's revenge [face-covering][face-covering] I am now reading chapter 84. The previous chapter not only emphasized that the male protagonist is reborn and wants revenge, but it has been said that there is very little actual action. Except for one person named Mo who was very enjoyable to read, in more than 80 chapters, the progress of revenge against the garbage family is to move out, refuse the family's request, treat them coldly, not answer the phone, etc... There is no such thing as taking the initiative to take revenge. I prefer to act quickly when revenge is available. I am a bit impatient [giving heart], so it will be a little uncomfortable to watch. Overall, this novel is still very enjoyable, and I look forward to the follow-up revenge.

I just like this kind of article. Love it so much, love it so much. I like the main character. The way you act is wanton and unrestrained. The current progress bar is Chapter 15. The author has a very strong writing style. Shen Nan captured the daily routine of moving bricks before rebirth very well. In a small space, he tried his best to show the difficulties and small blessings of this period of life. It is precisely because of the foreshadowing of the period before rebirth that readers can well understand the significance of Mr. Shang providing a habitat for him after his death, so that the collision between Shen Nan and Mr. Shang after rebirth is not awkward (after all, the behavior of drunkenly jumping on others and boldly confiding his feelings would be embarrassing enough to persuade me to leave if there is not enough foreshadowing), and Shen Nan's character image can be realized. Chapters 14 and 15 are also very good. Under normal circumstances, Shen Nan is unlikely to directly fight with Mr. Shang, but Shen Nan's adrenaline surges just after the fight. Coupled with her physical discomfort, she went out and saw Mr. Shang in danger. After trying her best to save him, she found that Shang was not a good person. When Xiao Shen and the readers were in a downward mood, they suddenly told everyone that Mr. Shang had seen all this. Shen Nan's mood went up and down and he hit a straight shot from the top. Everything is so logical, and it also stirs up the readers' emotions, which is great!

The current progress bar is Chapter 15. The author has a very strong writing style. Shen Nan captured the daily routine of moving bricks before rebirth very well. In a small space, he tried his best to show the difficulties and small blessings of this period of life. It is precisely because of the foreshadowing of the period before rebirth that readers can well understand the significance of Mr. Shang providing a habitat for him after his death, so that the collision between Shen Nan and Mr. Shang after rebirth is not awkward (after all, the behavior of drunkenly jumping on others and boldly confiding his feelings would be embarrassing enough to persuade me to leave if there is not enough foreshadowing), and Shen Nan's character image can be realized. Chapters 14 and 15 are also very good. Under normal circumstances, Shen Nan is unlikely to directly fight with Mr. Shang, but Shen Nan's adrenaline surges just after the fight. Coupled with her physical discomfort, she went out and saw Mr. Shang in danger. After trying her best to save him, she found that Shang was not a good person. When Xiao Shen and the readers were in a downward mood, they suddenly told everyone that Mr. Shang had seen all this. Shen Nan's mood went up and down and he hit a straight shot from the top. Everything is so logical, and it also stirs up the readers' emotions, which is great!

A very novel setting. Shen Nan wanted to give up in her previous life. When she went crazy, the system turned into a puppy to accompany her, and gave Shen Nan a hand. After rebirth, Tongzi also came and was still cute, but I didn't see the plot of the system turning into a dog again and getting along with its big daddy (the extra story only talked about the birth of the system's dog skin). Shen Nan didn't tell Goodwill about the past life (I personally feel that saying goodbye to my lover after everything settled is a complete goodbye to the past, even if it is said in the form of a dream, Gong can understand it), and there was no wedding. It felt very regrettable, and the ending was a bit rushed. Apart from these few points and a few small details, the whole story is quite good. It has two strong characters, the relationship develops quickly, the plot does not drag out, the force value is off the charts, and the weak points are protected; there is not much attack, he is very doting, a bit sinister, and possessive (both of them are similar). The supporting characters are all very cute, and Special Assistant Guan Jiu has many cute os, which is very gratifying. [Like][Like][Like]

25.4.27 （） Cp cpAuthor, are you lazy? Hehe. One of the couple is still a little girl. Hahahaha. The lilies in my hometown have never withered. Shen Nan✖️Goodwill Yan Chen Ju✖️Jiang Shuozhou Shen Manman✖️Bai Li

Good, good [Adoration], the description of Shen Nan in the article is really amazing, gentle and modest (although it is only superficial), but it really makes me feel his beauty, the emotional line is also super fast, and the interaction is also very warm and poignant, just like Goodwill Yan firmly supports the sinking Shen Nan, every emotional ups and downs can be soothed, and Mr. Shang is extremely possessive. It is a pity to miss it.

The progress is super fast, and it's super sweet. The writing is so cute, super cute! I think the ending is pretty good, leaving enough room for the reader's imagination. The novel is over, but their story has never ended. All young lovers want 99!

It's fair enough, but the ending is a bit sloppy. I haven't written about how Mr. Shang died or whether Shen Nan explained his rebirth. Everything else is fine. The writing is great and the content is brilliant. It's beautiful!

The writing is quite good. It suits my taste. It's both strong. I particularly like the characters of the two male protagonists, and every key plot point is well written. Come on, author. If you can be popular, you have to believe in yourself! Although the love line is a bit inexplicable at first, the plot behind it is still very rich. I look forward to the confession later. With the system, there should be some plot points that surprise us. We look forward to it [Sending Hearts]