Shopping Spree: Building the Ultimate Portable Space

Clear mines first: If you are mined by the following content like me, it is recommended to skip the second world. In the second world, the family line is not handled well. The heroine has a twisted personality in this world and restrains herself with her sense of morality. Obviously the heroine did not owe the original owner and his parents, and she kindly helped the original owner fulfill his wish. However, after the heroine confessed to the original owner's parents that the original owner had died long ago, the original owner's wish, and the heroine's own mission, the heroine was still scolded by them, which was outrageous; The heroine felt very uncomfortable because of this, and her inner drama was extremely active. While convincing herself and making chicken soup for herself, she was also "racking her brains" to help Yu's mother get out of the pain, which was even more outrageous. It's really tiring for me. The writing of these plots is so boring and makes me feel so uncomfortable. This world really almost poisoned me. Advantages: The heroine's space cheats are very powerful, and there are sufficient resources in the back (you don't have to worry about eating, drinking, and littering, more resources will be replenished in each world), there is no time limit for the tasks in each world, and the task is not forced to be completed 100 times, which is very user-friendly. The heroine's strength will gradually increase. In each world, you can improve your strength, collect resources, and complete tasks. After reading the entire article, I personally prefer the orc world, and my favorite character is the Shepherd.

It looked quite frustrating in the early stages, and the protagonist's brain was a bit dull, but it was okay later on. Maybe the author's ideas were straightened out and he listened to the advice. Although there were no special ups and downs or climaxes, the Liushui Bay converged into a river. I almost gave up on the front and felt pretty good on the back. It's a masterpiece among female videos, and it belongs to the theme of killing men and women.

The protagonist's main plot - growing and becoming stronger, in every sense. There are still two hundred pages left to finish the book. [This review is non-spoiler] Overall, it is good. The early pacing is very good, easy to get into, and there are no particularly infuriating plots (such as the plot of the best relative exploiting the heroine for four or five chapters) (I only like this personally, I hate plots that make me have negative emotions.) It is reasonable for the plot to develop too fast due to the later stage. I subjectively think that the protagonist needs to be more detailed when he passes five levels and kills six generals, so that the picture in the reader's mind will be more detailed and specific. It can be read as a quick travel story, involving many elements, but the main line is very clear, the logic is online, and it is a high-quality book.

The writing is quite good, but the heroine is a bit too naughty and has a lot of psychological activities. Sometimes it is difficult to explain what she does. She is a bit indecisive. The heroine is internally conflicted and cares too much about other people's opinions. I hope that the heroine will really get better and better in the future, transforming from the inside out and becoming better.

This is a book with a girl-loving tendency and can be considered female-friendly. It is determined that there is no CP. After the protagonist obtains the golden finger, he goes to various worlds to collect flint (a stone that can cause various types of damage to the local world). In the process, he hoards a large amount of materials and saves thousands of ordinary people (it is impossible to save enemies. Usually they are saved casually, and there is no way to save them. What are the KPIs for saving people?), Finally have a formal identity and become an immortal "horse" (a horse with almost unlimited supplies, as well as production lines and technology to manufacture these materials, I want it too), master the abilities of various dimensions such as the mysterious side and the technological side, and become a winner in life.

It's a very smooth book, and the recommendation on the home page of Yang Persimmon is quite interesting. The heroine is kind but not a virgin. She knows how to protect herself and be grateful. The plot setting is also very good. The heroine has a clear upgrade route. Through seemingly simple tasks, the heroine's skill improvement and space improvement are linked together. The framework is set up. Each copy has a good balance between tasks and self-improvement, so it is basically not easy to collapse. Although there are typos and misspellings, some sentences have repeated semantics, and some sentences lack verbs, the flaws are not hidden. After all, this is an author who knows how to use commas (I have seen countless authors using commas as commas in Tomato, ah). Compared with most Tomato articles, this book has relatively few typos and sentences. The author has quite a life, and many details show that the author has some experience and life experience. The details increase the readability and avoid being overly dramatic (it may also be that the author is good at looking up information). All in all, I hope that my wife will keep writing, her thoughts will flow freely, she will write more, and she will love to read!

There are some shortcomings, but the flaws do not outweigh the advantages. I really like the author's description of the heroine's reflections on the original owner's family after using the original owner's body in the second world. Great! It proves that the author is not one-sidedly following the old calendar, but has considered dealing with this kind of moral ethics in his own way. Come on! Moreover, this book has no CP that impressed me! !

So cool! I'm so happy that I can't sleep. I've tied it today. How did the author create a survival novel that is both bitter and satisfying, with cheats but reasonable, allowing you to travel around the world without any worries... Wow, I like it.

The setting of this novel is particularly interesting. I also particularly like the character of the heroine. She has a soft heart and a clear understanding of her own power. She never does anything beyond her scope of responsibility. She is not a blind virgin. However, the more I read the novel, the less I can read it. Maybe it is too bland. The record of running accounts makes me not interested in reading. In the second world, I couldn't hold on anymore. The protagonist borrowed the body of a dead girl, avenged her, and promised to take care of her parents. However, the girl's parents later found out that the heroine was not the original heroine, and their attitude towards her suddenly changed. It was not her child who was killed by the heroine, and there was definitely no way to return their child. The heroine also apologized to the girl's parents. Did the heroine do anything wrong? Why should she feel so guilty and self-blame. Moreover, the system reminded the heroine from the very beginning that she did not need to complete the commissioned task because the system had already given her compensation for borrowing her body. The heroine still had to complete the commissioned task from the original owner, but she still couldn't get it right in the end. I still hope the heroine can be calmer. It is not easy for the author to write an article, but this article still has merits. The setting is novel, and the writing style is not trivial, and it has no cp, so I still give it a good review.

The rating is a bit low, maybe because there are too few people rating it. I personally feel that the actual rating of this book should be more than 9 points. The content is rich and smooth. The narrative logic of the story is clear, but some parts of the hoarding content are relatively long and have few plots, which makes it easy for people to lose some interest when reading. Will skip the hoarding plot. The story inside is full of love and warmth, but the characters are well-drawn. After reading this story, people feel very comfortable, unlike some novels. It is full of all kinds of nonsense, which makes people who read it very uncomfortable. My blood pressure is high.