Two-Player Minecraft Survival: The Sexy Loli Becomes My Sweet Wife

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

The setting is quite interesting, the plot is great, and there is no virginity. The biggest drawback is that there is too much flirting, flirting while fishing for supplies (no matter what they are), flirting while eating, flirting while sleeping, and flirting ends before fighting and continues with flirting. Exploring the sky island and flirting, flirting and flirting when encountering danger, being attacked and flirting, 2,000 and 1,600 words of flirting, so romantic... The setting is very good and novel. There are no other problems in the chapters I have seen so far. It would be better if we wrote less about romance and more about the dangers and realities of time travel.

Pretty good, The character design, personality, and character image are well created. The plot is okay, the progress is not too fast, and he should be a mature and experienced author. The plug-ins are not too big, so it won't make people feel frustrated that the protagonist is obviously very awesome, but the author is deliberately suppressing his strength. Although it cannot be said to be fairy grass, judging from the current progress, it is considered good among food and grass. I originally thought it would be two stars, but thinking about it carefully, it doesn't seem like it would be. Although the quality has dropped, it's not particularly bad. I can only say that the writing at the beginning is quite good, but the quality deteriorates at the end, resulting in a contrast, but it does not make it completely unreadable. According to my own standards, if we divide it into five levels: top quality, top quality, medium quality, low quality, and hot chicken, I can only say that it has changed from top quality to middle to bottom quality. So let's stick with Samsung. Starting from Chapter 120 onwards, it is the plot of Dead Island, which has no feeling like the previous one. The plot is obviously not as reasonable as before. It feels like I was writing according to the outline before, but by the time I got to that point, the outline was gone and I started to make it up from scratch. It's understandable that you don't want to let the protagonist's power snowball for fear of collapse, but your reasons must at least be relatively reasonable, and you can't make people think you are stupid. And I started to forget the previous settings. In front of you, the protagonist of Snow Island has gold weapons, and there is a zone-wide announcement, but in the back, there are no platinum weapons and diamond weapons? Even if the protagonist is not the first to get it, there should be announcements for other people in the area, right? And you are not changing the gameplay of the map flow. It does not mean that the protagonist becomes stronger and the surroundings are all of similar strength. You haven't changed the map yet. Now that the protagonist has a golden weapon, the golden weapon becomes worthless and everyone has it. The protagonist has platinum gold, and everyone else has it too. I wonder if you are number one in the entire district, so the gap between you and others has not widened? Moreover, the character of the protagonist has become less likable. If he was decisive in killing at the beginning, later on he feels like he is killing just for the sake of killing. It's like that, my character is to kill people, so when I see people, I have to find a way to kill people and get treasures, otherwise it doesn't fit the character. If you want to be dark, don't always be funny. It's not impossible to combine the two, but obviously you don't have a good grasp of it.

A cube survival novel that focuses on emotions. Progress: Not very fast. To put it harshly, he just keeps flirting.

In the early stage, the creative points, difficulties and some details of "block" survival are all good. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is also good. It's just that after finishing playing Savage Sky Island, the senses will gradually begin to decline. You can say that the male and female protagonists have established a relationship after that and have more sweets. But how do you say this kind of "sugar"? It belongs to the author and does not make me feel sweet. Then there is the current problem of reaching the dead sky island. The article is too spacey. Now the protagonist group is basically the first in the region in all aspects. As a result, I know the outcome of every battle, and the description of the battle scenes is relatively simple, so it is difficult to feel it. And now the male and female protagonists have established a relationship, but the interaction between them... It is more like a story that I would fantasize about before going to bed at night. It is not bad, but it is not very relatable to others. The current problem seems to be that the article is a bit boring. The author has ideas, but on the one hand, he still needs time to lay the groundwork. On the other hand, the author may also lack some insights, and the psychological part of some characters is too "flat", resulting in the character not being able to "live". Overall, it's a good work, but I wouldn't recommend it.

The male and female characters are lively and arrogant and trust each other. They always joke and joke at inopportune times. They lack a sense of rigor and are more inappropriately active. They are college students, not big fools. They can't decide the importance. The starting point is good, but everyone is not a love brain. , The internal atmosphere of the sky island is not good. There can be more words here, the sense of substitution can be stronger, and the characters' emotions can be described more delicately after each exploration. It seems that the combat power and material collection are still a bit collapsed. Regarding numerical values, this thing is really It is difficult to write and requires careful calculation. An attack power higher than the opponent's defense power should cause defense-breaking damage. Excessive damage will cause all attributes to decrease. A year-on-year attack power lower than the opponent's defense power will cause damage reduction and cannot break defense. I have seen many authors who write survival articles who don't like to write numerical values because they are difficult to calculate. Some of them also write. Like the author, they do not consider numerical changes and rely entirely on attacks to grind defense. I hope that the next similar numerical survival novel will change this. I will give you my full support! ! !

It's great, but the heroine is too willful and the hero dotes on her too much. For example, in the dinosaur hatching tank, not only did all the eggs be taken away, but all the liquid and liquid inside was drained, how could the dinosaurs survive? How to breed offspring? It's understandable that all the liquid and water are used up, in order to hatch the mythical beast, but taking away the dinosaur eggs cuts off the hope of future generations of dinosaurs. But this is just because the heroine thinks the eggs are delicious. There are many similar examples before.

Very good, this book is very good. I really like the little loli heroine.

The author's writing style is very humorous and his emotions are also portrayed very delicately.

It's really good. I first saw it on a novel tweet. The source is written in the comment area at the back. The source is written in the comment area at the back. I searched it on Tomato. The characters are described very delicately, the plot is also very novel, and the two strong characters made me enjoy watching it. There is no system, which is great. The old enemy finally becomes a beloved wife. I am very happy to see it. The update speed is also very fast. It is basically updated daily. I love it. It is recommended to read it.