Kneel Down, Disciple. Your Master Needs to Apologize to You

It's okay, but at the core of the two-male protagonist, it's still the classic and timeless formula of a soft, stupid and beautiful x affectionate and forbearing male protagonist, but I still hope that the author will try a challenging character design. Readers can't imagine the protagonist they want, and the protagonist's creation will make people feel stupid and embarrassing. The readers want what the protagonist wants, and the protagonist is portrayed at the level of a normal person You can get the protagonist that readers want, and you can also get the protagonist that readers can't imagine. The creation of the protagonist will make people feel smart and shocking. Most of the protagonists on this platform are of the first type, be cautious when you are tired of stupidity.

It's very interesting. I basically read novels just to have a good time. I don't go into too much details, I just want to have fun reading them. The scene in the middle where Master is drunk and has nightmares makes me heartbroken... I hope they will be fine in the future and don't abuse them! Looking forward to further development~ I didn't finish it when I rated it five stars before, but now after watching it, I feel that I can't accept it anyway. It was said to be 1v1, and a third party suddenly appeared later. Don't know what you want to express? Design this plot. The line in the middle is really baffling, why does it have to be so cruel? After the torture, nothing was said clearly, it was like torture for the sake of torture. I don't like it, especially when a third person appears later. Why is it necessary? In order to reflect the heart-throb characteristics of the male protagonist, I thought that there wouldn't be too many scenes with a third person, but I didn't expect that all the scenes later on would be this person's scenes. It's really a waste of people's time.

The only thing that left a deep impression on me was Feng Yanwan. It was difficult to calm down. That kind of love that is forbearing and restrained. No matter how much you love, you still choose to respect and let go. That kind of sour feeling in the heart is easy to empathize with and has great stamina. The last extra chapter is a good explanation for him. The writing style of the extra chapter is really amazing (perhaps because I have invested a lot of emotion into this character. I subjectively feel that the writing style of the extra chapter is good). The emotions are very delicate. The sound of the phoenix really feels complete. I hope they will be happy in another world. The update is not finished yet, I want to know how his body in the cultivation world is processed, or if he is the new host. Generally speaking, the two male protagonists in Tomato are quite good, they are not awkward, the writing is okay, the protagonist is not very feminine, even if he is squeamish and fierce, he is not too dramatic, making people think of girls. The character development is quite rich. I want to see the follow-up of Jiang Mian and Jinyu. However, there are indeed many shortcomings. For example, many people cannot accept the cuteness of the protagonist. It is too childish and the character is too popular. I have read countless books in the year of Master and Disciple. Some misunderstandings are also inexplicable. For example, the Oolong contract with Feng Yanwan is really child's play. There is also the brotherhood with the head brother. The plot in the script is really unclear. But I really think Feng Yanwan wrote it very well. Let's take the five stars as his and clear the mines on his own.

How should I put it? I like them very much in every aspect. I feel that Baili, Shaoyu, Head Feng, and Head Yun are all very good. Baili is arrogant and pitiful, Shaoyu is the kind of gentle and noble young master, and Head Feng is the kind. Well, I don't know what to do. To put it another way, he is just as annoyed, super cute, and has the feeling of being secretly pampered by Master Yun. I also like it very much. I feel like five of them can be together. I feel that they all match well. I don't know which one to choose. It's a pity that this article is 1v1. To be honest, I think all four of them are very doting, loving, and worthy of love. To sum up, I really like this book, and the author can update it. I hope the author will update it, because it's really rare to read it in one day. Well, that's about all. I really like this book. It's hard to find one that is in line with my thoughts in all aspects. It's a pity that it is the biggest 1v book. It's a pity. Especially the Feng Zhang Sect. I like it myself. This little tsundere wow, I really love the author. I must work hard and update it! I really like [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] in your book. Come on, come on. I hope they can play with Meimei in Chapter 2000. Shura field. The author must be 1v2. I really like Fengfeng, and I really, really don't want to abuse him. I really wanted Fengfeng and Huanhuan to be together, but he and Baili are officially married, so I just want to let it go, but I really don't want to abuse Fengfeng because of Huanhuan and Baili's love. I really can't do it. Is it okay to 1v2? I really like this book of yours. You are really the most patient one for me. I usually just throw the other unfinished ones aside, but you are the only one I chase every day. I stock up every day. I miss you every day. I really love you. Now I suddenly find that many readers don't like 1v 2 eh. In that case, delete Baili, and let Fengfeng and Huanhuan be together [shy][shy][shy]

It made me laugh so hard that I loved watching the 360 and the protagonist scolding each other. The protagonist is the kind of spoiled wife who speaks dirty words without being pretentious and very cute. Bangchui is suspected to be the pet name of the protagonist in 360. If you hit me, you will be scolding me, or if I am a third-rate person, come on. It develops very quickly (referring to the original male protagonist having fun). It may be a little awkward at the beginning but it's so funny that you can skip it. It's sweet at the end.

When I read Chapter 84, I noticed that there were hints of 1v2. I went back and read the synopsis and found that it was true. I read the book review and felt really blown away. But so far, I think it's pretty good, but I won't read it any more. The writing is pretty good, but I didn't read the synopsis. It was quite heartbreaking. When I saw the chapter where Xing Ci was obsessed with the devil, and when he said the sentence about his fate that he also wished he could not escape, I really cried and fainted, but I really can't accept 1v2. , The article is still good-looking, and it is really heart-breaking. I finally found a great book, but I couldn't accept it. I really feel that I will never stop reading the introduction in the future. It was originally recommended on the homepage. After reading a few chapters, it felt really good. I didn't like to keep the character in the book before, but this one is an exception, but it is also very heart-breaking. In fact, the five-star rating is because this book is regarded as a fairy in the eyes of people who like this. I just can't watch this kind of thing. When Feng Wanyan appeared, I thought he was CP with Yun Yan, but it turned out to be 1v2,,,,, and it felt really heartbreaking. But the writing is very good. I will definitely read the introduction when I have a long memory.

Nice! Extremely sweet! Real! I won't lie to you! I've finished reading it all! It's so sweet that my heart twitches! Everyone go and see it! The author's writing style is very good. When I read it, I actually liked the first part of Jiaojiao and Phoenix. Jiaojiao is really cute! I just like this kind of venomous tongue, it feels so good to be scolded, hahahaha! The general plot above gave me the feeling that it was like a scumbag. But it's very good and beautiful, and it's really exciting... It's so exciting that I can't even breathe (Baodan! Author, can you be nicer to them? Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, am, were being tortured first, and then tortured me, was so angry that I had a cardiac arrest!) Thank you [sending my heart] But there was one point where a strange name suddenly appeared. When I was reading it, I wondered if I hadn't looked carefully at the front, but after recalling it, I felt that I had never seen it before. It was only after I read on that I found out their identity. I don't know why it felt a bit sudden. That's all. Overall: Love it! Not cruel at all, really! Real! Feel free to go and see it! Ordered! [Smile]

It's very good-looking, and it actually made me tie it. This master has a soft character, and the group dotes on the coquettish baby. I like the plot where the apprentice swears to attract heaven to testify. I like this kind of pure loyal dog, this kind of crazy loyal dog, I love it very much.

The character's personality is full and rich, and the plot is relatively smooth (it feels very sweet). The master is really cute and delicate ૮₍◜ෆ◝.₎ა. The writing is also good and worth reading.

There is a bit of a knife at the back. Shen Qingliu's entanglement with Phoenix in the main text has no result in the end. This part directly killed me, you know. The corpse spots are all downplayed, but fortunately, the extra story is sweet. This book is really good-looking, the characters are very distinct, and there is also the heartbreak value after the separation of Baili Chengmozun and the master. It also hurts a lot. Because after absorbing that bead, he could only lock himself in a coffin and be forced to be in seclusion for two years. Although I feel a bit let down by Shen Qingliu. But after all, the power contained in it is too huge, and it is impossible to say that once integrated, there will be no worries. In order to promote the subsequent plot, this is normal. Also, I feel how sweet the feeling between the head brother and Liu [thinking] [making faces] Phoenix's humble love makes me feel heartbroken. I knock the master and the apprentice, the master and the senior brother, and the master and the Phoenix. Oh no, no, my wife is not good at herself. This book is really super, super good-looking. Read it in one breath