Mortal Cultivation: Heavenly Flame Lights the Road to Immortality

The overall storyline is great, and the male lead's personality is very appealing—rational yet shrewd. The only downside is the slow pacing; there's too much buildup before the Qi Refining stage (145 chapters before reaching the second level, 311 before Foundation Establishment, and 586 before the Golden Core stage).

Not bad, I really like protagonists who specialize in blood-based cultivation techniques. It was quite a shame that the protagonist in *A Mortal's Journey to Immortality* was sacrificed by the true immortal Ma Liang in the Blood Heaven Continent 😢

Many people think the author is dragging things out, but I think it's fine. I prefer cultivation novels that unfold slowly, and I think this suits my taste perfectly; I found it very enjoyable. It reminds me of reading "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality" before. Why did you start writing about cultivation so quickly? It's so disjointed from the beginning.

Your novel has a good concept, but the dialogue is lacking. It's real water, but, but, but, and...🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮, It's so annoying to hear that.

So far it looks good, it has a bit of an ordinary feel to it!

I feel that the cultivation novels are very well written.

It's a pretty good book; you'll get into it after reading a few more pages!

It's so good, you should come too!

It's alright... But there's no need to write it like a masterpiece. It's just a light novel, so it's better to keep it simple, easy to understand, and easy to read, while maintaining logic, coherence, and entertainment value.

It's not bad, you can watch it.