Dora: The Greatest Mage

(Top middle) Blue-•Excellent (Level 6)/7.5 Points+, marked... Sense of substitution B, plug-in B, setting B, writing style B, rhythm C, imagination B, character design C, main line B, logic C. Extra points: none Personal feelings: A standard Doraemon fanfic, compared with similar works, it is pretty good (higher rating), suitable for new book lovers. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) Taking "Four-Star Green - Advanced (Level 0)/7.0 Points" as the dividing line, additional points may be deducted for other items based on the first nine evaluations. (2) Recommendation grade evaluation criteria: Excellent S (+4), Excellent A (+2), Good B (+1), Average C (0), Poor D (-1), Extremely Poor E (-3), Unknown X (0). (3) Sense of immersion: interlocking, rapid resonance, and immersion (4) Plug-in: cheat settings (5) Setting: World background, training system... (6) Writing style and detailed description: standardized and smooth, with appropriate style (7) Rhythm·Overall description: Relaxation and suspense setting (8) Imagination·Plot expansion: Surprisingly innovative and self-consistent logic (9) Character design•Main characters: three-dimensional and full, growing and changing (10) Main line • Close to the center: clear and attractive (11) Logic: plot logic, detail logic (12) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... 2. Evaluation Criteria·Seventh Edition (1) Logic self-consistency: plug-in C, setting C, character C (2) Overall feeling: sense of substitution C, plug-in C, rhythm C (3) Writing difficulty bonus: rhythm A, imagination A, main line B (4) Details meet the standard: Writing A, Brainstorming B, Logic A (5) Writing theme bonus: Writing S, Rhythm S, Imagination S (6) Rigorous logic: writing style S, character design S, logic S (7) Creative bonus 3. Rating of novels (1) Shangshang (a sacred book that meets the public's taste, unexpectedly excellent)─Five-star red •Super legend (level 24)/10.0 Points+. (2) Superior (interlocking high-scoring online articles that make people addicted to it) - ① Five-star orange + • Legend (level 22) / 10 points; ② Five-star orange • Legend (level 20) / 9.5 Points +; ③ Five-star orange - • Legend (level 18) / 9.5 Points. (3) Shang Xia (high-quality online articles, up to standard in all aspects, bonus or rigorous logic according to the writing theme) - ① Five-star purple + • Legend (level 16) / 9 points; ② Five-star purple • Legend (level 14) / 8.5 Points +; ③ Five-star purple - • Legend (level 12) / 8.5 Points. (4) Above-average (excellent online writing, writing difficulty bonus or details meet the standard, one of them meets the standard) - ① Five-star blue + • Excellent (level 10) / 8.0 Points +; ② Five-star blue • Excellent (level 8) / 8.0 Points; ③ Five-star blue - • Excellent (level 6) / 7.5 Points +; ④ Five-star green + • Standard (level 4) / 7.5 Points. (5) Next in the middle (high-standard online writing, logical self-consistency + overall feeling, all up to standard) - ① Four-star green • Advanced (level 2) / 7.0 Points +; ② Four-star green - • Advanced (level 0) / 7.0 Points (6) Middle to lower two (standard online text, logically self-consistent or overall feeling, one of them meets the standard) - ① Four-star white + standard (-1 level) / 6.5 Points; ② Three-star white + standard (-2 level) / 6.0 Points; (7) Middle and lower three (defective web articles) - ① Three-star gray + • Low level (-3 level) / 5.5 Points; ② Three-star gray • Low level (-4 level) / 5.0 Points; ③ Three-star gray - • Qualified (-5 level) / 4.5 Points. (8) Xia Shang (novels with major flaws are missed) - ① Three stars are unqualified (-7 levels) / 4 points; ② Three stars are poor (-9 levels) / 3 points; ③ One star is poor (-11 levels) / 2 points; ④ One star is extremely poor (-13 levels) / 1 point. (9) Xiaxia (disagreement in three views, having special hobbies, seriously affecting the reading experience, and making people physically uncomfortable) - ① Discord in three views (-15 levels)/-1 point; ② Special hobbies (-17 levels)/-3 points; ③ Slight malice (-19 levels)/-6 points; ④Malicious (-21 levels)/-7 points; ⑤Significant malice (-23 levels)/-8 points; ⑥Extreme maliciousness (-25 levels)/-9 points; ⑦Unknown (-27 levels)/-10 points. (10) Medium (standard online article that I have no interest in at all, no evaluation) Three stars unknown/x points. (11) Inferior (female videos mixed in, non-standard online writing) 2 stars unknown/0 points. ——Evaluation of the seventh edition, 1440 words+

It's very interesting. I read it all at once, and the author is very careful. The theatrical versions are all in order. The first one is Big Bear's Dinosaurs, and the second one is Big Bear's History of Space Development. Unlike Tomato, most of the rest are written randomly. I hope the author will not stop updating. After all, Doraemon's books in Tomato are too easy to stop updating (there are also constantly updated Doraemon books, but they are very interesting, but they are a bit too few. I don't know why Tomato rarely relates to these RB animations. Although the rb of the film is not very good, the animation and animation are still very good. For example, Crayon Shin-chan is like Doraemon. There are some, but it is easy to interrupt and there are few good ones.) Here are some personal thoughts. I originally saw that the title is magic and the introduction has a lot of things that are not consistent with reality. I was not ready to watch it, but I still watched it. Thank you for not letting me offend. It is really good to watch. Although everyone has different aesthetics, I highly recommend watching it.

Come, the author read with me, and I solemnly swear: starting from today, I will never update. I will not watch dramas, travel, or get sick. I will play no games, no hydrology. Strict self-discipline, cherishing time like gold, working hard unyieldingly, advocating first-class, striving for brilliance, taking pleasure in coding, steel being refined a hundred times, worthy of readers, worthy of youth, and worthy of the future. As an author, I solemnly declare: I firmly believe that I am an excellent author. Coding is my bounden duty. I have unlimited potential and am not afraid of hardship! I can work hard I am a keyboard in the darkness and a guard on the Great Wall of Internet writing. I voluntarily dedicate my life to coding every day and every night.

The writing is okay, I'll give it a 7 out of 10. The novel didn't express the emotions of the theatrical version, and there was no blood or bond. The reason why Dora is so good-looking is because there is a little bit of resonance. If these could be written out, it would be a really good fanfic.

I quite like the Doraemon theme. There is not so much hatred and crying. Relaxation first class. Come on👏

I have been watching Doraemon since I was a child. I bought the disc to watch when I was a kid, watched it on my computer in elementary school, and now I still watch it on Bilibili. Very good fanfic, keep it up!

Very good book Really very beautiful

Not bad, come on, author!

I haven't poked it yet, it's worth recommending

Not bad, I wonder when the male protagonist will be able to use other magic. But when can we write about the magical world? The adventures were written a bit quickly, and some of the many adventures were filtered. However, it's well written [like]