Master, Please! I Don't Want to Turn into a Woman!

It's a very good book, but I plan to skip the first 15 chapters. It doesn't matter. The first part is too poisonous, and the second part is really good. There are just a lot of knives. You can resist if you can. The second part is full of stickers. Believe me, I will defeat the three old captains. It's super sweet [eat melon] [eat melon] [eat melon]

At the beginning, I thought it was a bit of a sandbox. It wasn't until I was 34 and ten chapters in that I was really shocked by the world view. I felt like I was watching 40k at the beginning. The descriptions of the characters are also very good. I finished reading it in more than 30 hours. [Like] The description of aluminum copper and transformation makes people happy [laughter] Ciallo～(∠ω< )⌒☆

I feel that the author's early pace is relatively fast, but on the Tomato platform, if the pace is not fast, it will not attract the audience. Then I feel that the author has a good grasp of the plot. It does not say it is a straight line, but there are foreshadowings and less poisonous points. Basically every turn is reasonable and logical. The biggest difference compared with other books is that it is in a reasonable place. Arranging some hot topics will not feel conflicting, but you will feel that the character is well created. Just like Xu Yi felt that the protagonist is not the Holy Body, and then inserted a hot topic, and then laid a foreshadowing for the narrative of the second-generation sect leader, successfully created three characters, talked about Xu Yi's cunning, and also said, why is this world like this? Why does the subsequent plot develop like this? I feel that this is what distinguishes it from other books, and there are many others. It has some fragments with its own characteristics. It is not like the kind of saliva, nor the kind of pure water in the later period. It is very good for a debut novel, whether it is to pave the way for the following or to describe the characters. Of course, there are still some shortcomings. Because the description is too fast at the beginning, the description of the protagonist and the protagonist master may not be so profound, and then the emotional scenes in the later part may be missing a little bit. I hope the author can arrange more plots of the interaction between the protagonist and the master in the future.

Let me tell you something, the sexual transformation part has a bit of a Blood Princess (Pineapple's) flavor, and as an old bookworm who likes to skip reading, this book gave me a lot of trouble [facepalm], but I didn't expect that there wasn't much nonsense, so I was a bit confused. Then the part called the Sect Defense War shouldn't be a problem, it felt like breaking the dimensional wall, and now the latest plot has begun to introduce new forces. It feels pretty good. It can become my third tomato book so far. I want the author to get the book. It's just, why is this protagonist almost defeated? It's so shameless [cover face][cover face][cover face]

It has been added to the bookshelf for more than 70 days, and I have read it chapter by chapter. Next, I will write down my personal evaluation and opinion. The story of the protagonist Chen Lele and the heroine Qu Jingqiu after time travel is the main line, and it contains unique elements such as immortality and transformation. For example, in order to save Qu Jingqiu, Chen Lele sacrificed his life to let his pure yang energy suppress the other party's evil, but the wonderful plot of the gradual feminization of the body was produced, which is unique among traditional fantasy novels. The protagonist has a distinct image. Chen Lele showed bravery, kindness and other qualities in the process of growing from an ordinary boy to an immortal cultivator. Qu Jingqiu, as the leader of a sect, has both a cold side and a gentle and caring side for Chen Lele. The character image is three-dimensional. The story progresses at a good pace and doesn't drag on. From the encounter between Chen Lele and Qu Jingqiu, to becoming a disciple, experiencing various events, etc., The plot is interlocking and can attract readers to keep reading. It made me want to know whether the protagonist will eventually become a woman, and what challenges they will encounter on the road to immortality. [Once again, the above content is only my personal opinion]

I give full marks to the whole book. The only thing I want to say about the author is that the emotional changes of Lele's male-to-female transformation are a bit poorly described. The ups and downs are too exaggerated. There is no transition between the sudden acceptance of his own changes and the previous loss of soul. The above evaluation may also be because I didn't read carefully. Don't blame me.

It was well written, but the poor male protagonist was turned into a little lolita.

It was okay from the beginning. Although the protagonist was very scared when he saw the murder scenes, it was still okay for someone who was not a virgin and had seen too many decisive killings. But it seemed like the comments said it was pure love, so I stopped watching it for the time being because a senior sister likes him. Can anyone spoiler how it will be dealt with later on? So I still prefer to watch the harem. There are always a few scenes of pure love that are pretty good. Girls who like the protagonist don't really want to read any more. Otherwise, it will be uncomfortable if I don't accept it.

You don't have to read them all. If you are not patient enough, you can skip the first dozen chapters. After that, you can jump directly to chapter 52 without any impact at all. The middle chapters have little connection with the main plot. I don't know why, but this book gave me the feeling of reading "TieTieTieTieTie". The sword is not very sharp, but the main plot is quite exciting, so it is still worth watching.

The beginning is a little bit toxic, the protagonist's emotional change is a bit hasty, and the heroine's demonization in the back is actually a bit toxic, and the protagonist forgives too quickly, but the rest is still very interesting. Although the writing is at the level of a new author, the overall look and feel is still very good, and the author also said that he will fix it in the front. Finally, I am looking forward to the author's new book.