The Doomsday Is a Heroes' Graveyard and a Hell for Beauties

The author probably wanted to write a book similar to a drama, or he has the talent to write a drama. I think the subject matter and content are just to cater to the audience's taste. Looking at it from the perspective of a little person like me, I really want to reach the level of a drama. Your character is not three-dimensional enough, not rich enough, and you cannot describe it too much. A few words should highlight the characteristics of the character, whether it is action, language, or environment, so that readers can be immersed in the scene. Everyone has their own Don Quixote. This is the charm of words. It is true that art is about making the audience feel immersed in the scene, whether it is music, art, or text. All of them allow the audience to experience winding paths, heartbreaking moments, majestic atmosphere, and the list goes on and on. Artists, on the other hand, use their lifelong skills to help everyone break through the constraints of time and space and peer into places that people have never been to. This is also why great artists are of high value. After all, they cost thousands to travel. For alternative travel across time and space, some people may not be able to travel even if they buy tickets, and some may not be able to take people to travel, let alone witty remarks. Generally speaking, it is better than most of the bad stories on Tomato. At least I saw the plot and it is not a bad repeater. Also, the author, I wish you success and a place in the literary and art world as soon as possible.

Although he is the god of war in the unit building, there is nothing serious about it, so it is okay. It's getting boring. I didn't expect that the story would not evolve from the God of War in the unit building to the God of War in the community, but instead it would become the Legend of Zhen Huan.

If there was no golden finger, it would be just playing house in this apocalyptic world. In a building, you can form gangs and manipulate people's hearts on this three-quarter acre of land. When you go out, the thugs will all have guns, and no matter how smart you are, you will still be paid.

It's pretty good. The main character, not the Virgin, also has some IQ. Unfortunately, her IQ is still insufficient. And it has to be written so that the main character fights the young one and then the old one is trapped in an endless crisis. It's a bit too deliberate. Overall pretty good

The plot is reasonable, the characters' IQs are online, the killing is decisive, and the cheating is moderate. It is far superior to other brainless post-apocalyptic novels. The changes in the mentality of several XXNs after the apocalypse are very exciting, and I am very much looking forward to the subsequent development.

I feel that the writing is not inferior to those written by the great masters. Why is no one reading it?

What can I say, it's the same routine, but it's new and unsystematic. I'm still very interested in it. I should say I like this kind of thing. But now I personally think the biggest problem is rhythm. He can be slow, but he can't be unhappy. You are no longer systematic. Currently, there are 2 cool spots, women and Building 4. Conquering them is the biggest cool spot at the moment, but Director Ma, after Director Ma is finished, the guard is changed, the guard is taken, and the level is changed again. There is no cool spot in the middle. You build a small team and it's all done in one go. Gradually no one insists on it.

In the early stage, the community is a bit poisonous, and the pig's feet are not very useful. Later, going directly north is like opening a dungeon, which looks pretty good. It took me half a day to read the latest chapter. The overall impression is good, at least it's not like other novels where I stopped reading halfway through.

I saw something similar in content a few days ago. It was an aunt who was keeping order in the building. There was also an exchange in the building, which was also on the 15th floor. There was also a patrol team and a fake soldier to help [laughing] The important plots in the early stage of "The White Mist Seals the Building in the End of the World, and the Beauty Begs to Be Taken in" are almost the same, with only some differences.

The subject matter is not new, but the content is much better than those novice articles. The characters are all very vivid, even if they are a supporting cast that has been offline for a few chapters. Although the development is a bit slow, which dissuades some impatient readers, you will find its beauty after reading a few more chapters.