The Doomsday Is a Heroes' Graveyard and a Hell for Beauties

The author likely intended to write a book similar to a stage play, or perhaps the author possesses a talent for theatrical writing. I believe the subject matter and content are merely catering to audience tastes. From my perspective as an ordinary person, to truly reach the level of a stage play, your characters need to be three-dimensional and well-rounded, and you can't describe them too much.

Although it's a top-tier apartment building, it doesn't have any major flaws and is quite decent. This is getting more and more boring. I never thought the story would evolve from an apartment building war god to a neighborhood war god, but instead turn into the Legend of Zhen Huan.

Without a cheat code, this post-apocalyptic world is just child's play. Within a building, in this tiny space, you can form gangs and manipulate people, but once you step outside, those thugs are all armed. No matter how smart you are, you're still just a paid employee.

It's pretty good overall; the protagonist isn't a saint and does have some intelligence, but unfortunately, it's still lacking. Also, the way the story is written—the protagonist beats up the younger sibling, then the older one appears, creating an endless cycle of crises—feels a bit too contrived. Overall, it's pretty good.

The plot is reasonable, the characters are intelligent and decisive, and the overpowered elements are appropriately balanced, far surpassing other mindless post-apocalyptic wish-fulfillment novels. The changes in the mentality of several minor characters after the apocalypse are particularly compelling, and I eagerly anticipate what will happen next.

I feel my writing is just as good as those of the top authors, so why is nobody reading it?

Well, it's the same old formula, but it has some novelty, and the lack of a system makes it quite interesting—I should say I like this kind of thing old-school shonen manga fans like. But personally, I think the biggest problem right now is the pacing. It can be slow, but it can't be unsatisfying, especially with no system.

The early chapters were a bit toxic, and the protagonist wasn't very impactful. Later, the journey north was like a fast-paced adventure, which was quite enjoyable. It took me half a day to read the latest chapter, and overall, it was a good read; at least it didn't make me want to give up halfway through like some other novels.

I saw a similar story a few days ago; it involved an older woman trying to maintain order in a building, and they were even running a stock exchange on the 15th floor. There was a patrol team, and a fake soldier was helping them too. 🤭 The early plot of "Apocalyptic White Mist Seals the Building, Beauty Seeks Home" is almost identical, with only a few differences.

The subject matter isn't novel, but the content is far superior to those simplistic, low-brow novels. The characters are all very vivid, even the minor characters who disappear after a few chapters. Although the pacing is a bit slow, which might deter some impatient readers, you'll discover its charm after reading a few more chapters.