I'm Not Even a Trainer Yet, So What's with This Old Guy's Comeback?

It's not bad. The protagonist is not born with the power of waveguide or Viridian. The help provided by the system is only to help the elves improve their qualifications and high-qualification elf eggs. The protagonist himself is also working hard to learn knowledge instead of simply relying on the elf battle skills he learned in his previous life. The protagonist's superpowers can be seen that they will grow with the body in the future, but I wonder if the protagonist can be arranged to find the treasures left by those powerful superpower Pokémon, just like the metal ball, absorb the energy inside to grow. The latest chapter is a bit over the top. Are you doing this to screen readers?

It's pretty cool. I'm probably thinking of joining the Rainy Day team next. Wu Shiyue should have been cast as the heroine? I hope it's a single heroine I saw that there was an introduction without a heroine, and after reading the original text, it seemed that some of Wu Shiyue's ambiguous scenes were also deleted. I hope the author won't let the protagonist and Wu Shiyue have an affair. It's best if they become buddies and don't write about her cheating or the protagonist licking her.

Thank you all readers for your support and comments. Because this is my first time writing a Pokémon fanfic, and I haven't read Pokémon for many years, some of the plots and settings may not make sense, and I will change them after the bosses point them out. Then there is the issue of the female protagonist. This book does not have a female protagonist, and I will try to have as few interactions with female characters as possible in the future. (As a single mother, I really don't know how to write 🤦) In terms of plot, I will be more focused on travel and adventure in the future. I will refresh the anime and try to add the customs of various places in Pokémon. Finally, I would like to thank you all for your support. I will work hard to write this book [heartfelt]

The writing is very good, but I hope the author will write a novel without a female protagonist!

The writing is very good, but I wish the author had written a novel with a female protagonist

It's okay, but I personally like to develop mediocre battles, such as confrontations with wealthy families. Maybe I don't like watching them because I watch too many other categories.

It's okay. It's a novel without a heroine. The author said in the comment area that he doesn't know how to write emotional scenes. Why is Yue so good to the protagonist? He is a tool man. The future described in the beginning of the old system does not include this woman.

The logical thinking and plot settings of this book are well written and the content is exciting. I really like Pokémon-themed books.

The author's writing is quite good, and the characterization written at the beginning of the article is very good. I just feel that the system description is a bit overdone. Some tasks in the system cannot be completed in the original timeline, so it will be displayed. The system comes here on purpose, not by mistake. And until the middle and late stages, the overall impact and details of the article are very good. It may be that the battle between gods was too sloppy in the later stages, but overall it's still a pretty good novel. I hope the author can continue to work hard

Riding a steel-armored crow and meeting a giant forger will make you honest [laughter]