Urban Superpowers: I'm a Good-for-Nothing Who Excels at Self-Deception

To be honest, it's been a long time since I've seen an author put poison in the first three chapters. It's okay to just slap her twice and reconcile with that sister. Why do you have to let her get used to it? It seems that I am very angry. I think it would be good for the author to directly reverse the situation at the beginning and cut off the relationship with two slaps. It feels so good, it feels so good and so uncomfortable now, and it feels aggrieved to watch. It makes me so uncomfortable. Author, you can take a look at your acquired data. After reading the first three chapters, is it like falling off a cliff?

The novel is quite young, but it is more than twice as good as other novels. The front part has a bit of a female pornographic flavor, but the back part is about cultivating immortals. The novel is generally not bad, and the framework of the world view is also established. The emotional line of the protagonist can be enriched, and the character shortcomings are best kept, and can be filled in later. The protagonist's character is a bit anti-social. Although such a character is not flattering in the world of novels, it is already a feature of this novel. It's a coincidence that the author made this protagonist look like a flower. I think this kind of character is quite interesting. The first few chapters I read earlier had a bit of a yandere feel to them found in female videos, but in no time they really made me feel like they were on male videos.

Yes, I like this kind of protagonist who puts his own life above all else and has a flexible mind. The single biggest plot point in this book is this sister [face covering]

I'll give you four stars because of the way you wrote it. From my perspective, I feel that what you wrote shouldn't be right. Maybe my personal sense is different, so I can't give you five stars.

It's okay, there's nothing major about it, it's relatively bland.

I want a female protagonist, I want a female protagonist, I want a female protagonist, and I usually don't chase a book on Tomato. If I continue to write Xia Ge Xing at the current level, I will continue to pursue it [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

The writing in the front is not very good, but the writing in the back is getting better and better. Not bad, author 👍. Keep up the hard work and don't let the scene collapse in the back. The flaws in the front don't need to be corrected. I have already seen that there are more updates. The author should update more quickly and code more words.

Mark: The protagonist's sister has been corrected by the author, so the flaws are not too big.

It looks good. If some details and other plots were expanded, I think it would not be much different from those works of great masters.

It's very beautiful. Although the sister part almost made me give up at the beginning, I still continued to listen to it. After listening to it, it was very good. I highly recommend it.