Dragon Ball: Earthlings Are Weak, So I’ll Cultivate Immortality!

It's another case of false advertising. The fighting style is entirely based on Dragon Ball, with half a day of hand seals followed by a single ki blast. The only difference is the method of power-up, and they've added the concept of rare and precious materials. In the end, it's still just Dragon Ball's ki blast. ┐(─__─)┌

The reason for preventing his wife from having contact with Bulma is fear of being cheated on by his wife. What a top-notch understanding! I'm thinking Bulma's social circle isn't messy at all. According to your understanding, why bother looking for other women and just adding to your troubles?

It's alright, but the cultivation aspect wasn't handled well; it felt like he was playing a martial artist. Also, shouldn't he be spreading the Dao? Becoming a Dao Ancestor would give you a boost in other people's cultivation as well.

The plot of the Dragon Ball beginner village is incredibly awkward, and it's especially absurd that cannibals would allow the protagonist to stay in the village peacefully for a year. Rather than believing they were cannibals, I'd rather believe this was a hallucination caused by the protagonist's demonic possession, giving him a reason to wipe out the village.

The protagonist is a goofball

It was written quite well at first, but it started acting like a loser after meeting Bulma.

It's alright now, but your current level is clearly too low. You're just one step away from becoming an immortal, and your combat power is only around a few thousand, not even exceeding ten thousand. That's really pathetic. Can't you just display it like this? Multiplying your Qi Refining and Golden Core cultivation levels by a hundred or a hundred, wouldn't that be much better?

Having read many Dragon Ball fanfictions, this is the first time I've seen a female lead who is actually Laozi, who appeared once before.

It's ugly, a mess.

There's too much AI being used; you'll understand how frustrating it is once you read about it yourself, bro.