I Became an Immortal in Great Wei, and the Powerful Arrived at My Mountain Gate with Gifts
我在大魏当仙人，权贵备礼登山门
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 189k Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Updated
- 1y ago
- English
- Request a translation
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It's very good, but I hope it doesn't have any conflicting elements between master and disciple. It would be better if there was some distance between the master and disciple; the master not acting like a master and the disciple not acting like a disciple feels a bit strange. Thanks for the small suggestion, but it's still very good. Keep it up!
He's a nouveau riche, but in my opinion, he's not as wealthy as a Middle Eastern tycoon.
Not bad, not bad. I love this type of novel. Nothing beats the thrill of becoming an immortal and establishing a sect in a low-level martial arts world. It's just that the protagonist's starting status is a bit low—the outer sect leader of some hidden sect. Wouldn't it be better if he were an immortal descended from the celestial realm?
I enjoy reading this book. I love the idea of an ancient protagonist without immortals cultivating immortality and showing off all by himself. I strongly suggest that the protagonist cultivate immortality himself first, then take on disciples and teach them ancient martial arts.
It's alright, but I'd appreciate it if you could balance the male and female characters a bit more. The high-level characters you're currently writing are almost entirely female. Two of the protagonist's three apprentices are women, and the winner of the grand competition is also a woman. It just feels... Well...
If you don't want to cheat, don't go overboard.
Dear author, Princess and Nangong Xue can be taken as Daoist partners. There's nothing there. I didn't see how the immortals in this book changed anything about the mortal world, and the plot isn't rigorous. For example, the Wei Kingdom has an outer sect similar to a martial arts sect, but it's laughable that a few people could defeat an army of hundreds of thousands.
Honestly, within the ancient cultivation genre, this is already considered very well written.
Keep it up, author! I'm waiting for your next book.
Not bad, keep it up!