Eye Arts: Starting with Controlling Light

This novel shouldn't be rated at just 5 points, right? How on earth was it rated? No wonder the rating is not high. The plot is okay, but it's too wordy. Most of each chapter is nonsense that has nothing to do with the plot. It's really cool.

It's quite interesting, but it's really dragging, and the plot develops too slowly. But this is a free novel, so I won't say much more. It feels like you have to write thousands of chapters before you finish it. [Shocked] There are also too few emotional lines. I hope to write more.

The protagonist is so awesome. He takes the initiative to help people cut off their queens and almost dies. He also does things that he is not sure about. If he didn't have the aura of the protagonist, he would be a martyr.

Can't this light ability develop the abilities of General Kizaru in One Piece? [Sinister smile]

It looks good. Come on, author, don't be a pigeon.

Very good, little by little progress, little by little getting stronger, not sudden and unreasonable becoming stronger. It can be seen that the author has thought in it

Don't stop at this time

Fortunately, there is nothing serious about it. It can be read. Tomato is considered a high-quality product.

Overall, it's pretty good, with a sense of narration and a sense of anticipation. Author, please update! !

It looks good so far, keep up the good work!