Tomb Raiding: What Kind of Ridiculous Plot Is This?

After catching up to the latest update, I feel I must give a long review. You can ignore the title and introduction of this book, and you can ignore any nonsense about it. The author just writes it with ease, and the more he writes, the better it becomes. The following contains some spoilers: The protagonist He Zhou is a clean and ordinary modern book fan. He made a deal (immortality) with Dragon Vein (disguised as a system) to travel through time and do tasks. The problem is that people think about salvation too simply. In addition to weapons, the system cannot provide golden fingers or even punishments. I died 8 times, including assassinations, suicides, and plot killings. I went round and round to hone my skills, and I also suffered from physical and mental illnesses, which led to this start. It can be said that he is a very miserable protagonist. But it is precisely after experiencing the darkest days of life that it fits the background of the original work on the world of tomb robbers. It has a handle and a source, and can withstand the inspection of all parties. Only then will He Zhou be able to reach the threshold of entering the game. All the way from the Lu Palace to the Queen Mother of the West, He Zhou rarely smiled. His memory did not allow him to indulge, and he was afraid of exposing doubts and causing his death to restart again. He could only act cautiously and keep working with his hands. At present, there are more than 30 W words. The author finally made He Zhou feel more relaxed. He got closer to the original characters, the dragon vein appeared, the task completion rate reached a new high, and some mysteries were solved. But a new round of conspiracy is brewing, and huge tasks are still waiting for the protagonist. The above summary is a bit more, let's talk about what I like and look forward to Although He Zhou almost gave up after experiencing misery, he still insisted on self-salvation. If he really gave up, he would not take the initiative to treat illnesses and give injections, nor would he act with others all the time. As the plot progresses, keep thinking rationally and calmly, and use all conditions to complete the mission. Apart from working in the fields, his moral bottom line is still very high, and he is even easy to be soft-hearted towards others and has the ability to be forbearing. He Zhou is not a holy father figure. He was just too clean in the past. He overturned the chessboard and became a villain. It was just a means, not his true nature. This kind of person who occasionally gives up on himself on the verge of collapse but can stick to his true heart at critical moments touches me very much. The author is also a good digger. There are many original plots in this book, but it is rare to find that it can be integrated into the original work without any sense of inconsistency. The mystery of the original plot is no less than that of the original work. Each link is connected with another, and the more you watch it, the more you are fascinated by it. None of the characters are OOC, which shows your skill. With the clues known so far, Dragon Vein's request is very large. He Zhou's mission has only reached 30%, and the hidden forces have not yet been revealed. How the plot will turn out in the next ten years depends on the author's ability to fill in the holes. In fact, He Zhou has another hidden danger. I wonder if he will be pointed out. The Hua family has asked someone to check him out. He has always looked very young and his face has not changed. Master Hei also thinks that he is immature. If we get along with him for a few more years, if he really does not look old, will he confess everything later? Somewhat looking forward to how to deal with this. Finally, I hope the author is in good health and can update for a long time. I really want to see the ending.

It looks good, but it doesn't match the label. I wanted to read a sweet article, thinking that seeing group pets and casually making love would be a sweet article, but I couldn't read this kind of thing, so I didn't stick to it until the end. There are some thoughts that come from consuming CP, but I can't see it at all. The protagonist is miserable, and everyone can see it even if the system doesn't say it. I found that the protagonist didn't have any time to rest. Just after finishing the previous instance, he was called to the next instance and slept in the air. I can't read the abusive main text. The protagonist was electrocuted by the system when he had an idea in his mind. He died eight times and did not trust anyone. An ordinary person was fighting alone. Everyone did not trust the protagonist and kept testing. Zhouzhou is alone in the world. I couldn't stand the control of the protagonist, and I kept thinking that it would be sweet later, so when I read this novel late at night, I thought I would fall asleep after reading a little bit, and then I would fall asleep after seeing the sweet part, but I didn't fall asleep until seven o'clock. I was so emotional that I wrote a review. To sum up, it is a good book, the content is attractive, there are some discrepancies in the label, and it is worth reading.

The logic is strict. I have read a lot of fan fiction. Most of the protagonists love the protagonist. They also fall in love with the protagonist, give them equipment, serve as blood packs, and resist damage. The protagonist of the fanfic is not like the protagonist, but like a follower, a younger brother, or a bug that is inserted into that world very bluntly. In short, it is not very friendly to the eyes and minds of readers (mainly me) who take the adventure with the protagonist as the first perspective. This book is different, very novel. I really feel the existence of his character, just like the innocent fat guy. I can feel his struggle for survival, pain and paranoia, hard mouth and soft heart. I also cry for him, laugh for him, feel sorry for him, and empathize with him. He really exists. I can imagine him standing there, gloomy and sad, and occasionally bright. Fan creation opens up another possible line based on the original work. That is, although it is based on the original work, it is no longer loyal to the original work. Most fan authors just copy it mechanically, insert a character into the original work, and then proceed according to the original work, but the role of the inserted character is unknown. This article is a true second creation, the writing is good, and the main character creation is very successful. Big boost to the author!

This is my favorite Pirates fanfic so far. But it really has nothing to do with the group favorites in the introduction. Porridge was tortured so miserably, living alone in the world of stolen pens, enduring loneliness and intrigues around him. The most unacceptable thing was the suspicion and distrust of the protagonists in the previous games. He gave his sincerity but got tragic death again and again, innocent suspicion, the blind man's calculation, the brother's indifference... Perhaps this is what is most likely to happen after time travel. The protagonist group does not have a God's perspective, so it is not easy for us to criticize. But the injuries that Porridge suffered were all real. He was forced to grow up, suffered from anorexia, did not dare to trust others, and even had a sense of unworthiness. Help, I am the protagonist, and I feel really bad for him. Maybe now he is slowly being trusted by the protagonist group and is gradually getting closer to the "group favorite" in the introduction? But, I just find it ironic that the protagonist's current concerns are just a beautiful candy wrapper that cannot cover up the cruel reality mixed with blood. Cats have nine lives, but porridge died eight times! The author also said before that it is impossible for Porridge to return to the original world, but I don't want a "dumpling-making" ending either. The profile says that CP buys stocks, but I can't do it myself. I think I'm the first one to know about Congee's past... I hope the author can write slowly and give Porridge a good ending. I also wish the author good health and a happy life. The above are all personal opinions, please don't criticize if you don't like them.

It's beautiful, I'll wait until I'm halfway through it before I comment. The whole book saves time - the protagonist was physically and mentally abused by them in the previous life, and they finally discovered the good character of the protagonist eight times and began to chase people at the crematorium. The protagonist could not talk to them while being slowly boiled to a frog in warm water. In the end, it was said that he was the favorite of the group. What is the difference between this and the ancient times when he chased his wife in the crematorium against the will of heaven? I couldn't hold on until I read half of it, and the more I read, the more resentful I became. First of all, the writing and strategies of this book were okay, but after reading a hundred chapters, I realized what deal the protagonist made with the system. As someone who has read the original Tomb Raiders Notes, the protagonist chose immortality. Is immortality a good thing? Why is it that after the protagonist dies so many times, he gets it for a long time and then goes insane and goes to die on his own but can't die? This is a very small point. I can explain it by saying that everyone has different ambitions. Then there is the direct relationship between the protagonist and the original protagonist group of Pirates. Well, he knows that his life is very painful because of their eight deaths, so this time he just wants to have a completely beneficial relationship. As a result, he starts to soften as soon as others come to treat him well. I don't say you want revenge or anything like that. Can't you do your own thing and stick to your heart? You must think in your heart that I don't want to have contact with them, and at the same time, you somehow become friends with the original protagonist group of the stolen pen. It seems that the author arranged for him to die eight times just to cultivate him into a tool man. The tool man himself also gave them various excuses. This is something that can't be helped. Since I have to join the game, there is nothing I can do. What, you, a writer, must hone your protagonist like this? What exactly are you writing, is this a supporting character's story? It's simply baffling

It's good to watch. I was put off by the comment section when I first read it. I thought it was very sad and cruel, and described the scenes of abuse in large sections, so I left. The second time I clicked in, I found that it was different from what was said in the comment section. The protagonist was indeed miserable, but the writing was very good, not abusive, or the protagonist's life. He is tenacious, like a candle lit by the newborn sun, with vigorous energy and a strong will. I hope the author will never be influenced by some people in the comment area, writing "be" or "eternal sleep". The protagonist has obviously been working hard to live, so he should live a good life.

The characters of Heixiazi Iron Triangle Xiaohua are not OOC. The author's writing is really good. After reading so many tomb robbing articles, the author's control over the character design of the robbing characters is still very good. It is worth reading [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

So well written! The main character, He Ye, is plump, handsome, melancholic, capable, beautiful, strong and miserable. The original characters are not bad, but the little brother Wu Xie seems to be kind but really hard to get close to. The plot development and the character's personality are laid out layer by layer very well!

It's rare to find a pirated spin-off that I like, and the original characters are well written. Among the fanfics I have read, the original character who is the first protagonist is a bit "Su" or "acting" in my personal opinion. He can easily get close to the protagonists of the original book, gain their trust, love and even respect, and pass the game in one life. No matter how the authors write that their characters love the protagonists of the original book and devote themselves to them, there is always a feeling of being outside, with the OCs looking down from above with God's perspective and all kinds of cheats. The OC of this book, on the other hand, blends into it with a dissociated attitude. He is no longer someone's fan, but becomes a person who exists in that world.

First of all, the characters are not OOC, the plot development is very logical, and the relationship with the protagonist group is also step-by-step. There is no trust from the beginning. The distance and vigilance between the two parties are very consistent with the characters. I like this kind of emotional drama that is not obvious. I can feel the relationship between the characters from some details. In the plot, I can feel that the teacher has a lot of his own thinking. He does not completely follow the original work, but it fits the style of the original work very well. The teacher's writing style is very good, and the description and narrative techniques are very natural (I personally find it very comfortable to watch). Regarding the setting of the protagonist, because he has experienced the previous eight failures due to various reasons, Aga was under great mental pressure at the beginning of the story. In this state, he gradually contacts the protagonist group, and follows the main line with them to keep moving forward. In essence, it is also a process for Aga to establish contact with others again and truly integrate into the protagonist group? The previous eight failures were basically due to knowing too little information and rashly contacting the protagonist group, resulting in being silenced without being able to join the game. This cycle repeats, and even as a reader, it is difficult to maintain the enthusiasm at the beginning. However, the pain experienced by Aga cannot be entirely attributed to the protagonist group, so in the ninth reincarnation at the beginning of the plot, he has always maintained a very ambivalent attitude towards the protagonist group. As of the current update, I feel that Aga has come out of the state he was in at the beginning. He was always a bit gloomy and world-weary before. Maybe it's because the route he chose this time is correct? Or maybe I have gained the trust of the protagonist group, and the plot is progressing smoothly so far. I hope it will get better and better in the future, and I hope Aga can get out of the previous haze. All in all, I loved this book! I also like the growth-oriented protagonist like Aga! I look forward to the subsequent development of the story and will keep following the updates! (I want to say a lot, but my language organization skills are really poor. There may be something wrong with what I said [crying] I will come back to review when it is finished.