The Genius Squad Says, That's It?

It's very good. The author will also correct some typos or unclear places in the middle. Lin Zhi and Zhuge Mian are very good friends. I recommend you to invest in them! ! ! ! But maybe it's because I've read too many hot-blooded comics, and I always felt that some of the scenes where Lin Zhi was in danger and his teammates were worried were too abrupt. I felt that the relationship was not deeply formed before the climax began. It may also be that the length of the story is relatively short... Here I suggest the author to create more feelings 🙏 (no malice, just a suggestion), the length can be slowed down, and the friendship between the six people can be well established first. Then, I hope that the part where you talk about gossip or some entertainment will not be too long, otherwise it will look a bit trivial, long and tasteless. Finally, let me explain, the above is purely my personal opinion🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 But to sum up, the author's writing is pretty good. Zhuge Mian's character is very heart-wrenching. I hope the author won't be a mess. It's best to update 10 times a day, and the number of updates will exceed 10,000! ! ! ! ! (And a little selfishly, I hope Lin Zhi and Zhuge Mian can interact more!!!)

The writing is okay, it's just a novice's writing, I don't give you any advice, use more commas, I'm really tired after watching it together www. This movie is not only good for my eyes, but also good for you to make up the number of words [laughing] If you can be good, you still need to be good. And the characters, don't show up so many at once. I can't tell them apart qaq All in all, good looking

It's nice to watch, the heroine is great, the group portraits are very vivid, the friendship between the team is very good, the storyline and world structure are very good, there are many funny elements, it's fun, there are no surprises, the most important thing is that the author is very enthusiastic, sincere and cute, I like it, keep up the good work, this book will definitely become popular [Sending Hearts]

I am a novice at writing. Sometimes there is no punctuation mark in a long paragraph and there are many typos, which can be forgiven. There is a lot of foreshadowing in the front, so I need to be patient. It's not a standout book on my bookshelf, it's just average, but some of the settings irritate me, so I'll still read it. The author is active. The character portrayal is not very good, and the author still has a lot of room for improvement, but he is a novice after all, so it is understandable. In the book, it was Zhuge Mian's character that really struck a chord with me. Finally, cheers to the author ( ¯ᒡ̱¯ )و

So far it seems that it is very interesting and I am very happy. I shouldn't have not read it so much. It should be popular. At least many people will read it. Moreover, the author responds very quickly. It is a bit cute and the novel is also very interesting. It is worth pursuing. Especially the descriptions of fighting. I usually write more cheerfully. Overall, it is very good-looking. Anyway, I like it very much. [Cool][Cool][Cool][Blow a kiss][Blow a kiss]

Super pretty! ! ! I want to give a big shout out to the author! ! ! Lin Zhi, who tried to pretend to have a high cooldown at the beginning of school but failed, Zhuge Mian, who was white and black... (I don't know how to describe the rest, hehe), everyone's image is very vivid, and their personal personalities are very prominent. I really like this kind of group portrait of teenagers fighting with each other! ! ! The only drawback is that there are a few, I hope the author will make more updates! Finally, I wish the author and all readers a happy New Year's Eve!

Punctuation errors and typos are a little frequent, but okay. Overall it's good-looking and the author is very active. There are some plots that could use a little more detail to make the impression more profound (of course, you can also pretend that I didn't say this). Although the writing style is a bit immature, it is already very good for a new author. Finally, cheers to the author [sending heartfelt messages] [blowing kisses]

I want to ask first. I read that the introduction said something about the darkness of society. Will this book be very depressing and dark? Or does it have such plots? I mainly read the book to relax. I would feel uncomfortable when reading this kind of book. Because I have a strong sense of empathy, so I want to ask first before deciding whether to read it or not. Well, it can be seen that the author may have some male-oriented thoughts, such as calling brother, graceful women, but it is not unbearable, but I still recommend the author to make a big change, because this is a non-CP heroine, it will attract those who like the rise of female-oriented female consciousness (only It's a suggestion, it doesn't matter if you change it or not, but if you change it, it can attract more people. For example, I saw those who wrote about all-female teams, the rise of female consciousness, and female-centeredness. Regardless of whether they read it or not, they would give it five stars to support it.) Oh, yes, and I also want to return to it. The author [sends my heart]

It's a very good-looking interstellar novel with group portraits, and it doesn't have an official title, so you can read it as you like. The protagonists are all lively and interesting, and they work very hard. Everyone is a protagonist, and it interprets the true meaning of group portraits. It is much better than those books that say they are group portraits but are actually about love. I like this very much

The book written by the author Da Ni is very nice, and Xiao Ping An is also very cute. What I want to say is the cover of 📖. I read Da Da Ni's book many times but I missed it because of the cover. I didn't expect it to look good. Woohoo. The setting also really impressed me (it would be great if there were more chapters every day)