I, the Lie-Flat Qilin, Get Ten Thousandfold Returns for Every Effort

It seems like I gave 4 points, but actually I gave 8.5 Points because I have 1.5 Words [awkward laugh] When I first read this book, I thought it had great potential, but as I read it, I felt something was wrong. Eight of the ten paragraph reviews contained typos/missing/multiple word reminders, and more than half of the eight reminders had not been changed. This is the biggest flaw of this book [petrification], but at least the plot of this book is very interesting, and it won't be unbearable [face covering]. Anyway, you can still read this book [Like] The following is a message to the author Dear author, if you are willing to read it, please listen to my suggestions for you: First, if you write the text through voice input, then you should carefully check for typos and omissions, etc., And if the book friend sends you a paragraph review to remind you, then you should correct it. After all, typo feedback will deduct your income [grievance]; second, the only difference between the existence and non-existence of the protagonist's system is the talent and skills. Even the talent seems to be originally possessed by the protagonist, but the system limits the protagonist. It is better not to use this system and replace it with a talent probability to obtain high returns. And that characteristic, generally it should be fire/ice type, etc. The fire characteristic sounds a bit awkward; thirdly, the reborn person in it was so stupid at first that we looked at it [awkward laugh] but this is also the characteristic of your work [like] we book friends also enjoyed it; finally One point, the author, you should read other authors' books and learn from the writing styles and attitudes of those authors who are on the homepage. I'm not saying that your book is not good. Your book is very interesting to me. It's just that your typos and some paragraphs are confusing and torturous [face covering]. Compared with other short stories, you, the author, suffer from typos. If you don't have time, you can write some manuscripts in advance and save them to check again when you have time. You can also keep updated when encountering problems. Dear author, if you write a new book in the future, you must remember to read the suggestions I gave you. The book review ends here [grievance]

Okay, it's quite interesting. There is poison, but it's not unacceptable. Let's keep it for a while and then take a look.

The type is not bad, but the combat power is really strong, and it is flat. If you want to suppress the combat power and not break through so quickly, you can definitely add some spiritual materials when breaking through the big stage or the small stage, so that you can have different stages of strengthening after breaking through.

Not bad, not bad. This is pretty good among beast-control novels, and the plot structure is also good.

Overall, it looks good. There are not many poisonous points. The only poisonous point is the reborn woman. Her mind is a bit messed up and her ideas are too strange. Regarding the protagonist's level, he is a bit confused and uncertain when standing. Come on! Anyway, your book is much more beautiful than the one next door: Dragon Treasure Reborn in the Year of the Dragon. Although I have 15 hours of reading time, I spend most of my time listening to books. I have been listening to this book for several days. What I say is true.

Now that I have read Chapter 9, I feel that the protagonist will change into a human being later on, so I want to ask in advance, will Gu Xiangwan be the heroine next time? The protagonist won't change and be with her when the time comes [Chigua]

Haha, interesting. Kirin is so cute.

I will give you five stars to encourage and support you. I believe in your methods.

It's pretty. Come on.

Well, I don't know why the rating is so low. Maybe it's because of forced suppression.