Sorry, My Intolerance for Idiots Is Acting Up [Infinite]

So far, both dungeons are well written, but the plot of fighting the hooded man is a bit delayed, and I have skipped several chapters. Make some suggestions: ① The hooded man seems to be a mini-BOSS. The protagonist will definitely defeat him in the end no matter what, so the relevant plot can be appropriately shortened and the pace can be accelerated. Although the protagonist's current strength cannot directly compete with him, so the process of killing the opponent may be a bit long, but the previous article has described that the opponent's most handy mental attack has little effect on the protagonist, and the hooded man's physical attack is not very proficient. These descriptions will make readers feel that the strength gap between the two sides is not particularly large, but the hooded man did not die under the attack of the ancient tree for so long, which feels like a strength problem. And the hooded man using props like Xiaoqiang is a bit disgusting. (Although mid-level players should have more props.) It is recommended that the fighting plot can be speeded up appropriately. The descriptions in the dungeon are very good, clean and not sloppy. ② As for the copy, the author has written very well so far, the length is moderate, and he can quickly complete the copy on the basis of explaining things clearly, but some places are a bit convoluted. It is recommended that you follow this rhythm. The plot of the dungeon should not be too long. Most readers are catching up and may forget the previous plot. Moreover, a plot that is too long will cause readers to lose interest in reading. Whether they abandon the book or keep the book, the data will become bleak and affect the author's writing mood. Many books are discontinued for this reason, but this book is very well written. Keep writing! ③The author has done a great job on the talent board. He did not rely on the number of words, but there is a more streamlined way of writing. For example, the range of the domain before upgrading was 1 cubic meter after upgrading to 3 cubic meters. How many seconds have been added, directly write down the changes after the upgrade. But I'm used to reading both, and the author is used to writing in whatever way he likes. The above are my suggestions, but the most important thing is not to take readers' suggestions lightly! You must follow your own outline, supplemented by readers' suggestions, and dominated by your own ideas. The inspiration is always your own, the reader just gives you an inspiration, and the author is the one who writes the story. I really like this book and hope the author will stick with it!

The author is here to write a long review~ This book is logically oriented, and the plot pace is neither fast nor slow. Those who like weird stories and want to get into the trap should not hesitate. Here are some facts about the book: 1. Lightning protection: The heroine is crazy about criticizing beautiful women, so the heroine is good-looking. Let me say the important thing three times: the heroine is beautiful! The heroine is beautiful! The heroine is beautiful! Those who mind please proceed with caution. (The author has already mentioned this in the introduction, but many people still made negative comments because of this. The author was puzzled and aggrieved, so the author decided to emphasize it again. So you should read the introduction before reading the book) 2. Regarding Worst Student and Please Come Ashore: I saw some babies commenting on whether Worst Student and Please Come Ashore are the author's trumpets. The author responded to a part of it. I will explain here again that these two are not the author's trumpets. These two are the author's good friends, and the author's trumpet has been diving. 3. Regarding the rating: Wow, wow, the rating is very low now, but the author is very happy to be able to publish the rating. There are fewer people rating it now, so it will be lower. I hope those who like this book can give it a five-star rating. Thank you to all the book friends who follow the update. I love you. 4. Regarding updates: The author can really only update 1,500 times a day, but will ensure stable updates. The author is now a senior in college. I worked as an intern in secondary sales for a period of time. I was really exhausted. It is really not easy to keep updating. I'm currently working on my thesis, so sad. After that, I have to continue studying for graduate school in September. If I go to graduate school... I hope I can have more time to type, but don't put too much hope in the author. But 1,500 per day is definitely guaranteed, so babies who are worried about whether updates will continue can rest assured. The author originally wrote this book for love, so it would be nice to have some income, but even if no one reads it, the author will still be responsible for the work. Finally, I would like to thank again all of you who followed up with updates, and thank you to the cute book friends who gave gifts to the author.

. . . . . . Apart from the description of the idea that the heroine should try her best to maintain her beauty and grace under all circumstances, and the later comment about the husband and sister, I really can't see anything bad about it so far. The one star deducted is because I heard the husband's mental damage fee while listening to the book.

Laughing to death, I just realized that the heroine's life span stated in the copy is only one-third of that of ordinary people. I thought it was life span, and I kept reading the article with this regretful attitude. But I just realized that it is the life value, the life value on the panel [face covering]

The writing is a bit verbose, and the narration explains too much from God's perspective. However, the copy and the protagonist are very good, and the flaws are not concealed. It is quite exciting. If the author improves his writing skills and changes the cold narrative style, it will look better. Come on, author [Thinking]

OMG I haven't seen such a good-looking book in a long time. The heroine is very capable, but not brainless. The source is reasonable and each has its own place to play. The heroine's thinking is even more incredible, her ideas are unique and thoughtful, and very distinctive. The most important thing is that the author keeps updating, which is really satisfying. I hope there will be a complete ending.

It's good-looking and clever, and the heroine's SSS-level talent was announced very quickly without any frustration. I hope the author will keep updating it and not let it be unfinished or banned. If it becomes popular, I will be a long-time fan! [Please update]

It's very interesting. The content is smooth and detailed. This is a good novel. Tomatoes are really poisonous. The ratings of this novel made me laugh. Those 9 or 8 points were not as detailed and exciting as this one. The plot is a bit too much to explain, but it doesn't matter.

It's very beautiful [sending my heart] I would like to make a small suggestion, change the title and cover of the book [sending my heart]

The plot is interesting, the content is interesting, and it feels very intelligent. But the heroine has always been targeted by the system, right? Even though she is the heroine, I still feel that the heroine's targets are too right.