After Transmigrating Into a Book, I Was Forced to Become a Dad

He came looking for the boy's mother, but he couldn't find her and her face was covered in blood. Because it was too bloody, I just finished reading it. The author's repentance plot is also very good in a sense. I want to go to the main heroine area to have my stomach washed. . You all come to see me and don't let me suffer alone. .

Author, where are you? I feel that the author likes to use the four words "scenery and moonlight" very much, but! There is no such word. Can you change all the "scenery and the moon" in the book back to "the scenery and the moon"? Guangfeng: the wind that clears up after the rain; Ji: the rain and snow have stopped. Describes the scene of everything being clear and pure after the rain. It also refers to a broad mind and heart.

Overall, it's pretty good. When I read it, the writing was so awesome that I just wanted to keep reading to see what happens next. It was really fun to watch. The characters are well drawn, and the short story with several male supporting characters is very interesting. The early stage is very good, it is really interesting, but it may become boring later, and the emotional line is a bit unsatisfactory. It took me a day to read this book, and I felt very mixed... There were no big events, it was very short, and it started with tasks. I was a little tired when I saw the later part, but it was a very cool thing. I really wanted to see the part where Qi Shenzun fell off his horse. When Shuang You asked why, I felt so happy that I became excited. Especially when Yue's aura is sometimes described, I really feel afraid of portraying it so realistically. How did Qi and Yue fall in love with each other? I was a little confused when I read Yue. I had a crush on Yue at the beginning and then started to like and possess him. I think the process was very clearly written. Qi Kan said in the article that Yue felt guilty and then fell in love with Yue (someone reminded me that I read it too fast). The stories of the other male supporting characters are really well written. It got a little boring later on and skipped a few chapters, and the description of Yue later was a bit violent and irrational? After watching the sky-swallowing beast, I told him no less than three times, Master, you will die if you do this. Master: Continue. The battle written later is like a battle, a battle. Come on, love line!

Come and see. I can't be the only one who feels this bad, the rest of it is just a collection of shit. What kind of mentality did I have after reading this?

I love love, love love, I love Shuangyou, my heart aches! ! ! No one has read it, but I still want to see everyone's comments. Woohoo! !

It's pretty good (#^.^#)👍🏻It's my favorite type, I finished it in one day😂😂

It was a bit bloody in the middle and late stages, but I didn't expect the ending to be open-ended.

It's okay, but the logical thinking is not very strong, and there are some intermittent and incoherent things in some places.

It looks great and I'm looking forward to the author's next book.

It's very beautiful, but so few people see it. I hope more people see it [Sending my heart]