Supernatural: I Contracted Ten Million Weird Creatures!

The overall plot of the story is really well advanced, the plot is smooth, the events are gradually coming to light, the logic is very smooth, and it is not a brainless story. The protagonist has grown up, the villain's IQ is also online, and the characters are all distinctive, plump and beautiful. The shortcoming is that the styles of the early and late stages are a bit inconsistent. The protagonist's personality is becoming more and more like Gu Er. The original character is diluted in the grand perspective of the narrative. At the same time, the emotional line is very unreasonable, as if it is forced to introduce the relationship between Qi Hengchun and the Guoshu Academy. Inserting the character of Lin Yu, she caused many troubles for the protagonist and got her involved. At the same time, the two of them did not have much intersection in the early stage except for occasional tasks. Even if the tasks were official, the protagonist should feel pity for her out of sympathy at most. Love, and the protagonist suddenly expresses his attitude in the virtual world of the peach blossom pond, making a decision deliberately to break the situation, destroying the overall beauty of the novel... On the contrary, Nan Xi escapes from danger with the protagonist from the beginning, and the two help each other and complement each other. In the end, an extraordinary friendship is established. At the same time, Nan Xi is also the protagonist's guide and mentor on the road to the secret world. The two have frequent daily interactions, quarreling and playing with each other many times, which is in line with the development of the emotional line and more in line with the original gentle and joyful tone of the article. What's more, Nan Xi helps the protagonist manage the conspiracies and has the status of a mistress. Therefore, from a personal emotional point of view, I prefer Nan Xi to be the heroine. Lin Yu is an interlude in the emotional line. If there is entanglement, the two will eventually get rid of each other and remain friends, while Nan Xi will take the emotional line (I don't know if she has the possibility of turning into a human in the end).

The character of the protagonist is actually okay and well portrayed. At present, each ghost has a relatively clear personality. And the plot is okay (or I don't see much of it), but on the one hand, the protagonist may be a little frustrated when it comes to the official version. For example, at the beginning of the battle against an S-level ghost, half-off the takeout service is a small point. After trying it later, I can only say that the official version is unsatisfactory. On the other hand, I feel that it is difficult for the protagonist to control the ghosts in his body, and he has to rely on Nan Xi. Although this is okay, but when I look at the later scenes, I feel that the protagonist has become half a chess piece. After the Guoshu Academy had a conflict with someone, I felt that the protagonist was in the game. It should not be a poisonous point at the moment. After that, the protagonist's so-called "hero saves the beauty" is okay. It depends on the author later. If you think the author has updated few words, then keep reading. I feel that each chapter has fewer words, but the updates are stable. There are not many anti-settings at present, and there are holes dug and holes filled. It's readable, but it doesn't pay much attention to the ghost's emotional line. It talks about various aspects of the human plot line (maybe there are some problems with the narration). This article can only be regarded as half a good article. [Eat melon]

I am personally more rigorous, so I did not give full marks. I analyzed it from multiple angles. It is a personal review and can be used as a reference. 1. Language humor, 8 points, humorous, but not cliche, clear thinking, very comfortable during reading, but lacks the level of character creation. 2. Character fullness, eight points. Each person's character is very distinct, and everyone has his own will. It may be that the author can write this type of people very smoothly and fully. 3. The main theme of the story, 9 points. Judging from the direction of the story, the author has definitely put a lot of effort into conceiving the overall outline. When reading, I did not feel confused. However, the beliefs of some organizations are not very clear. It may be because I have not read the entire book, but this is not the point. The direction of the story is also ups and downs, and it is indeed not an old routine, nor is it invincible. 4. The level of digging holes, eight points, including the author's first ghost pet, being close to the protagonist and the goal, big holes like Master Lin Yu's game, and some other supporting characters. I think they are holes laid out by the author. If they are filled in, the readers will feel very comfortable. From what I can see so far, the protagonist has a golden finger and is not invincible. The villain has a decent brain. People are not good or bad, but they all have their own beliefs. The characters are clearly drawn and the psychological description is accurate. It is not too relaxed but very funny. The direction of the story is unpredictable at present, but it generally feels that it should have a good ending. However, I feel that the book lacks a climax of the story and makes people feel unsatisfied. This may be the foreshadowing laid by the author later. I highly recommend reading this book.

Except for the aspect of forcing the protagonist to join the Supernatural Bureau, which treats its employees very inhumanely, it is not very good in other aspects. The interaction between the weird and the weird, the weird objects dropped after killing the weird, all kinds of strange awakeners...

The further you read, the more interesting it becomes. The story is very strong, and the foreshadowing is very logical. After reading it, I found that the previous pitfalls have been filled in. I hope the author will update more every day!

It's pretty good. Hahaha, Lin Yu is so cute. When will the protagonist kidnap Lin Yu?

It was really good to watch. I watched it at 5:30 even though I was going to sleep a little bit [crying with laughter]

It's pretty good, but there's no female protagonist?

It's quite interesting. It's mostly funny. I still like it.

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