[No harem, no System]
The Daoist path: Mortal Cultivation, Spirit Entry, Dao Transformation, Primordial Truth, Tribulation Entry (Life and Death, Creation, Nirvana), … Great Emperor
The Martial path: Mortal Martial (Fate Alteration), Spiritless (Body Cultivation, Path of the Dao, Golden Body), Heaven Battle…
“Flowers will bloom along the road, and so will the future you and I share.”
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One lotus blossoms in a clear pond; one flower falls upon the hibiscus.
You do not know that waiting is futile; you do not realize that the road has no end.
“The road to immortality stretches endlessly, and the Great Dao shifts between yin and yang. One day, I will become the sole eternal existence.”
“If all living beings possess a spirit, why dare we not make the sun and moon trade places in the heavens?”
[This introduction doesn’t do the story justice. Please read the main text.]
Also known as: [Eternal Immortal Path: Flowers Fall in Wangchuan, I Am Eternity] or [The Dusty Road to Eternity]
It's not bad, but the pacing is a bit fast. It's only 20,000 words, and the pace is already this fast.
I say it's well-written, and that's what I mean by well-written.
I'll give myself five stars first.
The plot moves a bit fast at the beginning, but it gets more normal after chapter 40, and the plot is alright.