Global Instances: The Battle of Changping Shocks the World

If the Roman Empire wanted to conquer the east, then the Mongol Empire could conquer the west.

(Lower middle) good+/7 points+, mark,,,,,, The sense of substitution is good, the plug-ins are average, the settings are excellent, the writing is good, the rhythm is good, the imagination is excellent, the characters are average, the main plot is good, and the logic is poor. 3 Additional deduction points: combat description (poor), combat power confusion (extremely poor) Personal feelings: In order to promote the plot, your logic is full of loopholes. I don't know how you set it up. According to common sense, the stronger the logic of the story, the stronger the combat effectiveness of this character, then Xiang Yu cannot come out now. First perfect the worldview of the Han Dynasty, and then expand the worldview forward and backward? In the first Changping Battle, there was nothing to say about accumulating capital, and the design of subsequent copies was unreasonable. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. 1. Evaluation of the novel (1) First impression: sense of substitution, plug-ins, settings (2) Overall experience: writing style, rhythm, and imagination (3) Detailed description: character, main line, logic (4) Extra deduction points: data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (5) Evaluation: ① Excellent (+4), ② Excellent (+2), ③ Good (+1), ④ Average (0), ⑤ Unknown (0), ⑤ Poor (-1), ⑥ Extremely poor (-3). Centered on "lower than average/four stars good/7 points", the evaluation criteria are based on the first nine items, and additional points can be deducted for other items. Every +2 evaluation will increase the score by one level, every -1 for middle or lower will decrease the score by one level, and every -2 will decrease the score by one level. 2. Rating of the novel (1) Shangshang (a good book that suits my taste very well, unexpectedly excellent): (24) Five-star quality++/10 points+. (2) Superior (recognized by everyone as a good book, the number of updates exceeds 1,000): (18) five-star excellent +/9.5 Points, (20) five-star excellent/9.5 Points+, (22) five-star excellent +/10 points. (3) Shang Xia (good books with rigorous and self-consistent logic, good books that do not meet taste): (12) Five-star excellent++/8.5 Points, (14) Five-star excellent-/8.5 Points+, (16) Five-star excellent/9 points. (4) Above average (a good book in the conventional sense, without special features): (4) Five-star good++/7.5 Points, (6) Five-star excellent-/7.5 Points+, (8) Five-star excellent/8.0 Points, (10) Five-star excellent+/8.0 Points+. (5) Middle to lower (a work with average performance, no outstanding highlights, and no major problems): (-5) Three-star poor++/5 points, (-4) Three-star average-/5 points+, (-3) Three-star average/6 points, (-2) Four-star average+/6 points, (-1) Four-star good-/6 points+, (0) Four-star good/7 points, (+2) Four-star good+/7 points+. (6) Xia Shang (a novel with major flaws, but there are still some merits): (-13) One star is extremely poor +/1 point, (-11) ② One star is poor -/2 points, (-9) Three stars are poor/3 points, (-7) Three stars are poor +/4 points. (7) Xiaxia (a book with good writing but distorted views) , the content is harmful, seriously affects the reading experience, and makes people physically uncomfortable): (-15) Two-star extreme bad +/-1 point, (-17) Two-star extreme bad/-3 points, (-19) Two-star extremely bad -/-6 points, (-21) Two-star disaster++/-7 points, (-23) Two-star disaster +/-8 points, (-25) Two-star disaster/-9 points, (-27) Two-star disaster -/-10 points. (8) Medium (the reading experience is disappointing, far from expected, personal experience): Unknown three stars/x points. (9) Inferior (a novel that is unattractive to read, no evaluation): 2 stars unknown/0 points.

In ancient battlefields, drums and horns were used to convey orders, otherwise they could not be conveyed on the battlefield. How could he know what he was commanding? In modern warfare, the sounds of grenades and gunfire were too loud, so orders that could not be conveyed were conveyed in advance. Moreover, they did not know the formation for the first time and could not study it. In addition, they did not know the order so they did not know how to cooperate. If it was the first world war of modern warfare, the bullets had to be put in one by one, and there was a gun safety. It is reasonable that they would not use it the first time.

Five stars is an encouragement. At least it doesn't say anything very toxic. There are a few minor flaws, such as writing some stupid comments that look very hot, but it's harmless. There's no need to be too picky. You can watch it with less brains.

So far, the writing is very good, especially the war. When I enter the big world later, I wonder if I will write about the generals in detail. For example, Xiang Yu and Li Guang will briefly pass over the personal aspects on the battlefield.

The content before the Big World (to Chapter 75) is worth reading. The subsequent introduction of Lulu and the script of Southern and Northern Dynasties are of unclear significance to me. Compared to the subsequent rise of the East and the division of Rome (both possible), what attracts me most about this book is the perspective of the loser in the historical script?

So far, the writing is very good, keep up the good work and don't write too much.

This book reminds me of "Global Copy: Shocking the World" [face covering]

It's very beautiful, not only the plot, but also the update speed is very fast.

It's pretty good so far, but the update is too slow. The protagonist's chapter on Allah's civilization is a bit too long. I want to see the Chinese gods beating the Roman legions, or maybe I'll update the chapter on Allah's civilization with two more chapters [laughter]