Eerie Apocalypse: From the Start, I Wear a Giant Tortoise Shell

There is no complete plot line, either I am eating or I am going crazy.

How should I put it? The plot is too confusing. From one moment to another, which world is the theme, or are they all in the original world? Will he return to the original world? If he cannot return to the end of the original world, it will be redundant. And if he wants to return to the original world, where will he be taken? Another world? So what's the point of him coming here? The plot cannot connect one thing to another. You started with suspense, but you made it a mess. Moreover, the turtle's eyes, the unspoken voice, and the part about the old beggar are too abstract and incomprehensible. People nowadays don't like to be passive when reading novels. It's just like a powerful person is controlling him, which makes people feel uncomfortable and don't want to read further. Why can't you see my comment?

So pretty