I Kissed My First Love in Front of My Ex-Wife and Ex-Girlfriend

The life system will tell us that we will meet many people, the arrogant childhood sweetheart Ren, the first love Ye, the ex Xu, the secret love for Gong Ya, the marriage Jane... Reincarnation again... Sanwu Baizhiye, the yandere love brain Jian, the weak Li Baiwei, the white paper eldest lady, the tacit fraudster Xu, love at first sight and traditional, - currently Fang Qingrou is tentatively determined. The plot, characters, thinking (Brother Lu - strength comes first), and perversion. It is a normal Japanese drama, Koiken ~ Service Club, helping adolescent girls solve their love problems. The most important thing is that he has a disgusting scumbag personality, provoking, not rejecting, and helping repeatedly; but he also wants to purely love the virgin complex... Which is also quite tangled. (With the hesitant and wandering character of "If you keep breaking things off, you will suffer chaos", you simply don't have much mental internal consumption, but you are just emotionally pulled into deep trouble) To sum up, this is a perverted "love" drama that imitates Brother Lu.

This is the first time I try to write a long review. It is based on personal subjective assessment. I personally feel that a family-friendly finale of about 8.6 Is reasonable. The characters' personalities are all very distinct, and I really felt a sense of loss after reading it. To be honest, this kind of article is small in size and there are too few similar themes. But this book is one of the few that I can read. The protagonist is not brainless but also has a stomachache plot. Some people will criticize the protagonist's identity as a killer, but this has been hinted for a long time. The protagonist can run 200 meters in 21 seconds, close to international athletes, which is a result that can enter the Olympics. This alone is enough to show that the protagonist is not ordinary. But it is rare that this book can give a perfect ending in the end. There are a lot of criticisms at the end of the stock market, such as Pseudo Love, Passerby Heroine, etc. It can be seen that the author is really very attentive, just like Mr. Crocodile loves his characters very much. As for the emotional entanglement between the male and female protagonists in the article, I am not qualified to comment because I am just an ordinary book lover. My youth was very dull without vigorous love and colorful life, but my youth is far from over. Maybe I will encounter my own wonderful things in my future studies. In short, thank you This book appeared in my ordinary life, and I was able to catch a glimpse of the color of youth in the protagonist's life. I hope everyone can find their own answers in this book. I have said so much before I know it. It is a small regret that this book is not popular, but regret is the norm in reality! Finally, everyone, I hope this ending can be worthy of your ups and downs along the way, and I also hope that the author can find his own answer from this debut novel! To everyone's ordinary but never-ending youth, I hope you can remember the happiness these novels bring you after a long time. Although it is hard work to search for thousands of pounds, you will only get gold after blowing all the sand. Why can a compass draw a circle? Because the feet are walking but the heart remains unchanged. Why some people can't realize their dreams is because their hearts are uncertain and their feet can't move. I wish the author and all book friends will finally realize their dreams! So, all book friends, I hope we will come back with the next book! ! !

How can I put it this way? It is a complete book. It is not unfinished and has a complete outline. It is a pity that many branch lines are missing due to various reasons. There are relatively clear overt and dark lines. The author's character creation is also quite satisfactory. There is no situation where the characters in the plot are taken away. The pitfalls are basically filled. I haven't used my brain for a long time. What I like most is to watch situations like re0 that are all dead ends. The author suddenly comes up with a trick to turn the situation upside down. The feeling of intracranial orgasm that makes my skin crawl. I can't stop [take a closer look]. Then the plot is very stomach-ache. If you want to get into the trap, please make sure you don't have stomach-ache. Let's talk about a few highlights. There are basically all the women included. The male protagonist has a succubus physique. If you skip chapters, be sure to note that it is very common for a few more women to suddenly appear. No NTR, no wife (believe me). The author's handling of showing the background and past of the male protagonist is not very good, which is very embarrassing. This book is not a cool book, the male and female protagonists are all brain-powerful. The author also shows us some of his so-called views on love and re-examines what a so-called good person is.

Yes, but it's a pity that there is a problem with the setting. It is obviously a Japanese light novel but it was not pointed out. As a result, a group of abstract patriots came in. Again, it is okay to be patriotic, but don't seem to be unable to do anything except China.

First of all, let me say that this book is super good-looking, much better than the one I recommended. The author has no avatar or name, and it feels like he is a big boss with a small account. Then here's my personal opinion on the plot (there are some spoilers, but I won't give out the details): the first half of the story is actually about completing the system mission to save the girl, and the second half is about the romance commission. But I always feel that the protagonist's emotional line is not too obvious in the second half. Moreover, there are no signs of completion in the system tasks. I always feel that the author is paving the way for something. Waiting for the completion of the module entrusted by Lianyan, there will be a big wave. After all, in my opinion, there is no heroine given by the system who has completed the redemption, such as: Jane, Xu, and Ye. But the author must not run away after finishing the commission. I really want to read it. Ps: The author writes thoughtfully, which is very attractive. The author's writing about stallions also makes me happy. So use it with confidence, no matter how the author's plot changes, it will still be very interesting. The writing in the back is weird, and I feel that the main reason is that there are too many women. For example, in the part about the three-person bet, I also wrote a lot about other female protagonists, and now Ye Ju, it also feels like there are a lot more things, and the main plot is not advanced. And there has always been a nasty point. I don't understand why the author arranged six women on a dormitory bed, and kept emphasizing that the roommates are also in the dormitory. These six people, and Lin An, who can't find a house to live together, and the roommates of the dormitory want to promote the plot, it is Lin An who goes back to find them, and then promotes the plot. Why should we be placed in the dormitory? The author repeatedly emphasized this point more than once. Finally, I can only say that the author was born on the wrong platform. On the light novel platform, you can write extras, if lines, and character biographies. This novel will be more eye-catching. The current feeling is that all the things mentioned by the author are mixed together, making people feel cumbersome and confusing. Come on author.

This subject matter is indeed quite unique. Can't say it looks good. But it's really okay. [Laughing and crying] I can't tell. The more I write, the worse it gets. The male host can't stand it. The hostess couldn't stand it. In fact, we can't see the emotions between the male and female protagonists. Why does the male protagonist want to pursue the female protagonist? Just because of 10 million? Just because he will become your significant other in the future? But the male protagonist's initial character design was that he didn't want to cause trouble. And the reason why we can't see the relationship period is because the male protagonist is really irreplaceable to the female protagonist? At least it's completely invisible from the front. There is nothing to prove that the male protagonist is special. If there is no halo of the male protagonist and no wisdom, many things cannot be explained at all. Why the male protagonist can do everything and why the female protagonist has those problems are not explained clearly. It's impossible to make a bunch of them and then force them to make up for it. Then, each heroine also has problems. Maybe the author wanted to create a heroine with different problems. But the character of the heroine is really strange. Apart from the beauty given by the author, they are really just a group of problem children without their own characteristics. Of course these are not the most important. The most important thing is that I really can't see the feelings between the male and female protagonists. I just saw that the male protagonist regarded it as his mission to contact and retain the female protagonist for the sake of money and his assertive character. Then the heroine inexplicably developed a great liking for the hero. As for feelings? I really didn't see it. I didn't see companionship, I didn't see special words, and I didn't see any help. He doesn't even have a good relationship with the male protagonist's roommates. Secondly, since the main plot is about the mutual redemption of the male and female protagonists, I don't understand the meaning of some supporting characters written to promote the main plot? For example, turning an ordinary girl into the top 10 school beauty among tens of thousands of people within a month? By asking the girl to pay hundreds of thousands for plastic surgery, training, etc. Is this realistic? Then what's the point of the male and female protagonists doing it so actively? In addition to the low number of words, has he made progress in the emotional and redemption lines of the male and female protagonists? So the backend is really watery, and I really can't see the unique feelings of the male and female protagonists at all. Instead of writing like this, it's better to just brush the copy without using the female protagonist, just for money.

The content of the plot is very good, every girl can be taken care of, and no female protagonist will be missed. The current plot is on the plain side, and I look forward to the male protagonist eating meat. I sincerely hope that the first time is my orange🍊[shy]

Four stars, the subject matter is great, but there are many poisonous points. Every female protagonist has a process, but Xiao Xun'er's process is too simple, and Xiao Feier and Gui Zhixue did not explain clearly, they were confused, and the pseudo-strong plot directed by Ye Ju at the end really shocked me. Ren Yingying, the female supporting role, should be dismissed soon There are too many scenes, and the relationship with the male protagonist is complicated. Don't enrich the character of the male protagonist like this. At the end of the article, Eno and another woman have no role at the end, or the woman who walks with the male protagonist on a prosperous road has no role at the end. The toxic part will wait until I have time to review the content of the book and reply to this comment below👇🏻

I only saw over 100 pictures. I think the book is quite nice. Come on, author, I hope you can write the ending. The analysis is wonderful, and each heroine has her own characteristics. Then I skipped to the last one. Do I have so many people? It feels like there is a big reversal ahead. I only regret that I saw it too late. If I could read it earlier, I might be able to give the author more gifts and see more of the plot. [Almost crying] There are 800,000 words missing. I don't know how much is missing, I hope the author will continue writing

I'll give it four stars. The name is more in line with Shuangwen's style, but what the author wants to write doesn't quite fit the title. Hahaha, these are all minor issues. I watched it for about 4 days, intermittently. I watched it around 4 o'clock tonight. Let me briefly talk about the male protagonist. His mind and strength are all on the line. The emotional line between him and the female protagonists is relatively clear. Some may think it is a bit fast, but you can guess it by looking at the previous details. It is a light novel style. The male protagonist is actually a bit difficult for many of us readers to get into. Reading this novel from a third-person perspective is a bit brain-burning and not mindless enough. Therefore, the reason for the low rating is that many people haven't seen what they want to enjoy after reading it for a long time (me too). Of course, I am interested in reading it. It's Gong Ya's line. From the few words Gong Ya said at the beginning, I roughly guessed that it must be related to Shui'er. When I saw the couple competition, I thought this was the way to break the situation. But at the end, Orange made a line about women's phobia, hehe, I didn't even understand it. Thinking about the previous details carefully, I also I haven't read it out. There may be something I didn't see. In fact, it deviated a little from the outline in the later period. I don't know what the author's outline probably said, but it must have deviated. There are too many characters, and their emotional line planning is no problem. Therefore, 4 stars are for the characterization and writing. I can only say that the plot has a lot of twists. You can still find it if you look carefully. I really have to pick one out. I also think that Gong Ya, whose surname is not Jane, is the most suitable heroine of this book. OK, it is rare to review this book. There is nothing wrong with the book. Just read it patiently.