The System Granted Me Immortality, Yet I’m Hiding Out in a Little Mountain Village!

Chapter 160: Baihe is making a lot of mistakes, you are really naughty, I have to let everyone know

It looks good, but please be more subtle in what you write next. The protagonist is basically invincible, non-toxic, and the pace is not slow. I look forward to the plot behind it. Don't read it after chapter 150, it's getting addictive. The first part is fine, but the second part of the plot is the same.

Three years later, five years later, I feel that my strength has not improved much, only my realm. I will send you a combat simulator as a tool to detect the gap in strength. You have only cultivated your realm in three years, and the combat simulator will not be used once. [Eat melon] There are many little poisonous spots, you can take a look if you can bear it [Eat melon]

The writing is quite good, but the number of people watching it is gradually decreasing. A large part of the reason is the update problem. Before, there was only one chapter a day, and the plot did not reach any climax. It was bland and few people watched it. Several other books in the same period were read by more than 100,000 people each with two or three updates. At the end of the day, the number of readers was stable at 100,000+. There is still a problem with the update rhythm.

Come! The author read to me my solemn oath: Start today and never change. I will not watch dramas, travel, or sick. No love! Worthy of readers, worthy of youth, worthy of in the future. As an author, I solemnly swear: I firmly believe that I am An excellent author. Code writing is my bounden duty, I have unlimited potential and I'm not afraid of it Endure hardship! I can code diligently, I am the keyboard in the dark, the Great Wall of Internet literature As a guard above, I voluntarily dedicate my life to codewords. It's wonderful, I love it so much! Come on!

Good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking [Recommended Lineup Sharing] ## [Wei Guo Judgment Flow] ## [Operation Ideas] @@The Lord has the highest priority to choose Sima Yiyi. Sima Yiyi's skills will add Sima Yi, the core general of the judgment flow, so that you can get the core generals of the judgment flow in the early stage and accelerate the growth of the lineup. If you don't get Sima Yiyi, you can also try to use Li Shimin's skills to get Sima Yi, or use Cao Cao's skills to get other players' Sima Yi. @@When the tent is at level 1, you can take Xiahou Dun first to stabilize your combat power. After the camp reaches level 2, when you see Duan Qiaoxiao, you can go get Duan Qiaoxiao and start to judge. If the Lord chooses Sima Yiyi, you will have the opportunity to get Sima Yi at this time. In addition, you can also use Wang Yi to add attributes to work cards such as Xiahou Dun. @@The 4-star card takes Zhen Ji to steadily increase the number of judgments, while Zhang He can also convert the effects of failed judgments into combat power. Xue Lingyun can increase the frequency of judgments in the battle, and when paired with Dian Wei, it can trigger more judgments. In the later stage, look for Sima Yi first. Sima Yi is the core of the entire judgment flow, and should be placed on the right side of the field as much as possible. In the later stage, Zhen Ji still needs to increase the number of judgments, and Cao Pi can gain attributes every time other friendly allies make judgments. Dian Wei and Xi Zhicai can add attributes to other allies through injuries while protecting Sima Yi.

"Baibai", the writing is excellent, "Yuri harem", the description of women's clothing and body is good, and there is almost no description of female abortion. Group portraits, infrastructure construction, cultivating immortals and farming to gain power, and cultivating relationships. The supporting characters are well created. The heroine is a queen of all women, and the female is invincible. Overall, it is not bad, and the writing is worth collecting.

It looks good, but some places are wrong. If you correct the mistakes, you can't just correct part of the mistakes [face covering]. Also, if you can speed up the main line, we have to see the post [shy]

I seem to have seen something similar somewhere, but the protagonist is a man. He lives in a place called Xiaohe Village or something. He later became a teacher and had a relationship with a big man who cultivated immortality. Overall not bad

When the protagonist calls mom, he has to say "mother" or it won't sound old-fashioned. Overall, it's a good write-up [sending heartfelt wishes].