Demon Slayer: The Journey Begins as Yoriichi's Younger Sister

Guiding the way: Chapter 176-177 Ren's confession failed (didn't say it out) Chapter 213, Yu Xian confessed Chapter 239, Chapter 485 A goes up (endures on top) Then I was killed by a sword based on my lifespan [crying] Later, I saw the reincarnated Shinobu, and Shi and Tsukuni Enichi Now in the Shinigami world, I've been waiting for Shinobu to be resurrected and eat sweets. Evaluation: The writing is very good, the characters are very three-dimensional, Ikuko's personality is different in different periods, the conflicting emotions with Iwakatsu Tsukuni are also well described, and the plot of mutual damage with Su Shi is very interesting, especially the scenes where Su Shi has to draw Ikuko's blood for research King, I even [palmed my face] when I drew out the shadow. All in all, it's a very good Demon Slayer fanfic [Like] [Like] [Like] It's just that the world of Bleach is very unfriendly to someone like me who has never seen it (I specifically went to see Bleach). I hope there will be plots about Demon Slayer in the future.

It is a Mahayana work that combines the elements of fellow fans and Tomatoes, and the emotional expression is very delicate. Except for the plot in the middle where Mi Douzi turns into a ghost. All very reasonable and nice to look at. I just feel like the author was a little too hasty in writing. Take your time. It would be better to pick out some details to write. [Laughs][laughs] There's no technique, it's all emotion. It's already too much of a drag. So many emotions are enough for an anime, but in a novel, I couldn't read it at all.

It's a rare true love story. I only hope that in Bleach, A-nin and Ikuko can still have a future. Although it's ridiculous, I really like them. I've seen enough of Shimizu in Demon Slayer. Give me some sweetness in Bleach. Please! ! !

The best Demon Slayer fanfic in my opinion [almost crying] From the main story, Ikuko's efforts to grow up, the main story's intersection with the protagonists Dan and Hashira, the story of the original Demon Slayer team returning to life after the death of Muzan, and the ongoing passing of the past people [crying] [crying] [crying] This novel is really worth reading for those who love Demon Slayer IP, even passers-by can understand it [like] [like] [like] Let's talk about some personal feelings. To be honest, the plot of Mukai's original return to social life after his death was quite boring at first, but as time went by and the lifespan theory emerged, it slowly became more interesting again through Sword Ga. I look forward to the future modern chapter, where Ikuko can reunite with Shinobu and everyone else in the Demon Slayer Squad at school [crying] No, bro, why did you write that the God of Death is addicted? 25.6.16 I've been reading it for a while and I've read the latest one. The author is also great. He writes from a few hundred years before the main line of Demon Slayer to a hundred years after the main line of Demon Slayer, and then to a few hundred years before the main line of Bleach. Now the latest plot timeline is almost to the time when a family's parents are getting ready to get married. It's quite interesting. I haven't watched Bleach, but I watched it with gusto and searched for some experience in setting up the characters. I'll find an opportunity to catch up on Bleach [Thinking] 25.9.24 I'm going, and I'm still insisting on updating [face covering] It's been almost a year since I last complained about Death's addiction and never finished it 26.5.9

It looks good. I think the part where Nezuko turns into a ghost is actually quite normal. It's not because of the lack of writing skills, but because Ikuko is not invincible in terms of setting. She even has a little inferiority complex because she couldn't stop Black Death Mou, which makes her very tangled... So much so that Nezuko made her own decision later in the article. To be honest, even Iibashira's Nezuko couldn't save it... This is because the style and plot direction are different, and there may be more emotional expressions? ) All in all, it's still very good. I recommend more.

I finished reading it in one go, update soon! Update soon! It's a good Demon Slayer fanfic. The author can write scenes that are sad and funny at the same time. The heroine is almost not cheating, and she is as beautiful as she is strong. There are some parts in the middle that gave me a sense of déjà vu like an immortal novel. Anyway, it's not a loss in getting into the trap. One more reminder, you don't have to open the paragraph reviews for the first few chapters of this book. I don't know why some readers are too violent, as if they are deliberately looking for trouble. I've finished it, and overall it's good. There are flaws, but they're not major problems. The characterization and plot description can be said to be top-notch. The identity of the protagonist brings a feeling that other Demon Slayer fanfics cannot. Although the relationship line is a bit sloppy and abrupt, the relationship between Ikuko and Shinobu is still acceptable. Anyway, as long as you accept the orange, I think this book is worth reading.

The author's writing is not bad, and the plot is also very good. I believe that there is no one who reads Demon Slayer fanfiction who has not read Chinatsu. I have a high opinion of Chinatsu for personal reasons, so in my opinion, this book is only slightly worse than it, or even as good as it. There is also Yuri, whom I like, although the heroine may not come out until a hundred chapters later.

The emotions are described very delicately. The author's description of the relationship between Ikuko and Shinobu made me less shocked and (because I am a thunder dream) more normal. It felt like Ikuko was forcing a smile, and the funny atmosphere was not as good as before. I didn't skip a chapter, but until after Death, I couldn't stand it anymore. Really, it was out of my original expectation. I originally thought that Ikuko would go to heaven with Shinobu after his death, but he suddenly appeared in Death, which I had never understood. I didn't read many of the later ones, and I always felt a sense of dissonance. The story was so long that I almost forgot that it was Ikuko's personal biography.

Overall, it's a good read, and it really has the feel of the original work, but I think the only drawback is that the ending feels a bit delayed. There are more than 100 chapters for Infinite City alone, and after the end of Infinite City, there are more than 100 chapters of other content, but I haven't read these. But if you just like the original Demon Slayer, you can just watch Mugen Castle and then I won't watch it anymore. But this book really brought me a lot of happiness. When I was in school, I would secretly hide under the quilt and read the two books updated every morning. It is really meaningful in my heart

The shortcoming of this book is that it is not exciting enough, which has caused a thunderstorm for some people, resulting in a mess in the early comment area. One of the reasons why I like this book is that it is not a cool novel. It is too difficult to find a fanfic book that is not a cool novel. First of all, the character creation is not OOC and fits its setting. The plot advancement is not exciting enough, but it is suitable. Reason, the growth process of the protagonist is very clear, from the beginning of laughing and joking and trying to change his brother, to the middle ending of being afraid of death in order to avoid misfortune, and not making changes until it is confirmed that he has entered the main line. This is a distinct growth path, which is different from the growth path of Shuangwen. The character The shortcomings are also shown to everyone. Perhaps the protagonist's timidity is very controversial, but this also highlights the character's personality. A character without controversy is hollow. The most important thing is that it conforms to the main tone of Demon Slayer's worldview. This book is destined not to be suitable for most people. It is a slow-moving process and timid. The protagonist, delicate writing style, but the controversial aspects are also the core of this book. Just like I don't like the plot advancement of Shuang Wenli, this style of writing will not be accepted by some people. I just hope that like me, I won't mess with the narrative method I don't like, and maintain a friendly discussion environment.