Tomb Raiding: Oh No, I Think I’ve Run into Tomb Raiders

I like a lot of CP, but the heroine is not to my taste. She is too soft and licky. She cries at every turn. She cries when she is bullied and cries when she loses her virginity. I don't understand what there is to cry about. It's just a few men who can have sex with each other. I still prefer the scumbag Neptune.

It's very interesting, but I gave it four points because of the stuck points. You can tell from the beginning that the author just started writing, and the writing style is very average. It's really hard to stick to it. I read it four or five times, and every time I read one or two chapters, I couldn't put it down. But I was really curious about the subsequent plot, so I skipped the previous plot this time. The first part is probably about the four white moonlights in the bottle of evil black flowers. In fact, I personally don't know what happened in detail. The plot in the latter part is good, and I can clearly see that the writing is improving in the later part. I really like watching the plot when the heroine is with everyone. The only flaw is that the heroine feels a bit weak. Although I know that the heroine is taking the supporting route, I personally hope that she can have some strength. The system has a lot of roles and talks a lot. I disliked him very much at the beginning. I felt that the system talked a lot and often dug holes for the heroine. But after the system disappeared, I found that I couldn't live without it. I beg the author to bring Yunyun back quickly. I look forward to the subsequent plot. I want to see the Shura field where the Zhang family ancestors, the young guards and the juniors are in the group. After the system became Fu Bao, I personally felt that the plot was not that good. In the previous plot, this was still the case. The heroine at least had the right to choose whether she wanted those men. After the heroine chose to accept those men, she would sign a contract and then join the group. After the system became Fu Bao, Fu Bao's approach was that he thought it would be good for the heroine, so he acquiesced that he had made the choice first, and that these men had feelings for the heroine. Without the heroine's consent, Jiang Ren accepted the heroine's harem and gave them the right to join the group. Before coming to the Tang Dynasty, when it was still the original system, although the heroine's character was indecisive, she was still acceptable. At least she still put her own happiness first. But in the latest chapters, I feel that the heroine no longer has the right to choose. From the moment those people enter the group, it has been acquiesced that these are people in the heroine's harem, and even the heroine herself does not know. After that, the heroine is very indecisive. You say treat them as younger brothers. If they like you, it is okay for you to refuse, but in the eyes of these men, it is useless even if the heroine refuses, they will still stalk you. I think it's better to let the heroine accept them directly. If you really don't like them, the most you can do is to keep them in the harem and continue to treat them as younger brothers. If you don't want to see them, you can't see them. It's just a little kissing benefit. If you give them, you can give them. And why should the fight between men bother the heroine? Can't we just let them solve it themselves? Isn't it famous that the Zhang family has the right to speak if they win a battle? When there is a conflict, let them go out and fight on their own. If they are killed, it will be considered a layoff, so as to save the heroine herself trouble. The narrations kept describing how those people would feel distressed when they saw the heroine cry, and then vent their anger on their love rivals. I was thinking, part of the reason why the heroine was sad was because Zhang Wuya was ignorant. Since you can't see him sad, then don't do it. Must you use this method to gain sympathy from others? The same goes for the heroine. Since it's so difficult, she should just accept it. Again, at worst, she will be brought into the harem and treated like a younger brother. It would be normal for a younger brother to kiss his older sister. If he really wants to do something extreme, other men will compete. When will it be his turn? I still like System Yunyun, and now that Yunyun is back, I feel that the plot is a lot better.

The author is so good at writing! This is so awesome! Every world is wonderful, and the heroine is so adorable! The author is really awesome. Each male protagonist and female protagonist are written in a super loving way, and the sweetness is beyond the limit! Especially the heroine's delicate and soft character is simply irresistible! No wonder everyone falls in love with her! Every time Wu Xie was made blush by her unintentional words, Zhang Qiling silently guarded but couldn't help but get jealous, Xie Yuchen doted on her while using his poisonous tongue, and the black blind man teased her ruthlessly but protected her. The members of Laojiumen also had their own charms, the gentle and domineering, the sinister and seductive, all of them made people's hearts flutter! The Zhang family is even more amazing. There are so many men, and there are all types of men. You can find a book that will satisfy any type you like. It's so comprehensive! The arrogant Zhang Haike, the calm elders of the Zhang family, and the mysterious and powerful juniors of the Zhang family, all of them are addictive! It's so delicious!

All-oriented, the male protagonist Quan Jie has a lot of scenes with the Zhang family boy group. I watched a lot of them and my face turned yellow. I liked it very much ~ [shy][shy][shy]. Come on, Dayan baby, there will be many more follow-ups ~ Especially the same male protagonist in different time and space cooking together, etc. I am looking forward to it [shy][shy][shy]. And just write according to the author's ideas. Those who love baby girls are the best ~ [love] [love] [love].

When I first read it, I felt it was a bit immature. After reading it, I felt that it was very disappointing. As I continued reading, I felt that the author is really a good actor. [Like] Let the heroine eat with us so well [I learned]

When I first read this book, I was overwhelmed by Mary Sule [laughing] but as the words in the chapter said, it gradually got better. I really like the relationship between Yueyue and the male protagonists. They are sincere and pure, with laughter and tears. Fortunately, he has the guarantee promised by the author (~￣▽￣) ~ The characters created by the author are also very three-dimensional and full, showing readers the ancestral crying skills of the Zhang family (≧∇≦)/ The only regret is that the bookstore is shallow and the two updates a day are not enough (இдஇ; ). It seems like a long way to reunite with the original four masters, and I am really looking forward to their expressions when they learn that they have hundreds of more brothers (σ･ω･)σYO♪ I like the author's writing style and I'm looking forward to his new works, so please do your best (≧∇≦)/

It's super beautiful, better than other books. Delicate writing style But can you be a little more cruel? For example, some unnecessary people should not write about cultivating immortals, unless you want to write about spiritual energy recovery in the future. After all, if there is no spiritual energy recovery and immortality in the later stage, it will be a secret. If a secret is known to too many people, and it's the kind of person who has too much savvy in the world of tomb robbers, there will be problems.

Super pretty! ! ! Whoever sees knows it! ! ! Author, you can't be a eunuch and you can't stop updating, even one chapter a day will do. I will chase you forever, write a long novel! ! ! I haven't seen such a good-looking article in a long time. Author, please be more confident, everyone who criticizes you is jealous of you! ! ! The heroine is innocent and kind but not a holy mother. When she makes mistakes, she will reflect on herself instead of questioning others. She has the three views of a normal person. The most important thing is that this is cultivation + redemption + tomb robbery + time travel + system + group pet + heartthrob + no cruelty + heroic competition + Shura field. From Nine Gates to Tomb Robbery, the system is very good to the heroine. The heroine is also very lucky in opening gift packages. The heroine has Qilin bloodline that can turn into a Qilin. The system tasks will not conflict with the heroine. The heroine is very relaxed when she is redeemed, and she also teaches them to cultivate immortality... I always tell the truth. The only shortcoming is probably that the heroine has no cultivation and no strength, and is weak.

After reading your work, I am deeply inspired. Your exquisite writing style and vivid plot made me feel like I was in it, feeling the joy, anger, sorrow and joy of each character. However, I also want to give you some advice. The update speed of your work is moderate, but it is also important to slow down occasionally and give yourself time to breathe. After all, creation also requires the accumulation of energy and inspiration. I look forward to more of your masterpieces. Even if they are not finished, they are highly recommended! I hope you can maintain this enthusiasm and creativity and continue to move forward. Between the pages of the book, the seeds of the story quietly take root and sprout in the heart. The author's brushwork is like a spring breeze, gently awakening the sleeping imagination. Between the lines, there is sometimes a magnificent ocean, sometimes a deep and quiet forest. Every plot is like a window, leading me through time and space to explore the unknown world. The words are picturesque, the world under the author's pen is full of flowers, and the picture of life is slowly unfolding in front of my eyes. Those words are like a string of pearls, connecting the pearl chain of time. Each chapter remembers the ups and downs of life. I love reading, because in the book, the joys, anger, sorrows and joys are so real, as if I can touch the reality of every emotion. The spring breeze brings warmth, and the pages of the book fly. The words flowing from the pen are like a timely rain, nourishing the readers' hearts. Author, please don't let the rain stop. May your writing bloom with flowers. May your words be like spring silkworms that will die before they die. Let us look forward to every update as a feast for the soul [laughing]

Ah, it's so good-looking, I highly recommend it. The heroine is ignorant and a newbie in love, but in my eyes she's not that silly and sweet. She regards love as friendship, but other men don't think so. Damn, I'd like to ask about the approximate update time.