My Monster, Mr.

It's very interesting. Nowadays, many double male protagonists are similar to romance novels. If you change the gender, it will be a romance. This one is a double male protagonist. Come on, I hope there will be more! The characters are very good. I haven't seen such a close-knit book in a long time. It's super nice. I'm grateful to the author. I really like this book.

First of all, the content of this book is good. The time travel between two worlds and the character of the protagonist are also good. But a very serious point is the way of expression. When you write, can you leave a little space and a paragraph with a space? This will be easier and easier to read. And when you write, it is best to write clearly, otherwise the two of you will keep looking at each other. It is best to leave a blank space for scene changes or use a more obvious description to let people know that there is a change. Otherwise, you will skip it without seeing it several times during the phone call. You know, it's a good idea to pay attention to these things. Otherwise, you'd better check them out every time you see them. Also, there is no table of contents. The table of contents needs to be written a little bit. [Smile] Also, if you don't think it's too little, I'll update it soon. Then we can add more confrontations with monsters, maybe a few hundred words, and the content will be richer. There is nothing blocking about the description of daily life.

Come on, author, I like this book very much. I looked for several books yesterday and couldn't read it. But as soon as I clicked on this book, I was attracted by the author's delicate writing style. I also like the characters very much [laughing] [laughing] Come on [laughing] [laughing]

I like reading this kind of book with a light mood, and I even like the gentle feeling the book gives me, and I feel that they are all so real. I hope it will get better and better.

It's quite good-looking, and when I read the content, I knew that the author was a boy. Hehehe [laughing evilly] There is a big difference in the style of two-male protagonists written by boys and girls. I just like this kind of refreshing, after all, only using boys can better understand what boys want to see [laughs]

NAfter finishing reading, I realized there were no book reviews [shocked][shocked][shocked] Good-looking themes are particularly appealing to me. Whether it is the great love of Lu Xuan and Wu Yang, Han Song Zhiyi is young and bold, Xiao Li Tianle is brave and aggressive, Shitou Jiangjiang is full of vigor, and there are many characters like Grandma, Song Zhe, Lu Yang, Ding, etc. The characters are all very well portrayed. The idea of ​​time travel is also very good, but some parts may not be logically compatible, but overall it is still a good book. The author is also very diligent in updating the extra chapters. I really like this book. I really like this book. It is useless to say more. My length should be able to explain [laughing] [laughing]

At first, Lu Xuan really felt like a good old man to me, but later on he was actually okay, but at first he subconsciously retained the warm and gentle instincts of an educated society. For the first time, Wu Yang had a different view of Lu Xuan, a simple and kind-hearted person. Now, looking at Lu Xuan, he is just a walking radish. My suggestion is that next time you write an article, you can be more reserved with the protagonist, and don't help others casually. The real end of mankind is mostly due to sinister people's hearts, and they will not be as easy to talk about as in the article, and the sense of substitution is not strong. Also, the chapter names are very inconvenient. Nothing else. It's the first time Xiaobai writes like this. It's already very good. Let's keep up the good work [Bookshelf plus one][Bookshelf plus one]

It's really beautiful. I don't understand why it's not popular. Is it because it's on Tomato? I think this book can be published directly. Go and read it. It's really good. I'm kidding you. I'm a puppy. Look at my bookshelf. Is there a book that doesn't look good? , So it's not a loss to your eyes, take a quick look, Xiao Wu is super cute, handsome, and well-behaved. It feels like Xiao Lu bites back the tongue's inner seed. Xiao Lu is even more cute, with full contrast. Even the slingshot God of War is so cute that you want to take a bite. I haven't seen much of it, but once I see it, I came here to comment, because it really pokes me, it is a miracle that such a book can be published on Tomato 📖. I feel that it is not worthy of Western Persimmon, but it is not popular. Maybe it is because the author's name is not good enough, but I like it very much. I feel like marrying the author. In short, it is not a loss to invest in it. I will talk about it in detail after I read it all. [Love] [Love] [Love] You must see it [Love] [Love] [Love] It's really beautiful!

Very interesting, this book is really to my liking! ! I haven't seen a book like this in a long time! When will Wu Yang realize that he likes Lu Xuan? It's okay to have a slightly sour plot, but don't be too cruel! ! You should also pay attention to your rest and be happy every day [blowing kiss]

I know that the author wanted to create a kind and gentle character for his character, but it is a bit puzzling to be so compassionate in the end of the world. It just feels silly and sweet. Besides, there are not so many good people in the supporting cast in the end of the world. People are selfish. The first part is too idealistic. Another point is that the plot is too slow and has no highlights. If the protagonist is a growth type, the speed is too slow... Apart from these, I still like this book. Keep up the good work.