Quick Transmigration: After Going Crazy, the Sickly Obsessive Big Shot Pretends to Be Good Again

The author definitely has a vest! ! Is it possible that a writing novice can't write well? Unless you are a genius! The emotions and plot rhythm are quite good. The character design in the first world is cute, but after getting past that level, it really tastes good. The second world tastes sour and sweet, but it's actually not bad. Although I watched it while wiping my tears, it's really not very sad! Gong's character is more delicate than in the first world (he wants people to take care of him and surround him). To be honest, this is the first time I've seen this kind of attack character design. It's quite interesting. The main author's writing is very good and you can read it.

I read the book when it first opened. I read it because it was labeled "Tian Chong", so I ran as fast as I could. [Smile] I finished reading the first two worlds. The protagonist of the first world is a yandere. I was almost blown away when I read it. It's not that the description of his character is not good. The description is really good. It's true that this character is a yandere. But I came here because of the label of sweet pet. I can feel a sense of powerlessness coming from across the article. How can I put it, the protagonist Shou does condone the protagonist Gong, but I really can't accept what the protagonist Gong does (if you like to watch that kind of yandere, you can watch it) The second world, under attack, is immersive. This author also said later, don't look at the controlled ones. I am not controlled, and I didn't care at the time. But even if I am not controlled, I still feel that this company is controlled... Anyway, it is far from the sweet pet in my mind (maybe the last one is sweet):) If you don't mind, then you can enter. The characters are not broken, the writing is still good, and it will be immersive in the later stage.

Very delicate love, like bamboo shoots after a continuous spring rain, gentle, beautiful, grand, pure, green, clean, silently pulling you. Loving you is as simple as breathing, like a unique signal. As long as I see you, everything in my heart and eyes is you. It is not so much a fire-like love as a spring breeze, not passionate but gentle and tolerant. Durable and firm

Wow, the author's writing style is really delicate. Although the characters in the first world and the second world are a bit complicated, which makes many people a little confused, but there are thousands of different people, and their thoughts on buying each one are different. Every character is very three-dimensional and well-depicted. It feels very immersive. Really, some of the things written are true. Wow, I'm surprised. It's so enjoyable. I hope the author will work hard [sending heart] [sending heart] [exploration] [love] [admiration]

Nice! ! The first love-brained puppy in the world is really cute. Yuyu was also manipulated by the cute puppy. It was very easy to knock.

Express your own opinions. First of all, I like this article very much. Each world of immersive fast travel has different character backgrounds. There is no system and it feels like a short unit. Secondly, the author's writing style is very good, with a light prose flavor (especially the fourth world is somewhat similar to the writing style of "Connoisseur"). The rhythm is great, the length of the story can be controlled, and the pace can be fast or slow. If it were longer, I might have to abandon the article (I like half-length rather than short, slow and fast, immersive). The characters are all quite plump and not too one-sided (there are occasional single characters, but not obvious, and the sense of layering is great), but I feel that the character design of the supporting characters could be a little richer (it would be more exciting, only the protagonist is a bit monotonous, I personally like the contrast of red flowers and green leaves). Because of the different character backgrounds, different preferences can be satisfied. However, the tone of the story is a bit sour and sweet (especially at the end of the second world), but it is handled just right. It will not be too sweet or greasy, nor will it drag out due to a lot of pulling. The author is very good at symbolizing (the fourth world and the fifth world are visible), whether it is Xifu Begonia or merit beads, they are all very good foils in the same direction. It's my first time to write a long review, so don't be offended. The author is great and I will keep following it. But I like Tuenwen and maybe I forgot about it after reading it [face covering] [face covering]. However, this book is very good. I forgot about it twice but picked it up anyway. It shows that it is really good reading. Don't read it if it's extremely controlled/attack-controlled, or if you like sweet pets with no cruelty. Emmmmm Regarding the sweet pet label, maybe there are sweet pets in some worlds😄For example, Shen Jingtan is very fond of it (forced explanation), likes sour and sweet, ambiguous pull... (The characters in each world are different) you can apply!

Super pretty. The characters are full of personality. I like the characters in each world very much, and the plot is also very good. The relationship between the protagonists is really sweet [shy] After reading the book reviews, there were many people who gave it low ratings. I looked at their questions. Probably because I feel that being loved is too humble. Regardless of my personality, it is completely inconsistent with the title. [Thinking] It may be a personal shortcoming. Personally, I don't particularly like reading pornographic stories, or those that are too licking. I think the first world is well written, but the drugging part is really problematic (probably related to Gong's character, which is very morbid and extreme. But this kind of behavior is really low-key, and the explanation is a bit hasty). The rest is pretty good. The writing is also very good [Love] I think the second world is very well written. Maybe I personally like the tsundere character? I personally feel that Gong's kick at the beginning was because he was originally a kid from a rich family and was very arrogant, so even if we didn't kiss him, it would be normal for him to kick him out of anger based on his status at the time (not that I agree with this behavior, but I think it is more reasonable due to the character of Gong in the article). But it depends on the individual's ability to accept it. [Blow a kiss] [Blow a kiss] If you can't accept this behavior, you can't stand it. Because the characters in each world are different, I think I can make some adjustments. Although it is immersive and not OOC, after all, it is a quick time travel, not a physical person. I think it looks better and more stable with a little bit of my own personality. I don't think it ruined the [shy] attack's character. He is a pampered young master [thinking] [thinking] and he can get angry at will knowing that someone will coax him. So I think the interaction between the two of them is very sweet. Moreover, in terms of personality, if a tsundere's partner is a boring person who doesn't know how to coax, he won't be able to taste sweetness, which is even more incompatible with a sweet pet. And the character of the main body is like that, whenever something happens, he will apologize to me or something. Although it may be a bit humble, I think it is more sweet [shy]. One is willing to make trouble and the other is willing to spoil. This is not a sweet pet. (Maybe different from ordinary sweet pets) There is also the problem of Gong and Shou. Gong's father is a problem, and it may be related to Shou's character. After all, it was an immersive role-playing, not yet OOC. Shou himself had a low self-esteem and felt that the time he spent with Gong was stolen, so even if Gong's father didn't say anything, he would immediately think of this, and it was expected that he would leave. But the reconciliation in the end was really hasty. I personally think it has something to do with the title Sweet Pet. After all, they are all sweet pets. Of course, the problems that arise cannot last too long, so maybe the author simply wrote about it. This also depends on the individual's acceptance of the article [Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss] Although it may not be very friendly to controlled (the author also wrote "Controlled Don't Enter" at the end of the first chapter of the second world, which may have been added later). Then there is something wrong with the title. Sweet Pet, I think it is quite consistent with [Adoration] [Adoration] and Qiangqiang. I don't feel a lot of [Shy]. It can be changed a little. Finally, I really like the large letters, and the writing style is a plus! ! The above is just my personal opinion [shy][shy]

The author's writing style is really great! I especially like the fourth world, Shen Jingtan and Jiang Xiyu! Shen Jingtan raised Jiang Xiyu very well! Teach him to love himself and then love others. Every part of Jiang Xiyu's body has the shadow of Shen Jingtan. The pattern is huge! Shen Jingtan will raise Jiang Xiyu to a high platform step by step, allowing him to see all the beautiful scenes in the world and broaden his horizons and world view. He would not use love as a reason to imprison Jiang Xiyu, he would let Jiang Xiyu go further. I can only say that the author's writing is really very good! The second world is also very beautiful! [Send heart] "You are still young. You can say you love me, or you can say you don't love me in the future. This is your right." "If you find a better supporter and abandon me, I won't blame you." "At least now, I am the mountain you can rely on, right?" Maybe this is the charm of the elderly! Even after years of precipitation, I am still willing to love you and even pamper you! [Sending Hearts][Admiration][Admiration] Super beautiful! Highly recommended! ! !

Oh my god, what kind of fairy is the third world! ! ! "Looking through the dark clouds and seeing the clear sky of Daliang" is simply irresistible. The emotional description is very delicate, but the pulling is really a lot. It is full of tension. What is on the bright side is really a very, very beautiful love, vigorous and everything is beautiful. The author's writing style is very good, the protagonist's creation is really dynamic, and the characters are vivid on the page. The only thing missing may be the precipitation of time. The love written in Da Da is just like the previous novels, which are all explicit, so no matter how strong the feelings are, I always feel that something is missing, maybe details? Contrast? I dare not jump to conclusions. It feels like you put a lot of firewood into the fire. The fire burns very brightly and enthusiastically, but it will always be a red color. What else can you do if you appreciate the enthusiasm enough? Maybe some artistic conception is needed to make the fire appear solid and full. In the big novel, love is warm, lovely but not just warm. Some love does not need to be written out every word, but lingers in every behavior between the characters. They already exist there, it is natural and does not need any decoration. But if all this is the author's writing style, it is my presumption. The above is just my humble opinion. In essence, I think the article is excellent.

Really cute! ! ! ! I don't know if this is the right way to describe it. After reading a lot of fast-traveling articles, I gradually didn't know what genre I liked, so I thought about trying my luck in a new book. I think this is really the right choice, allowing me to meet the author and see them in the author's writing. I have always felt that the characterizations are very sweet, with the feeling that both sides are trying and going step by step. The outside world does not have much influence on them (at least in my opinion). Underneath their personalities, whether they are persistent and crazy or cautious, they all have sincere love. Plain and gradual love is never a derogatory term, which makes me feel very warm. I recommend babies to watch their sweet love with me [shy]