Gazing Toward the Immortal Path

It's a very good start. The writing method of crowdfunding and foundation building is novel. Although the writing style is light, it can still make the protagonist and some of the monks around him flesh and blood. There is quite a sense of friendship in it. It feels very good. It is a very good book so far.

Yuanying has written very well before. The struggles and opportunities in each realm, and the methods for breakthrough in each realm are also set up, which is eye-catching. At the same time, the method of human elixir is also very well set. The disadvantage is that the plot transition after Nascent Soul becomes faster, and the cultivation of the unit infant stage is supported by the story line. The plot becomes slightly empty after breaking through to God, which also leads to very fast plot transition in the later period. I think it may be that the author did not plan for After Yuan Ying in the initial outline, but this is just a minor flaw. Before Yuan Ying is the main part of the novel, and it is worth reading. Note: This is not a brainless article.

This book actually looks like a classic novel from the Ming and Qing Dynasties! The language is ancient vernacular, and the words and deeds of the characters are quite simple. It is not like the Shuangwen of today, and it is unique among Tomato's many novices. But it's really not too combustible, so it's still good to read patiently.

To be honest, it is better than most of Tomato's fairy tales. The opening dozens of chapters are really good at first glance. However, the writer becomes a bit weak as he goes on. The main problem is that the protagonist has not grown up. There is no change in mentality or behavior. The character is indecisive and submissive, but it is still pretty good! There is no big problem with logic! But I still hope that the author can write better and better!

It's so beautiful. It's hard to become an immortal. It's one step at a time. There's no talent, it's all about hard work. It is very practical to read, and the writing is delicate. There is no system, no exaggeration, no cheating, and it is a very pragmatic article.

The writing is sophisticated, both the protagonist and the supporting characters do things with basic logic, and the combat power has not collapsed yet. I will support it with five stars first.

Dear friend, Congratulations on completing a book with profound skills, smooth writing, and clear logical thinking. Your efforts and talents are admirable. I wish your creative path will become wider and wider! Recommend!

I have read this book intermittently several times, and I like the character of Little Marquis better. He is flesh and blood, and knows how to advance and retreat, which is rare. There are not many supporting characters in Tomatoes that are well described. High position and power are not the pinnacle. Being able to appreciate is the true meaning between people.

For today's people, reading a few fantasy novels can soothe the spiritual emptiness and learn some illusory immortal skills. It is also a kind of spiritual sustenance. I just read this novel and I don't have much understanding of the protagonist's character traits. However, for someone who has lived at the bottom since childhood, his personality is calm and unassuming, and he practices step by step. However, he still has a close temperament to the young man who pursues strength and is unwilling to be inferior to others.

The writing is very good, not exaggerated, and the content is described in detail and with flesh and blood.