The Space Bangle: A Couple's Path to Godhood Through Transmigration Across the Ages

The author writes very well, just like writing an essay, come on

It's beautiful. I like this kind of stuff collecting the most. I also like the male and female protagonists. I also hope that the female protagonists can travel through time together and be together forever [Love]

The author seems to like to describe characters, images, personalities, clothing, psychology, etc. He writes very carefully. Some scenes are written very carefully and meticulously. Some are too much and have no priority. Although beautiful words can make people have a sense of pictures and make people feel comfortable, too much description makes people tired. Book lovers are here to relax and read more relaxed and simple books. The author's too many descriptions slow down the progress of the book and make reading tiring. Book lovers who want to read the story will find it boring and can't read it. The author can write some short stories and submit them to literary journals. When writing this kind of book, it is better to reduce some more detailed descriptions. I hope the author can read my comments and make improvements in future books. Come on! There are many descriptions in the early stage, but the author is growing up, and he is also listening to readers' suggestions, and has changed his writing style. In the later period, starting with the orcs, the writing was pretty good. I just finished reading it all. This is a good novel. Keep up the good work, author!

Traveling through many times, being a strong woman, having CP (the only one), all the worlds, super powers system, if nothing happens, I will be able to achieve enlightenment and ascend in a few more worlds. The first level: Awakening (magical awakening) Second level: control (super control) The third energy level: transformation (fusion transformation) The fourth energy level: field (field of laws) Fifth energy level: natural disaster (throne of natural disaster) Sixth energy level: Divine wrath (God's wrath) The seventh energy level: authority (the authority of heaven) The eighth level: rules (world rules) Ninth energy level: Origin (origin of the universe) The tenth energy level: outside theory (outside of pluralism) As for the ability to ascend, the heroine is now at the control stage at most [cover face][cover face][cover face]

I like it very much. I hope there will be no misunderstanding later. The male protagonist dotes on the female protagonist very much. She is very sweet. I hope they will never be separated in this life.

It's so cool. The male protagonist loves the female protagonist so much. He controls space to empty the enemy's supplies. It's awesome [like] [like] [eat melon]

It's so beautiful. I hope they will be together forever, and I also hope that the male protagonist and the female protagonist can time travel together.

It's just that the descriptions of characters and other things such as scenery are too detailed, like a composition. You have to be patient and watch~ Others are okay, such as collecting supplies, taking revenge on bad guys without mercy, etc.

I really like the author's subject matter, but there are some parts that make me angry. I believe many treasures have the same feeling (I just finished watching the planes of time). I continue reading mostly because the subject matter is good. Two couples travel through time. There is space to stock up on supplies, hot weapons, and spiritual spring water. The different effects in each plane are very curious and attractive. The heroine's two superpowers are almost the same as none. I'm tired of watching them. I can't use them all the time. The mental superpowers are very strong. Not to mention she's level 8 and she's a post-apocalyptic heroine. I'm weak and my brain hurts. I feel helpless that I can't reach the screen. What a great theme. What a pity! What a pity! I originally wanted to give two stars (I was so angry that I commented that I wanted to give two stars), but considering the difficulty and sincerity of the author, it is better to give the author some encouragement. I hope that your writing style will be greatly improved. You can refer to more articles about big heroines. Many readers like this kind of heroine. It is very charming. Come on👏

The overall structure of the story is very good. Every time I write a story point, I don't have enough energy, so I can only use ordinary language to explain it. I can only use words to describe how powerful the male and female protagonists are, but I can't write out the details of how powerful they are.