Oh No! I’ve Become the Beloved Darling, and My Senior Brothers Are Fighting Over Me

It's okay. There's no problem with the overall development of the article. The writing style is above average. I'm currently reading Chapter 51. There's no big problem with the plot. But what the author should want to know is that kind of slap in the face moment. It's all about giving the heroine of the original text a hard time. But this blessing is too mediocre, so the slap in the face is not so refreshing and real. And because there are so many male protagonists who have step-by-step guides at once, the progress is very slow. There is no delicate writing to highlight why the male protagonist inexplicably likes the female protagonist. Because there are so many male protagonists who have no basic knowledge at once, so everyone's role is averaged. It's still not much, so I feel like there is no emotional basis. The male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist, and there are so many characters appearing at once. It's chapter 51. The characters' story lines, personality traits, and their cuteness are still not shown, so it doesn't feel so three-dimensional, but I think it will be better later on. But overall it's still good. The general context of the article is fine. Of course, what I said above is all about nitpicking and just explaining the shortcomings in detail. As long as you don't have a particularly strong sense of cleanliness and meticulousness in writing, this article should still be good [Like] [Like] As a digression, give the second senior brother some torture and let the child suffer a little. What I saw in front of me was gnashing my teeth [crying] [crying] [smile] [smile]

Chu You is very good, the senior brothers are very good, the master is very good, and the other direct descendants are also very good. They have all inherited the righteous style of their ancestors. They are very good-looking. Please do more work [note] It's just a little short. If I had known better, I would have saved a few more chapters [star]

It's good to watch, the np is really cool, the corners of the mouth are raised, and the intimate contact is there. The plot is a bit good but the writing is too flat. It's very refreshing to watch the young couple fall in love. I think of Yang Mi's past when she was passionately in love, and her whole face was radiant and happy.

Tied in one breath, wow! It's been a long time since I've seen so many stories about male protagonists with such good writing. The key is that the plot is smooth and not awkward at all. The updates are super, super, super stable. Basically, they are updated three or four times a day. I love it so much, I just love it! I really like Chu You, and the male protagonists who are currently appearing. I love them all. Currently, I love the little senior brother and the third senior brother the most.

It's quite good-looking and passionate, the villains didn't forcibly die and come back to life again, and the male protagonists have very distinct characters. There is no such thing as the one who appoints a main palace to take care of other men (I don't like it), nor the one where a weak husband can't eat meat and can only eat the strongest one with the highest status first. It feels like the emotional line, is it missing some heart-warming moments? It feels delicate and missing something. I think it may be missing a clear cutoff point where the relationship goes bad. It feels pretty good but not many people read it. I hope the author doesn't abandon it🥺

I really like this kind of fairy tale about brothers and sisters supporting each other and reviving the sect. It's still NPC hahaha. There's nothing wrong with the heroine. The only thing I don't like is why a good cultivating immortality has to include live broadcasting and rice circle elements. I almost didn't persuade me to quit during the sect competition. The language is also very modern. Although the heroine has also experienced modern times, this is cultivating immortality after all. I still hope that it can mainly focus on the brothers and sisters of Wujishan to focus on themselves and continue to experience.

Although the heroine is too aggrieved in front of the hero...

It's very interesting and very funny. It's a good read so far. But author, can you please take that Mu Ling'er offline quickly? She has too many roles and I find her annoyingòᆺó[Send Heart]

Like it! Big support for the author, a harem is a harem, we like them all, regardless of others, everyone has different tastes and preferences in books [Love] [Love]

I've only read a few dozen chapters, it's really good, I quite like it, but the data is too bad, and I don't know what to do. I'd like to give it a five-star rating first. I support it greatly. If it's too late to write every day, you can take a rest instead of writing every day. Wait for the data to come up and then update it carefully. This will attract readers who follow the update. I will also go to Shuhuang Square to tweet some time. Come on!