Raising Lin in Naruto with the Six Eyes from the Start

Beautiful, really redeeming. It was Ye Cang's death that made me a bit agitated as I just watched a novel with Ye Cang as the heroine... But I still like what the author wrote. The author's explanations of some techniques are also very reasonable. Anyway, it looks good

How can I put it, the rating is low but it looks good. Disadvantages: I think the reason for the low rating is that it doesn't feel exciting enough. There are no troughs, only crushing. There is a system but basically no one. The plot has no sense of the follow-up direction... And there is a sense of relaxation. Pros: The characters fit the plot very well and there is no OOC at all. The author knows where the pain points of Naruto fans are, and completely makes up for the plot's regrets (except for one damn person). The writing is good, it seems effortless at all, and the author will remind you of the key points of the plot without having to think too much about it.

Surprisingly, it's okay. The protagonist is well portrayed, the plot line is very smooth, and there's nothing too abrupt. I think the original characters are quite good, especially the description of the protagonist as a time traveler, which I think is pretty good. The difference between this book and other books for me is that the overall plot is very smooth, and there is a feeling that he is alive, which is a bit hard to describe. It is that this book has a different flavor when I read it. It gives me a feeling that I want to continue reading. I can't describe it. It is considered a high-quality fan fiction in Tomato. It's okay. It's a bit boring later, but I can accept it.

The author's writing style is very good. It can be seen that the author is a complete fan of Naruto. He is very familiar with the plots of Naruto and Boruto. With his own understanding and consideration, all the plots, even under the aura of cool writing, are written smoothly and smoothly without any abruptness. He must have put a lot of effort into studying the plot and characters. I'm a good boy. There are hundreds or thousands of episodes. Just thinking about it makes my scalp numb. It's amazing. Friends who like Naruto fan fiction can definitely read it, it is very cool, it is not ambiguous at all, there is no pressure at all, it is quite immersive, the tail is too cute, the positive side of the fan fiction is relaxed and pleasant to friends, it looks very comfortable. [I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry][I'm about to cry] The overall rhythm is controlled very well, and every aspect deserves five-star praise.

Yes, this book is seriously underestimated. I can't say it has no shortcomings, but they can be ignored. As for the advantages, well... The writing is good, the plot is also okay, and there are also things about ninjutsu and fighting. I also enjoyed reading it. I personally think The biggest advantage is that this book is written with a strong Naruto feel. Nowadays, many authors write Naruto fan fiction, and it feels like they are all wearing the skin of Naruto. In fact, it is in a fantasy style, with a thick pretense of slap-in-the-face routines. Most of them are unreadable. In short, I give this book a thumbs up.

I've read 6 chapters and 70 chapters so far. I can give this book a 4.5⭐. I haven't seen the kind of plot that makes my scalp numb. It's just that my strength has grown too fast. Invincible. The other thing may be that the emotional line is weird. I don't know if the author is a woman. The writing is a bit too feminine, but it's pretty good.

Overall, it's pretty good. For me personally, I don't care whether it has a single female protagonist or not. Moreover, there is no situation where the protagonist's combat power is suppressed, and the protagonist's character is also easy to accept.

Chapter 58: Killing through the Hidden Sand Village, sent directly to Luo Sha and Ye Cang. I would like to call him the fastest legend in the ninja world.

No poisonous points, no conspiracy theories, just the invincible life of Mr. Yue. Generally speaking, it is relatively dull. After all, they are invincible. The descriptions of daily life and battles are okay, and there are many outstanding points. All in all, definitely worth a look! It's a pity that the author can't write a side story, I also want to watch the daily life

Excellent book, especially one that does not hide its strength and always has a trump card. If you have any questions, just ask instead of just saying "Maybe it's an illusion" and let it pass. Then something unexpected happens. Hold on and read this book. The battle scenes and abilities are very good, but don't drag on about emotional issues. The longer you don't talk about it, the greater the damage will be. In a world where great power is concentrated in one body, emotions are not easy to drag on. Isn't it a good idea to confess? And don't forget Tsunade, don't say anything about Jiraiya. He hates Jiraiya. He is disgusted just by being a voyeur. Not to mention that if the daughter is more vicious and the relationship is more decisive, the rating will go up.