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It's a rare good book. The low rating is mostly due to the audience. Most of the Tomato readers like to read without thinking and enjoy it all the time. But by the standards of the starting point, this book is a bit thin. The world view and characters are decent but a little bit crude. It's a light novel type story. I saw a lot of echoes of otherworldly dramas, Su Qing, jobless, and the author's own style, but it feels a bit serious. It's an adventure, with laughter, tears, heaviness, thickness, and perversion. It's a more real world. The author should have written a long outline. It has its own rhythm, but the characterization is not interesting, and it lacks a little bit of human characteristics. Most of the people in the story are rational and overwhelmingly emotional. They are very traditional characters with facial makeup. After watching it for a long time, it feels like the NPCs are set to change their skins and perform on the stage, which will be a bit boring. However, the plot arrangement is quite reasonable. Reading this book is like drinking tea. Although it is very bland, it will have a sweet aftertaste. The rhythm of the plot is quite similar to Jobless. It is a slow-burn type. I have read Chapter 140 so far. I am looking forward to the climax [smile] Come on, author! However, I feel that the title of the book is almost meaningless. Since it is not a brainless novel, I can choose a name that is more in line with the story. My personal suggestion: "Unsystematic Reincarnation in Another World" This name does have the meaning of attracting jobless fans. After all, this book is indeed a slow-paced alien theme. In fact, you don't need to worry too much about being in the shadow of jobless, because even if you don't take this name, everyone knows what the theme is. If this book becomes popular in the future, the author may not be able to write in his own style, just like Reincarnation Paradise. "Became a god after being thrown into another world by an irresponsible system" "The system is gone, but not completely gone"

Friends, if you have lost interest in those fast-paced cool novels and are looking for a book in which the protagonist has no talents or cheats, and is a pure ordinary person who makes his way into a different world through hard work, this book is just right. Like the yam segments on a table of big fish and meat, or the piece of pineapple on the barbecue plate. Quickly cool down your mouth, brake suddenly, and experience the absolute slow pace. The author's original intention is very good. You can see the sense of design and interesting details in the first few chapters and throughout the text, giving people a very real experience. Moreover, the characters he writes are relatively "human", and an NPC can have both evil and good sides. But a realistic enough plot has another drawback. After all, this is a novel, and it needs some excitement and a hook to keep people reading. Slow-burning articles also need to have a small climax, otherwise it will be difficult for readers to take part in the story. As you can see, the system hangs up earlier. The motivation for readers to continue reading is that the system returns to the draw of tens of thousands of effort points, ushering in a small climax. They all used that as a hook, and the system failed. The slave starts and the beggar's start are basically the kind of way where you want to advance first and then suppress it, both of which serve the cool points later. And generally speaking, one of these depressing scenes is enough. If there is no great excitement, writing both of them will easily make people quit. But fortunately, the author is aware of this, and the subsequent plots are still improving. I hope it will get better and better, and I will continue to read it.

The writing is as excellent as the previous book, the plot is fascinating, and the protagonist's character is also very good. I hope that the protagonist's friends can always be the protagonist's help in the future. Don't betray me. Come on.

Generally speaking, it is average. The story is average and there are some poisonous points, but it is not that bad. It is good to be able to calm down and read it. But if I read two chapters a day, it will definitely not work. I will wait until it reaches a million words. I really couldn't stand it in the early stages, so I might as well change the title to The Passion of Mel

The protagonist's adventure in another world, the inspirational protagonist, the supporting characters are rich in writing, and the world is huge. It's not black and white, but constantly understanding the world and constantly improving yourself. Slow pace, focus on details.

Author, all your books I have read are very interesting. You are my favorite author among the novels I have read for so many years. I hope you can keep writing.

When you first enter the world in the book, there are no overwhelming magic battles or thrilling adventures. Everything is unfolding slowly. The protagonist's rebirth is not accompanied by Goldfinger's Sturm und Drang, but with ignorance and curiosity about a new life, stepping into this strange and familiar land. As of now, the protagonist is only at level 20 and is cursed. I think it is still very interesting. The plot of the slow-paced novel pays more attention to details, but the author's new chapter will have typos and omissions. I haven't read the others carefully. Overall, it is still an interesting novel worth reading. Urgent, urgent, the update is too slow. I really want to put the author into a dark room and give him a 500-chapter blow.

Large cup on the upper side Why five stars? Because the rating is lower than I expected () Let's talk about the shortcomings first. In fact, I almost suspect it is my own problem. It is the rendering of the atmosphere. The objective and rational text always feels a bit lacking in atmosphere. For example, in the scene where the protagonist escapes from the imperial city, some people are happy and some are sad. Akai is happy when he draws his sword, and the protagonist is nervous when he confronts people. This feeling of not asking for separation but having no choice but to say goodbye deserves better expression. There is also the expression of characters. For example, the words and actions of the little teacher's tsundere are not enough. They need to be expressed in appearance and demeanor. There is a lot of room for improvement in this aspect of writing. The advantage is that I can't see any problems with the worldview and plot logic at the moment (I haven't seen enough and I have some objections). The protagonist's growth basically does not rely on the system, so I am very curious about how the system will be dealt with in the future. Overall, it is a slow-burning novel that fits the title of the book. I recommend reading it and hope we can encourage each other [laughs]

My favorite slow-burning novel, the hang-up is not particularly big, the system can basically be said to be useless.

The author's level remains the same, so please give it a try! We believe in you! Let's start the protagonist's adventure! I hope he can find a home and attachment to her, and so does the author!

The opening live broadcast was a bit toxic, but the subsequent plot was much better than Long Ertian. The love triangle of the scumbag archer, Angie and the Cavalier who can't gag Master Cleary, who trains his apprentices to seek proof of their instincts . There is also the view on the apostles. The opening introduction is an ancient legend, a legend as old as the dragon. At more than 2,000 pages, it introduces the King of Unity, the Returners, and the War of Gods. . . . Connected with the power that said the apostles were gods. I also want to see the return of the forces of the unified king who failed in the God War. This also corresponds to the fact that the apostle is close to death before he can be crowned. The introduction is only part of the content. At first, I thought it was a different world or sword and magic. But most of those who are actually under the nobility will continue to suffer under the nobility until the protagonist's strength reaches the palace level, that is, level 70. Although our perspective is Meier's personal growth experience and Nigen, many contradictions in the background and even details are caused by the nobility. The royal family here is the largest noble. At present, the things being done by the nobles are He was captured and made into a black slave. I only know this one and can't remember the rest, I guess. Anyway, it might only be level 40 or 50 when I reach 1 million words. The author said that I can only take off when I reach 200w or almost 130w, that is, 4 months later, the college entrance examination will be about the same in June, and I will fly after the exam.

The book "Zhaobayu" is really interesting, but I don't know if the male protagonist is a brave man, but the plot is very interesting. Great, come on! Don't let others tell you that the book is not good and just stop reading it. It's obviously very good, but some small flaws are being pointed out and magnified. I still hope that everyone can watch it rationally. They are always so picky, so why don't you just stop reading the book and have some opinions? Don't always be influenced by others. Others' comments cannot replace your own understanding.

It's nice to watch, and the world view is well outlined. The main character is blamed a lot. He starts as a gangster kid. He kills monsters as an adventurer since he was a child. He is kidnapped as a slave, buys a mine, is trapped in a dungeon, is almost obliterated by an apostle, is chased by a ceiling-level red dragon, and is cursed to hell to elbow a demon. Mel: I'm so lucky to have you as my author.

It's chapter 133 now, and the author hasn't updated it for two days (#ﾟДﾟ). Overall, it is a very slow-heating one and does not feel in line with the mainstream of tomatoes. I came here from the last book Apocalypse because I like the author's style better. I think this book is pretty good. The protagonist grows up without cheats. Maybe there will be a sense of redemption later on? In short, this book can't be rated lower than seven points, right? Chapter 431, It's so strange, it has a unique attraction In Chapter 645, the protagonist may want to realize the wish of the King of Unification, so it seems that there should be a lot of plot behind it. Is the protagonist's fast pace in the previous part a foreshadowing for this? Chapter 693, this feels like I can write at least 2 million words, that's great

It's okay, I don't get stronger very fast, and I'm still a child. I feel like I want to write a long epic, which is quite similar to the jobless progress [face covering]

This book is very well written, but if you like to read cool stories, you can skip it. The long early stage may make you give this book a bad review. I haven't seen this type of novel for a long time. The protagonist of this book has a three-dimensional view and knows what to do and what not to do. In the front, he will not do it because of his ability. Bullying the weak, but at the same time he is not a good person. It is comfortable and can make you feel the portrayal of a world. This book can be read in one go, especially the story of the King of Unification. I think of the story of Emperor Russell in Lord of Mysteries. It is very well written and you can read it with confidence.

It is similar to a slow-paced light novel. Personally I still like it very much. Unlike most Tomato novels, it is not particularly enjoyable, but the plot and rhythm are very good. If you want to depict the growth of the protagonist, you will definitely experience setbacks, which are the so-called "toxic points". This is also very reasonable. The author does not abuse the protagonist excessively, so it feels okay. The shortcoming is that there is a lack of transition and foreshadowing for some important events or major changes in the novel. Some foreshadowing needs to be written in detail and cannot be skipped. There can also be more psychological descriptions of the characters to add more internal tension, so that many characters will not appear too calm. For example, Master Cleary would feel more charming if he were described in more depth.

Good-looking, good-looking. For my first growing book, the plot and characters are very detailed, and the attributes of the protagonist can also be seen at critical moments. Even though I am not very clear about the skill points, it has no impact on the story, and the protagonist's strength growth is also in line with the development of the story. Finally, I hope that the author will not ban all space backpacks, otherwise I really feel that Mel is really a bit unlucky [Thoughts]

The story is very good, the direction is also very good, it is very comfortable to watch, and it has a clear goal. If you can stick to it, it will definitely be another masterpiece.

I have listened to more than 700 chapters on Changting. Overall, it is a good book. However, there are three or four harems later. The plot values ​​are contrary to my inner emotions, so I can't read it anymore. But this is just my personal feeling. The actual situation is up to you to read for yourself.

Personally, I think it's good to read, mainly because I like slow-paced books. Some parts are toxic, so I automatically ignored them. After all, there are only a few slow-paced different world books. Stealing things from nobles can actually be regarded as attacking landlords (after all, would workers sympathize with capitalists?) The reason for sharing things is because the male protagonist has the same problem as these beggars. Giving food to eat will expose this matter, but it will be ignored if it is not exposed anyway. It's really strange not to do the laundry yourself, but I skipped it since my financial situation wasn't very tight. Generally speaking, it's really good-looking. If it's poisonous, it's poisonous to different people. Anyway, for me, as long as I don't have serious problems with my outlook on life, or if I'm gay or a harem stallion, I'll automatically skip it.

It's very fun to watch, with a slow pace, and you can follow the protagonist to explore the world step by step, and develop into a quasi-protagonist (the system is basically useless, the only plug-in is a 100-block warehouse). It will be good to read for a while, but once you catch up with the latest chapter, the viewing experience will drop sharply - it is too slow, but the plot is still the type of slowly unfolding, and I am really anxious to watch it. After hundreds of chapters, it is estimated that the first major chapter has just ended (the protagonist ends his daily life as an adventurer and officially starts school). My personal guess is that the next major chapter will be an academy chapter (because it was mentioned in the early stage that the academy has a B-game plot, so it is time to bring it out after so many chapters have been buried) , and then there will probably be a Brave Chapter after graduating from the academy (the protagonist probably won't join the Brave Team, but that doesn't mean he won't interact with the Brave Team). After the Brave Chapter, it will probably be the turn of the Gods Chapter or the plot of the King of Unity (after all, the protagonist is also the reincarnation of the King of Unity).

It's okay. It's just that some plots seem to be written based on what comes to mind and then try to suppress the protagonist's combat power. It's fun but not completely satisfying [face covering]

This book is very good-looking, with very positive views, and there are no poisonous points. There are a thousand Hamlets in the eyes of a thousand people. I say that there is no poisonous point for me, but everyone has different tastes, so there should be differences in tastes. Maybe I'm not a good person, and I find it awkward to read these novels with very upright views, but this is my reason. Because I don't like this kind of novel with special views, but I can't deny this novel. Maybe it will suit most people's tastes but not mine, so I didn't read it for a long time, but I will still objectively evaluate the content I have read. Generally speaking, it is good.

After reading 70%, the pace and story of this book were unexpectedly comfortable and surprised me before entering school. It felt very different from the world without being overly inflated by the system. It gave me a feeling of constantly exploring the world. After arriving at the academy, supporting female characters kept coming out, and some simple classic plots were OK, which I loved to see, but later on it was obvious that the author had improved the pace. The protagonist was coerced to constantly focus on improving his combat power, and it expanded dramatically in one picture. If the previous pace was more than 10 chapters, it would only last a month, but now it is 3 Chapter 4 is just one year, and all kinds of monsters and monsters have come out very quickly. It's a pity that I don't have the pace to take my time. If I could slowly develop from country to country, I could actually write a lot and have a more complete sense of the world. Of course, this is my personal opinion. Several of the protagonists want to do so-called poisonous points. It can be seen that the author deliberately wrote the protagonist to be intellectually disabled. It is impossible for a living person to live in the world with all aspects of life, and the protagonist is not the reincarnation of an intellectual. Of course, there is a slight lack of foreshadowing in the subsequent transformation of the protagonist not wanting Xianyu, and the narrative before and after the transformation is very elliptical and fast. It is really a pity, but it does not prevent the overall story from being a good Western fantasy novel.

Give four stars and leave room for the author to continue working hard [smile][like] It's a good novel. The protagonist is independent. It's better than an extreme cool novel, although it's still a kind of cool novel.

It's good to read. There are some shortcomings in the front but the writing in the back is quite good. Also, the male protagonist is not the main body training person. Looking at the title of the book, I thought it was mainly about body training.

The author originally wanted to write a slow-paced western fantasy adventure with a large world view. At present, it seems that it may be because my grades are relatively poor, but I want to start a new book. From the seventh volume to Hell, the rhythm begins to take off. Upgrading is very slow in the front, but it only takes a few strokes to reach level 60 later. It is estimated that it will be finished in no more than 1,000 pictures. When I grow up with the witch and her companions, there will be very little daily life, and there will be no more daily adventures. The pits about the apostles, gods and unified kings were also hurriedly filled in, and then the flowers were finished. I'm still chasing it now, just because I want to see a perfect ending.

Don't look at the bad reviews below. They will criticize you crazily if they don't make them happy. It's normal for the slow-burning novels to be less enjoyable in the early stage. After all, the physical age is there. Spending more money on other things is also to shape the image. But if you want to read a pure Western fantasy novel, you can leave early. Let's continue reading first. If there are any particularly bad points, we will comment later.

It's hard to see this kind of article on Tomato. It's in line with what I personally like to read. It's also slow-paced. Roots, roots, roots.