Furry: The Beginning of the Moon

I have finished reading the 30 chapters I have written. The writing style is indeed very close to that of Xing Zhuan, Huan Yue, Moon Cake, Zero Evil and other beasts and beasts. The character settings are the same but different. The villains such as Jiao Nu have online IQs and natural emotional expressions. I look forward to the author's next masterpiece [Sending Hearts] The young author uses imaginative writing skills to depict a huge world view of time and space, spanning the long river of time. Will the moon still shine? Multiple sets of cp sugar knives are mixed, the background is a mystery, and it is meaningful. In this book, we witness the beauty of the moon, the harmonious life of mooncakes and the phantom moon, We witnessed the birth of Yue, which was a desperate situation for everyone to survive in the face of the pursuit of the phantom realm. We have witnessed the love of the moon, knowing that misfortune is coming but still willing to stand up. Starting from Dongshan at the beginning of the month, wandering around for thousands of lives I hope the young author can write more excellent chapters [Sending Hearts]

The writing style hits my radio waves! Haokan! The plot is very in-depth and worth digging into, so stay tuned!

In the article, the author's prologue uses future events to arouse readers' interest in reading, so that readers can follow Huanyue back to the past and witness this story. The content of the article triggers thoughts about reality. In the story, the author borrowed the words of Huanyue to explain his understanding of the hobby of writing novels: "Of course it is different. After all, novels are what we imagine. We write ourselves into novels and live in another dimension in another form. "Write you and me into novels, record our lives, and make them into stories. Let this beautiful memory jump and dance on the paper. Show the beauty to yourself and others and watch yourself come alive in another dimension. Real life will also become full of surprises and hope." In line with the actual character logic. The author has a perfect grasp of the character phenomenon (that is, the character image is three-dimensional), and the character logic is pleasing to the eye. Excellent language. The author's language is humorous and does not use overly written expressions. At the same time, excellent side descriptions make the atmosphere more perfect. Due to the above factors, readers can be immersed in the author's writing, and the world is written "alive". The stories in the book are interspersed with some past events, making it easier for readers to understand the worldview. Finally, the author's plot includes both sugar and knives, and all of this has been foreshadowed in the story. Interested readers can find it on their own. In short, no matter in terms of writing techniques, language characteristics, or character creation, this is undoubtedly a good book. I hope the author will continue to do so in future writing, and I also hope that more and more people will read this book. Note: This review has been deleted and modified based on the original review. Correction: The worldview is "alive" → The worldview is clear

The characters have distinct characteristics and the plot is a mixed bag. The author also interacts intensively with readers, which is a good work! ୧(๑•̀⌄•́๑)૭ (I hope the author will continue to work hard! Move towards a better future!)

I have finished reading the twenty chapters I have written so far. The writing is very good and smooth, the plot is also very attractive to me, and the writing style is also good. It is just that leaving a little gap between paragraphs will make the impression much better. However, I still hope that Huanyue will produce better and better articles.

Ouch↑owoo↓owoo↑ow~ This novel mainly portrays the deep friendship between the two male protagonists Huanyue and Yuebing, and shows the courage to never give up and face difficulties in the face of the invisible darkness. The supporting characters are also remarkable. Huan Xing's innocence, Ling Sin's thoughtfulness, and Song Yan's concentration are all worthy of careful consideration. The story tells about the changes in time and space, and the unchanging true love. The dark night fades away, but the bright moon remains forever...

Not bad, good, I like it

The sugar knife goes hand in hand. When it is sweet, it is harder to press the corner of the mouth than AK. When the knife is used, the little pearl's eyes will fall out. Good book.

It looks good. Qwq Huanyue's writing style can be improved~ I'm optimistic about you~ Come on^0^~

Come on! It will get better🌹🌹